• Log InLog In
  • Register
Liquid`
Team Liquid Liquipedia
EDT 07:08
CEST 13:08
KST 20:08
  • Home
  • Forum
  • Calendar
  • Streams
  • Liquipedia
  • Features
  • Store
  • EPT
  • TL+
  • StarCraft 2
  • Brood War
  • Smash
  • Heroes
  • Counter-Strike
  • Overwatch
  • Liquibet
  • Fantasy StarCraft
  • TLPD
  • StarCraft 2
  • Brood War
  • Blogs
Forum Sidebar
Events/Features
News
Featured News
RSL Season 1 - Final Week6[ASL19] Finals Recap: Standing Tall12HomeStory Cup 27 - Info & Preview18Classic wins Code S Season 2 (2025)16Code S RO4 & Finals Preview: herO, Rogue, Classic, GuMiho0
Community News
Esports World Cup 2025 - Brackets Revealed14Weekly Cups (July 7-13): Classic continues to roll6Team TLMC #5 - Submission extension3Firefly given lifetime ban by ESIC following match-fixing investigation17$25,000 Streamerzone StarCraft Pro Series announced7
StarCraft 2
General
Who will win EWC 2025? Weekly Cups (July 7-13): Classic continues to roll Esports World Cup 2025 - Final Player Roster Esports World Cup 2025 - Brackets Revealed The GOAT ranking of GOAT rankings
Tourneys
FEL Cracov 2025 (July 27) - $8000 live event Sea Duckling Open (Global, Bronze-Diamond) RSL: Revival, a new crowdfunded tournament series $5,100+ SEL Season 2 Championship (SC: Evo) WardiTV Mondays
Strategy
How did i lose this ZvP, whats the proper response
Custom Maps
External Content
Mutation # 482 Wheel of Misfortune Mutation # 481 Fear and Lava Mutation # 480 Moths to the Flame Mutation # 479 Worn Out Welcome
Brood War
General
Flash Announces (and Retracts) Hiatus From ASL BW General Discussion Help: rep cant save ASL20 Preliminary Maps BGH Auto Balance -> http://bghmmr.eu/
Tourneys
Cosmonarchy Pro Showmatches CSL Xiamen International Invitational [Megathread] Daily Proleagues [BSL20] Non-Korean Championship 4x BSL + 4x China
Strategy
Simple Questions, Simple Answers I am doing this better than progamers do.
Other Games
General Games
Stormgate/Frost Giant Megathread Path of Exile Nintendo Switch Thread CCLP - Command & Conquer League Project The PlayStation 5
Dota 2
Official 'what is Dota anymore' discussion
League of Legends
Heroes of the Storm
Simple Questions, Simple Answers Heroes of the Storm 2.0
Hearthstone
Heroes of StarCraft mini-set
TL Mafia
TL Mafia Community Thread Vanilla Mini Mafia
Community
General
US Politics Mega-thread Things Aren’t Peaceful in Palestine Russo-Ukrainian War Thread Stop Killing Games - European Citizens Initiative Summer Games Done Quick 2025!
Fan Clubs
SKT1 Classic Fan Club! Maru Fan Club
Media & Entertainment
[Manga] One Piece Movie Discussion! Anime Discussion Thread [\m/] Heavy Metal Thread
Sports
Formula 1 Discussion TeamLiquid Health and Fitness Initiative For 2023 2024 - 2025 Football Thread NBA General Discussion NHL Playoffs 2024
World Cup 2022
Tech Support
Computer Build, Upgrade & Buying Resource Thread
TL Community
The Automated Ban List
Blogs
Men Take Risks, Women Win Ga…
TrAiDoS
momentary artworks from des…
tankgirl
from making sc maps to makin…
Husyelt
StarCraft improvement
iopq
Trip to the Zoo
micronesia
Customize Sidebar...

Website Feedback

Closed Threads



Active: 717 users

Pokebunny casting feedback

Blogs > Pokebunny
Post a Reply
1 2 3 Next All
Pokebunny
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
United States10654 Posts
Last Edited: 2012-02-29 00:30:57
February 28 2012 23:12 GMT
#1
Hi!
I've been recently casting for playhem a lot, VODs can be found on http://twitch.tv/playhemtv ... anything with Pokebunny in the title is me. As a new caster, I of course get a fair amount of criticism, and I was hoping users on TL could provide some constructive criticism! I'll be doing more casting in the future, so please give me feedback!

