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Well, a poem about a girl. It follows the progression of our relationship. Fuck feelings.
you catch my eye
i touch you on the shoulder
you don't even try
your gaze crushes me like a boulder
i have you in my arms
i'm locked into fear
i used my charms
to kick you into gear
in another man you have confided
bruised, but i will not relent
it seems your heart has divided
more pain i will not prevent
you tell me that you desire us platonic
your actions are choking your word
my feelings become stirred in a tonic
my intentions too, are blurred
they say us together is a sin
but my love you have been stealing
this must be the happiest i've been
but i am more than a feeling
my dear, you must make a decision
please spare my feelings no longer
all or nothing with deadly precision
choose what will make us stronger
 
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TLADT24920 Posts
A great poem and well written. Hopefully things work out for the best in the end!
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Awww cute poem even though I didn't necessarily like it as a poem in and of itself ><
Best of luck, yo.
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So if I understand correctly you met this girl you liked who ended up with another guy and you still hope she will chose you?
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great poem..
feeling somethig alike tight now xd
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Awesome!
I knew this was something out of the ordinary when there were 800 views and only 4 responses.
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The song "Nothing Without You" by Marcus Schultz was based off of the perspective of a stalker. He jokingly called it a stalker trance anthem haha you're poem has potential.
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On December 26 2012 00:26 B.I.G. wrote:
So if I understand correctly you met this girl you liked who ended up with another guy and you still hope she will chose you?
We had a thing. She got back with her ex. Continues her feelings towards me and acts as if we still had something.
The poem encompasses my frustration over her indecisiveness.
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Russian Federation748 Posts
The poem encompasses my frustration over her indecisiveness.
Sounds like someone has a bright future in Girl Blog writing.
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Hey babe lemme tell you what
I'm a charming male specimen
with a kick-ass butt
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The twist is that the OP is also a girl.
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you know she is sparing your feelings by leading you on, using her classic girl tactics. you know she chose him.if you took her back,[sorry, if SHE took YOU back]] could you trust her a second time?
just turn your back,feel empowered, and live freely.
imo^^
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stop putting that pussy on a pedestal and move on bro
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best thing would be fucking her best friend
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On December 26 2012 20:34 Gprime wrote:
you know she is sparing your feelings by leading you on, using her classic girl tactics. you know she chose him.if you took her back,[sorry, if SHE took YOU back]] could you trust her a second time?
just turn your back,feel empowered, and live freely.
imo^^
I just saw her today. She walked up to me and I pulled her aside to lay down the hammer. I told her by us talking, we're only escalating our feelings towards each other, that the path of least resistance will always lead us astray, and we need to ultimately quit speaking with each other. She took it badly and was really upset. I can still see her face...
Maybe when times change, we can meet on a higher level as friends or more.
Once again, thank you for your advice. It solidified my desire to carry out what I knew needed to be done. I feel empowered.
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Beautiful poem, and a similar situation I can relate to. God speed in turning your thoughts away from someone who plays with your heart.
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On December 29 2012 15:17 beachbeachy wrote:Show nested quote +On December 26 2012 20:34 Gprime wrote:
you know she is sparing your feelings by leading you on, using her classic girl tactics. you know she chose him.if you took her back,[sorry, if SHE took YOU back]] could you trust her a second time?
just turn your back,feel empowered, and live freely.
imo^^ I just saw her today. She walked up to me and I pulled her aside to lay down the hammer. I told her by us talking, we're only escalating our feelings towards each other, that the path of least resistance will always lead us astray, and we need to ultimately quit speaking with each other. She took it badly and was really upset. I can still see her face... Maybe when times change, we can meet on a higher level as friends or more. Once again, thank you for your advice. It solidified my desire to carry out what I knew needed to be done. I feel empowered.
Im really proud of you man! i know it stings in the short term, but ultimately i think you made a really good decision.
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