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Okay. I'm a sophomore in college. To make a long story short, I'm in the process of wooing a girl that I think is pretty cool. I wrote a poem about her just as something to do, but I don't plan on giving it to her for a good long while. Here it be:
Intensity has found its gaze,
For when you're looking back at me
I can see the clarity
Forged throughout your pensive days.
You've tasted love's enraptured drink,
I only have imaginings
Of ideal love and wondrous things
That youthful minds do often think.
And though this love is but a seed,
To you, it may seem just a chance,
But I imagine we will dance
When we are old; in time we'll see.
If I fail to win your heart,
I guarantee it will never be
For lack of love or sincerity,
Which I have felt right from the start.
Poll: Is this lame?
(Vote): No, it is nice.
(Vote): It is okay.
(Vote): You sir, have failed hard.
 
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a bit awkward imo :s
unless you give it to her after you're with her :d
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I don't plan on giving the poem to her until I have known her a good long while, if I give it to her at all.
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EDIT: DISREGARD THIS BULLSHIT
+ Show Spoiler +Please don't ever give her the poem T_T Not that it sucks terribly, but...
Unless she is some sort of pervert or underground dungeon master wielding dual 46-sided dice, the girl will just be like "Wtf?" and try to find a nice way to not tell you how lame you are. Although the idea is nice, it's creepy and old-fashioned to the point of not being even slightly cute anymore, and if it's not in a relationship, that would be the end of your contact with the girl, FOREVER.
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I love it, give it to her asap
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On October 25 2007 08:08 fanatacist wrote:
Please don't ever give her the poem T_T Not that it sucks terribly, but...
Unless she is some sort of pervert or underground dungeon master wielding dual 46-sided dice, the girl will just be like "Wtf?" and try to find a nice way to not tell you how lame you are. Although the idea is nice, it's creepy and old-fashioned to the point of not being even slightly cute anymore, and if it's not in a relationship, that would be the end of your contact with the girl, FOREVER.
It was just a thought. I wasn't hell bent on giving it to her anyway. Thanks for the advice.
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On October 25 2007 08:15 {ToT}Strafe wrote:
I love it, give it to her asap
I see what you mean! Wow, I just read between the lines for the first time. DAMN I feel so stupid >: Thanks for explaining it to me on IRC Strafe.
I can't brand this as normal poetry... Thank god I haven't voted yet. I am all for it. Sorry for my post earlier. Good luck n_n <3 I'm sure she'll love you back.
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On October 25 2007 08:17 obloquy wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 08:08 fanatacist wrote:
Please don't ever give her the poem T_T Not that it sucks terribly, but...
Unless she is some sort of pervert or underground dungeon master wielding dual 46-sided dice, the girl will just be like "Wtf?" and try to find a nice way to not tell you how lame you are. Although the idea is nice, it's creepy and old-fashioned to the point of not being even slightly cute anymore, and if it's not in a relationship, that would be the end of your contact with the girl, FOREVER. It was just a thought. I wasn't hell bent on giving it to her anyway. Thanks for the advice.
Disregard that cynical bullshit >: I was just feeling depressed - I didn't really read the poem for what it's worth. Give it a shot - Strafe is a beast at picking up women, so you should listen to his advice doubly over mine. You should completely ignore all that noise that I said before too.
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definitely go for it, girls love that shit
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Okay, okay, fuck. It was a lame idea. Now I'm definitely NOT giving it to her. Nice try though, fanatacist...ass.
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What? Don't be a jew and give it you selfish bastard
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On October 25 2007 08:28 obloquy wrote:
Okay, okay, fuck. It was a lame idea. Now I'm definitely NOT giving it to her. Nice try though, fanatacist...ass.
... I say something mean and you thank me, I realize my mistake and you call me an ass? u_u I don't deserve that kind of disrespect. I felt bad for what I had ignorantly said, went so far as to re-iterate my apologies and edit my first post, and you give me this? What the fuck man :/
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Kennigit
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DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GIVE HER THIS POEM. ITS A NICE GESTURE BUT ONE THAT WILL RESULT IN YOUR INSTANT FAILURE AT ANY CHANCE YOU HAVE WITH HER. HEED MY WARNINGS!!!!