VOD list:
http://www.twitch.tv/playhemtv/b/308705161
http://www.twitch.tv/playhemtv/b/309420586
http://www.twitch.tv/playhemtv/b/310068328 [2:26:00 through 5:11:00]
more soon

***
Semipro Terran player | Pokebunny#1710 | twitter.com/Pokebunny | twitch.tv/Pokebunny | facebook.com/PokebunnySC
1sz2sz3sz
Profile Joined January 2012
Andorra173 Posts
Last Edited: 2012-03-08 21:22:49
February 28 2012 23:21 GMT
#2
Youre awful
Josh_rakoons
Profile Joined December 2011
United Kingdom1158 Posts
Last Edited: 2012-02-28 23:25:28
February 28 2012 23:22 GMT
#3
On February 29 2012 08:21 1sz2sz3sz wrote:
Youre awful

Please be a ban.. please be a ban...

You're casting is good poke, no obvious criticism from me.



On February 29 2012 08:21 1sz2sz3sz wrote:
Youre awful

User was temp banned for this post.



D'awww temp ban is fine.
TheEvo
Profile Joined January 2012
United States23 Posts
February 28 2012 23:23 GMT
#4
#1 Got to put up that hater barrier.

I already sent you a decent length message on twitch right after the finals were over. so I wont repost it here right now but maybe after another cast or checking out some of your vods ill have more.


Link us to these vods and if you have a youtube channel that as well so we can check out more of your work sir.
Evolution
Logan_ps
Profile Blog Joined September 2011
United Kingdom118 Posts
February 28 2012 23:24 GMT
#5
I'd say your doing a fine job. Experience will iron out any minor 'flaws' but frankly, the added high level insight and enthusiasm you show sets you up to keep on improving. Good work. Keep on keeping on.
micronesia
Profile Blog Joined July 2006
United States24673 Posts
February 28 2012 23:25 GMT
#6
I honestly haven't listened to your casting online but your commentary during the NYC LAN games that I heard sounded pretty good, and I assume it's gotten better since then if you've been working on improving it.
ModeratorThere are animal crackers for people and there are people crackers for animals.
SeLpHy
Profile Joined January 2011
Germany73 Posts
February 28 2012 23:27 GMT
#7
Hello Pokebunny,

i always regard you as a Professional-Starcraft 2 Player but your casting really surprised me! You're really good at
casting I say!
Try to present the game with more emotion. That's what I really love from the casters! And when there's a tense moment,
make it even more tense!

Great cast! :-)

SeLpHy
DarkSynthesis
Profile Joined November 2011
91 Posts
February 28 2012 23:27 GMT
#8
I really don't like you casting sorry but thats because I used to cast BW games myself
One big thing I can tell you is to talk more and be more drama-like
Thats one of the biggest things your lacking
whocareswho
Profile Joined December 2011
3 Posts
February 28 2012 23:28 GMT
#9
Hey Pokebunny,

I wanted to get this post in here quickly before the thread becomes a series of flames.

I enjoy nearly everything about your casting. You are knowledgeable and keep the games entertaining. However, I feel that sometimes you cast very arrogantly, and it gets slightly annoying. Your introductions of the players for the games are what irk me the most. While introducing the players you seem to say everything you know about the players, and it seems a little "showoffy". When other casters on Playhem introduce players, they say a few things about that player (ie. This is Fraer, he plays in our tourneys a lot, he is good and I'm excited to watch this game). You tend to drag that stuff out with useless information such as "This is a player, he is Korean, he now lives in Germany, his favorite play style is this, yada yada yada". Way too long of an introduction, keep it short.

I do not think you are ready to solo cast. You are best co-casting with more veteran casters and hopefully that will help you out in the long run!
Vod.kaholic
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
United States1052 Posts
February 28 2012 23:28 GMT
#10
For only hearing you cast once today (playhem finals, dragon vs snuffe), I have to say you added a good level of analysis to the game and made good calls about what was happening. I don't know who was in charge of the camera, but there were moments where it just stopped moving or wasn't covering action that was happening half a screen away, but that could use some improvement.
._. \: |: /: .-. :\ :| :/ ._. They see me rolling...
Pokebunny
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
United States10654 Posts
February 28 2012 23:29 GMT
#11
On February 29 2012 08:28 Vod.kaholic wrote:
For only hearing you cast once today (playhem finals, dragon vs snuffe), I have to say you added a good level of analysis to the game and made good calls about what was happening. I don't know who was in charge of the camera, but there were moments where it just stopped moving or wasn't covering action that was happening half a screen away, but that could use some improvement.

Yeah, I wasn't the camera man.

