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The Guy Who Hacked - Part One
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Zennith
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ohokurwrong
Brazil283 Posts
some ppl are just dickheads i coulda swore this story was gonna be about underage online rape when you opened "i met a boy online today" | ||
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Zennith
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aztrorisk
United States896 Posts
I wouldn't be proud of saying stuff like this. | ||
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Loser777
1931 Posts
I'm going to stop here and let you think about what it's like to read your writing. | ||
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duk3
United States807 Posts
RIP | ||
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PH
United States6173 Posts
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SnetteL
Belgium473 Posts
On December 14 2011 15:50 Loser777 wrote: This is a sentence. A sentence with words. As sentences usually are. A typical combination of nouns and verbs. The nouns are, the verbs do, the sentence progresses in the standard fashion. I'm going to stop here and let you think about what it's like to read your writing. Spot on. Sorry OP, I didn't like your writing style either. | ||
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slam
United States923 Posts
On December 14 2011 18:32 SnetteL wrote: Spot on. Sorry OP, I didn't like your writing style either. I might be wrong but it seemed to me like it was taken out of a chat window. As painful as it may be to read, I felt it fairly represented Bnet chat talk. | ||
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Torte de Lini
Germany38463 Posts
He hacked and he got you write out a BM equal to Robin Williams' speech on Good Will Hunting in length, but not depth or profoundness. That was good. Not gonna lie. He put in less effort in the game and you put more effort in the chat. | ||
fusefuse
Estonia4644 Posts
It makes you feel better about yourself. About your acne. About your weight. About your friends who you met online through World of Warcraft. Who you've never met in real life. really? you set out to play mind games with him and you delve into such archaic stereotypes? and he said 'that was good' to that? what the fuck am i reading. I see you are trying to ride on your fancy incident by writing a blog that plays the situation up, with 'creative' writing, but it isn't working too well.. Good for a start i guess. Even gimmicks take lots of practice to perfect and pull off properly. | ||
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samw
England443 Posts
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LantisPlay
Singapore53 Posts
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Zennith
United States795 Posts
On December 14 2011 19:07 slam wrote: I might be wrong but it seemed to me like it was taken out of a chat window. As painful as it may be to read, I felt it fairly represented Bnet chat talk. That's because it was actually directly taken from Bnet chat. Each period is a line break. Also, the point is to have fun! At the end of it all, we both agreed it had ended up being fun. So I'm cool with it. | ||
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Zennith
United States795 Posts
On December 14 2011 19:24 Torte de Lini wrote: Wait. He hacked and he got you write out a BM equal to Robin Williams' speech on Good Will Hunting in length, but not depth or profoundness. He put in less effort in the game and you put more effort in the chat. Yeah. He pretty much won. But I suppose the point, which I could have stated, was that by the end of it, I didn't even care. I was laughing, and so was he. So it works for me. | ||
GMarshal
United States22154 Posts
On December 14 2011 15:50 Loser777 wrote: This is a sentence. A sentence with words. As sentences usually are. A typical combination of nouns and verbs. The nouns are, the verbs do, the sentence progresses in the standard fashion. I'm going to stop here and let you think about what it's like to read your writing. I read that in chill's voice "Minerals being mined, building being built, minerals being mined" :-P | ||
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