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On October 25 2007 08:38 Kennigit wrote:
DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GIVE HER THIS POEM. ITS A NICE GESTURE BUT ONE THAT WILL RESULT IN YOUR INSTANT FAILURE AT ANY CHANCE YOU HAVE WITH HER. HEED MY WARNINGS!!!!
Yeah, I realize. Don't worry, I'm not.
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On October 25 2007 08:38 Kennigit wrote:
DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GIVE HER THIS POEM. ITS A NICE GESTURE BUT ONE THAT WILL RESULT IN YOUR INSTANT FAILURE AT ANY CHANCE YOU HAVE WITH HER. HEED MY WARNINGS!!!!
T_T Dude.
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If you give her that poem, you will, without ANY doubt, NEVER get to touch her. Follow Kennigits advice, it isn't bolded/caps/red/underlined for nothing.
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Kennigit, the all-wise and all-knowing
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You all missed the point u_u; Sigh.
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On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh.
With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point.
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On October 25 2007 08:47 obloquy wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh. With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point.
I only got the idea after I saw Strafe's post, and you had already seen/quoted my first post, what the hell could I do :/ It'd be funny to see people actually learning from their own mistakes and not taking the word of a bunch of people on the internet. Oh well, the gene pool is tainted once again.
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On October 25 2007 08:52 fanatacist wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 08:47 obloquy wrote:On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh. With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point. I only got the idea after I saw Strafe's post, and you had already seen/quoted my first post, what the hell could I do :/ It'd be funny to see people actually learning from their own mistakes and not taking the word of a bunch of people on the internet. Oh well, the gene pool is tainted once again.
You must be a sad little azn nerd. gl
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On October 25 2007 10:21 kdog3683 wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 08:52 fanatacist wrote:On October 25 2007 08:47 obloquy wrote:On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh. With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point. I only got the idea after I saw Strafe's post, and you had already seen/quoted my first post, what the hell could I do :/ It'd be funny to see people actually learning from their own mistakes and not taking the word of a bunch of people on the internet. Oh well, the gene pool is tainted once again. You must be a sad little azn nerd. gl
Lol. I won't even grace that with a response. But I do hope you get temp banned or something for being so obtuse and ignorant.
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I say give it. If you're too shy to do it, PM it to her
She has a tl net account, right?
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On October 25 2007 10:26 fanatacist wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 10:21 kdog3683 wrote:On October 25 2007 08:52 fanatacist wrote:On October 25 2007 08:47 obloquy wrote:On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh. With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point. I only got the idea after I saw Strafe's post, and you had already seen/quoted my first post, what the hell could I do :/ It'd be funny to see people actually learning from their own mistakes and not taking the word of a bunch of people on the internet. Oh well, the gene pool is tainted once again. You must be a sad little azn nerd. gl Lol. I won't even grace that with a response. But I do hope you get temp banned or something for being so obtuse and ignorant.
Didn't you just respond? =p
Yeah, don't give it. If you don't believe us though, you could make an even better thread by giving it to her and posting the results, cuz im sure it would be amusing
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On October 25 2007 13:50 Purind wrote:
I say give it. If you're too shy to do it, PM it to her
She has a tl net account, right?
this made me laugh so hard
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Calgary25987 Posts
On October 25 2007 10:26 fanatacist wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 10:21 kdog3683 wrote:On October 25 2007 08:52 fanatacist wrote:On October 25 2007 08:47 obloquy wrote:On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh. With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point. I only got the idea after I saw Strafe's post, and you had already seen/quoted my first post, what the hell could I do :/ It'd be funny to see people actually learning from their own mistakes and not taking the word of a bunch of people on the internet. Oh well, the gene pool is tainted once again. You must be a sad little azn nerd. gl Lol. I won't even grace that with a response. But I do hope you get temp banned or something for being so obtuse and ignorant.
Why would he get banned? You ARE acting like a nerd. Stop.
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This was 2 days ago, and I basically exited the conversation... I don't see the reason for all these posts.
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