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XCetron
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Plexa
Aotearoa39261 Posts
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LosingID8
CA10830 Posts
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LosingID8
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Nazarene
Denmark996 Posts
I can't see the last pic though ; < | ||
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Spenguin
Australia3316 Posts
 5/5 ! | ||
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nemY
United States3119 Posts
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MasterReY
Germany2708 Posts
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HamerD
United Kingdom1922 Posts
If TL can encourage people to make such huge first posts, desperately hiding their TL name with a pimp 1 letter-er, it's pretty encouraging shit xD TL hwaiting! | ||
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anotak
United States1537 Posts
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Ack1027
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Agavond
448 Posts
On June 12 2008 17:15 Ack1027 wrote: The story was good until you continued to use the hyena comparison. It got old real fast =/ I think the story concludes better with the comparison, gives it more of a imaginative premise. If the story were to end with a idealistic "kid grows up and goes to college" then sure enough the reader will lose that imagination that the author had created in the beginning. | ||
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Agavond
448 Posts
On June 12 2008 17:15 Ack1027 wrote: The story was good until you continued to use the hyena comparison. It got old real fast =/ I think the story concludes better with the comparison, gives it more of a imaginative premise. If the story were to end with a idealistic "kid grows up and goes to college" then sure enough the reader will lose that imagination that the author had created in the beginning. | ||
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evanthebouncy!
United States12796 Posts
Good luck! | ||
RaGe
Belgium9950 Posts
On June 12 2008 15:45 Plexa wrote: go staff powerrrrrr | ||
Beyonder
Netherlands15103 Posts
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Energies
Australia3225 Posts
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alffla
Hong Kong20321 Posts
so ur actually someone else on tl or soomething? | ||
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Equinox_kr
United States7395 Posts
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