I also don't really plan to solo cast, but I really enjoy casting alongside a more experienced caster.
Semipro Terran player | Pokebunny#1710 | twitter.com/Pokebunny | twitch.tv/Pokebunny | facebook.com/PokebunnySC
MacroZerg
Profile Joined July 2011
Greece40 Posts
February 28 2012 23:32 GMT
#12
Not bad... Keep it up
For Teh Swarm !
krndandaman
Profile Joined August 2009
Mozambique16569 Posts
February 28 2012 23:33 GMT
#13
--- Nuked ---
amazingxkcd
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
GRAND OLD AMERICA16375 Posts
February 28 2012 23:36 GMT
#14
Your knowledge of the game is good, but your voice makes my ear drums shatter. Please, get a voice changer so i can listen to your insight.
The world is burning and you rather be on this terrible website discussing video games and your shallow feelings
TheEvo
Profile Joined January 2012
United States23 Posts
February 28 2012 23:41 GMT
#15
Extending from my twitch message.

Being that support knowledge role;
Help the main caster with things other than the production tab. Help by throwing out worker counts, tech choices he might be missing while doing camera work, where chrono is going, where new expos are going (minimap watching), resource gathering rates, and the like.

Also maps are great talking point. Help in the early game when your partner has nothing to talk about, maps are easy to talk about. Explain 3rd/4th choices, key choke points, drop points, warp in abuse, overlord position ect. All these can be talked about during htat 6-15 food dead period before builds are recognized.

or maybe the build is out but they both went macro so it will be boring for another 4-5 min, take that time and throw out what you would have done had you seen this macro play. Would you cancel and got 1 base all in? Would you go even greedier with 3 base? Tech hard on 2?

---

Leave most of the action to the experienced caster. They are less likely to trip up on words, can string together talking easily, and know how to inject that enthusiasm without making is sound forced.

That's all I got for now. Let us know your casting schedule in addition to those youtube/vod links. I try to watch kibbelz and robin daily but if I see your name up there I may start tuning in to that as well.
Evolution
orangesunglasses
Profile Blog Joined January 2012
United States110 Posts
February 28 2012 23:45 GMT
#16
your asking for feedback ill say this and im allowed to feel this way

when doing commentating or casting or anything of the vocal vocation, you cant just have any voice. your voice is imo not conducive to casting. people need to enjoy hearing you speak and its kinda hard to do that with your voice.

you cant say um and uh, this is something most people have and break the habit when seeking jobs on TV or whatever else but if you think you can do this you cant say filler words like that.

all being said there are many casters atm, since this is such a grass roots movement imo and nothing is SUPER official, who might not be qualified for casting but do anyway and so i guess you can most likely be a caster but i really, and i say this in the most honest blunt/non intended offensive way possible, cannot see you being a serious contender for serious casting
How you win is the only thing that matters
Pokebunny
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
United States10654 Posts
Last Edited: 2012-02-28 23:47:34
February 28 2012 23:46 GMT
#17
On February 29 2012 08:45 orangesunglasses wrote:
your asking for feedback ill say this and im allowed to feel this way

when doing commentating or casting or anything of the vocal vocation, you cant just have any voice. your voice is imo not conducive to casting. people need to enjoy hearing you speak and its kinda hard to do that with your voice.

you cant say um and uh, this is something most people have and break the habit when seeking jobs on TV or whatever else but if you think you can do this you cant say filler words like that.

all being said there are many casters atm, since this is such a grass roots movement imo and nothing is SUPER official, who might not be qualified for casting but do anyway and so i guess you can most likely be a caster but i really, and i say this in the most honest blunt/non intended offensive way possible, cannot see you being a serious contender for serious casting

