I released a music video.

DjKniteX

United States245 Posts

April 25 2017 02:35 GMT

So incase you guys didn't know, I'm an alternative hip hop artist pretty much rapping about being yourself, video games, broken hearts, girls.. and well, more about girls.

I took a break from Starcraft this weekend to hang out with a girl, get a haircut, and edit this music video so I'll be back trying to stream later this week. Anyways if you guys are interested it's here.

background:
I wanted to do a goofy music video where there's two random people in random masks dancing stupidly in the background but I couldn't find anyone with masks so I decided to do it while I was getting a haircut and this is the result of that.

Entertaining

Canada793 Posts

April 27 2017 18:45 GMT

I didn't enjoy it. Some reasons why:

You have no attitude. You basically just talk to a beat. I'd be hard-pressed to even call this rapping.

The video was literally you getting a haircut. You don't even rap during the video.

The music was atrocious. Was that a flute?

The song lyrics have no point. You don't tell a story. You don't attempt to move the listener. You just.. talk.

Piste

6183 Posts

April 28 2017 03:47 GMT

You look good with your new haircut.
Better than average rapping and I like the sample you're using.

DjKniteX

United States245 Posts

May 02 2017 03:50 GMT

On April 28 2017 03:45 Entertaining wrote:
I didn't enjoy it. Some reasons why:

You have no attitude. You basically just talk to a beat. I'd be hard-pressed to even call this rapping.

The video was literally you getting a haircut. You don't even rap during the video.

The music was atrocious. Was that a flute?

The song lyrics have no point. You don't tell a story. You don't attempt to move the listener. You just.. talk.

Talk Music is actually one of the genres I write in, I guess the correct term would be Spoken Word Music, but yeah you're not wrong lol

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