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Okay. I'm a sophomore in college. To make a long story short, I'm in the process of wooing a girl that I think is pretty cool. I wrote a poem about her just as something to do, but I don't plan on giving it to her for a good long while. Here it be:
Intensity has found its gaze,
For when you're looking back at me
I can see the clarity
Forged throughout your pensive days.
You've tasted love's enraptured drink,
I only have imaginings
Of ideal love and wondrous things
That youthful minds do often think.
And though this love is but a seed,
To you, it may seem just a chance,
But I imagine we will dance
When we are old; in time we'll see.
If I fail to win your heart,
I guarantee it will never be
For lack of love or sincerity,
Which I have felt right from the start.
Poll: Is this lame?
(Vote): No, it is nice.
(Vote): It is okay.
(Vote): You sir, have failed hard.
 
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a bit awkward imo :s
unless you give it to her after you're with her :d
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I don't plan on giving the poem to her until I have known her a good long while, if I give it to her at all.
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EDIT: DISREGARD THIS BULLSHIT
+ Show Spoiler +Please don't ever give her the poem T_T Not that it sucks terribly, but...
Unless she is some sort of pervert or underground dungeon master wielding dual 46-sided dice, the girl will just be like "Wtf?" and try to find a nice way to not tell you how lame you are. Although the idea is nice, it's creepy and old-fashioned to the point of not being even slightly cute anymore, and if it's not in a relationship, that would be the end of your contact with the girl, FOREVER.
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I love it, give it to her asap
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On October 25 2007 08:08 fanatacist wrote:
Please don't ever give her the poem T_T Not that it sucks terribly, but...
Unless she is some sort of pervert or underground dungeon master wielding dual 46-sided dice, the girl will just be like "Wtf?" and try to find a nice way to not tell you how lame you are. Although the idea is nice, it's creepy and old-fashioned to the point of not being even slightly cute anymore, and if it's not in a relationship, that would be the end of your contact with the girl, FOREVER.
It was just a thought. I wasn't hell bent on giving it to her anyway. Thanks for the advice.
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On October 25 2007 08:15 {ToT}Strafe wrote:
I love it, give it to her asap
I see what you mean! Wow, I just read between the lines for the first time. DAMN I feel so stupid >: Thanks for explaining it to me on IRC Strafe.
I can't brand this as normal poetry... Thank god I haven't voted yet. I am all for it. Sorry for my post earlier. Good luck n_n <3 I'm sure she'll love you back.
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On October 25 2007 08:17 obloquy wrote:Show nested quote +On October 25 2007 08:08 fanatacist wrote:
Please don't ever give her the poem T_T Not that it sucks terribly, but...
Unless she is some sort of pervert or underground dungeon master wielding dual 46-sided dice, the girl will just be like "Wtf?" and try to find a nice way to not tell you how lame you are. Although the idea is nice, it's creepy and old-fashioned to the point of not being even slightly cute anymore, and if it's not in a relationship, that would be the end of your contact with the girl, FOREVER. It was just a thought. I wasn't hell bent on giving it to her anyway. Thanks for the advice.
Disregard that cynical bullshit >: I was just feeling depressed - I didn't really read the poem for what it's worth. Give it a shot - Strafe is a beast at picking up women, so you should listen to his advice doubly over mine. You should completely ignore all that noise that I said before too.
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definitely go for it, girls love that shit
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Okay, okay, fuck. It was a lame idea. Now I'm definitely NOT giving it to her. Nice try though, fanatacist...ass.
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What? Don't be a jew and give it you selfish bastard
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On October 25 2007 08:28 obloquy wrote:
Okay, okay, fuck. It was a lame idea. Now I'm definitely NOT giving it to her. Nice try though, fanatacist...ass.
... I say something mean and you thank me, I realize my mistake and you call me an ass? u_u I don't deserve that kind of disrespect. I felt bad for what I had ignorantly said, went so far as to re-iterate my apologies and edit my first post, and you give me this? What the fuck man :/
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Kennigit
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DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GIVE HER THIS POEM. ITS A NICE GESTURE BUT ONE THAT WILL RESULT IN YOUR INSTANT FAILURE AT ANY CHANCE YOU HAVE WITH HER. HEED MY WARNINGS!!!!
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On October 25 2007 08:38 Kennigit wrote:
DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GIVE HER THIS POEM. ITS A NICE GESTURE BUT ONE THAT WILL RESULT IN YOUR INSTANT FAILURE AT ANY CHANCE YOU HAVE WITH HER. HEED MY WARNINGS!!!!
Yeah, I realize. Don't worry, I'm not.
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On October 25 2007 08:38 Kennigit wrote:
DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GIVE HER THIS POEM. ITS A NICE GESTURE BUT ONE THAT WILL RESULT IN YOUR INSTANT FAILURE AT ANY CHANCE YOU HAVE WITH HER. HEED MY WARNINGS!!!!
T_T Dude.
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If you give her that poem, you will, without ANY doubt, NEVER get to touch her. Follow Kennigits advice, it isn't bolded/caps/red/underlined for nothing.
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Kennigit, the all-wise and all-knowing
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You all missed the point u_u; Sigh.
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On October 25 2007 08:45 fanatacist wrote:
You all missed the point u_u; Sigh.
With all your dumbass attempts to get me to fuck up, I sure as hell didn't miss the point.
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