Perfectly valid, and I do think part of the "annoying" quality of it is partially due to low quality equipment, which I hopefully will be fixing. I don't claim to have a good casting voice though.
Semipro Terran player | Pokebunny#1710 | twitter.com/Pokebunny | twitch.tv/Pokebunny | facebook.com/PokebunnySC
-ReD-
Profile Joined January 2012
Canada167 Posts
February 29 2012 00:07 GMT
#18
good stuff. id watch you cast any day. (and to the guy who said you give too long intros, i think its awesome to get some context in before game... better than awkward silence early game)
ZiphV5.0
Profile Joined November 2011
Netherlands14 Posts
February 29 2012 00:14 GMT
#19
pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny! pokebunny!
What ever Liquid.
Froadac
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
United States6733 Posts
February 29 2012 00:34 GMT
#20
Excellent. At times smallchat with you seems awkward, but that's not something one can consciously fix. Overall, excellent commentary.
1 2 3 Next All
Please log in or register to reply.
Live Events Refresh
The PondCast
10:00
Episode 55
CranKy Ducklings52
Liquipedia
[ Submit Event ]
Live Streams
Refresh
StarCraft 2
Nina 239
Lowko194
Harstem 170
StarCraft: Brood War
firebathero 7039
Sea 3148
Stork 1154
Mind 1079
BeSt 735
Larva 691
Hyun 351
Pusan 330
Light 239
TY 222
[ Show more ]
EffOrt 186
Last 182
Zeus 182
PianO 167
Leta 156
JYJ143
sorry 121
ToSsGirL 94
Barracks 93
Snow 65
sSak 50
Backho 35
Sacsri 30
Sharp 26
Rush 25
GoRush 23
Icarus 14
scan(afreeca) 14
ajuk12(nOOB) 12
IntoTheRainbow 7
SilentControl 7
Hm[arnc] 5
Noble 4
Bale 3
Dota 2
Gorgc7603
singsing2046
canceldota393
Counter-Strike
shoxiejesuss721
x6flipin448
sgares339
allub248
byalli153
Other Games
B2W.Neo356
DeMusliM288
Fuzer 266
SortOf104
Mew2King48
Trikslyr20
Organizations
Other Games
gamesdonequick2443
StarCraft 2
Blizzard YouTube
StarCraft: Brood War
BSLTrovo
sctven
[ Show 12 non-featured ]
StarCraft 2
• LUISG 19
• AfreecaTV YouTube
• intothetv
• Kozan
• IndyKCrew
• LaughNgamezSOOP
• Migwel
• sooper7s
StarCraft: Brood War
• BSLYoutube
• STPLYoutube
• ZZZeroYoutube
League of Legends
• Jankos1173
Upcoming Events
OSC
1h 52m
WardiTV European League
4h 52m
Fjant vs Babymarine
Mixu vs HiGhDrA
Gerald vs ArT
goblin vs MaNa
Jumy vs YoungYakov
Replay Cast
12h 52m
Epic.LAN
1d
CranKy Ducklings
1d 22h
Epic.LAN
2 days
CSO Contender
2 days
BSL20 Non-Korean Champi…
2 days
Bonyth vs Sziky
Dewalt vs Hawk
Hawk vs QiaoGege
Sziky vs Dewalt
Mihu vs Bonyth
Zhanhun vs QiaoGege
QiaoGege vs Fengzi
Sparkling Tuna Cup
2 days
Online Event
3 days
[ Show More ]
BSL20 Non-Korean Champi…
3 days
Bonyth vs Zhanhun
Dewalt vs Mihu
Hawk vs Sziky
Sziky vs QiaoGege
Mihu vs Hawk
Zhanhun vs Dewalt
Fengzi vs Bonyth
Esports World Cup
4 days
ByuN vs Astrea
Lambo vs HeRoMaRinE
Clem vs TBD
Solar vs Zoun
SHIN vs Reynor
Maru vs TriGGeR
herO vs Lancer
Cure vs ShoWTimE
Esports World Cup
5 days
Esports World Cup
6 days
Liquipedia Results

Completed

JPL Season 2
RSL Revival: Season 1
Murky Cup #2

Ongoing

BSL 2v2 Season 3
Copa Latinoamericana 4
Jiahua Invitational
BSL20 Non-Korean Championship
Championship of Russia 2025
FISSURE Playground #1
BLAST.tv Austin Major 2025
ESL Impact League Season 7
IEM Dallas 2025
PGL Astana 2025
Asian Champions League '25
BLAST Rivals Spring 2025
MESA Nomadic Masters

Upcoming

CSL Xiamen Invitational
CSL Xiamen Invitational: ShowMatche
2025 ACS Season 2
CSLPRO Last Chance 2025
CSLPRO Chat StarLAN 3
BSL Season 21
K-Championship
RSL Revival: Season 2
SEL Season 2 Championship
uThermal 2v2 Main Event
FEL Cracov 2025
Esports World Cup 2025
Underdog Cup #2
ESL Pro League S22
StarSeries Fall 2025
FISSURE Playground #2
BLAST Open Fall 2025
BLAST Open Fall Qual
Esports World Cup 2025
BLAST Bounty Fall 2025
BLAST Bounty Fall Qual
IEM Cologne 2025
TLPD

1. ByuN
2. TY
3. Dark
4. Solar
5. Stats
6. Nerchio
7. sOs
8. soO
9. INnoVation
10. Elazer
1. Rain
2. Flash
3. EffOrt
4. Last
5. Bisu
6. Soulkey
7. Mini
8. Sharp
Sidebar Settings...

Advertising | Privacy Policy | Terms Of Use | Contact Us

Original banner artwork: Jim Warren
The contents of this webpage are copyright © 2025 TLnet. All Rights Reserved.