My Final Fantasy animation !

kaiz0ku

Greece289 Posts

March 25 2011 16:13 GMT

Well hey there guys :>
In my <<Introducing Myself>> post i told you i am into Visual Effects , but still i haven't posted any of my work..
Insipired by another video i experimented with some elements and Final Fantasy XIII Music - Lightning.

Hope you enjoy it guys ! And please leave some feedback , and suggestions about how i can make it better! Here it is !

tonight

United States11130 Posts

March 25 2011 16:17 GMT

It's super simplistic, but at the same time watching the little cloud ball move around sort of relaxes me. I'm not really sure what I'd say to make it better because I'm not really sure what effect you're going for.

alffla

Hong Kong20321 Posts

March 25 2011 16:22 GMT

it reminds me of a video i've seen a long time ago.. i think it was something simlar
looks cool
but i dont like how the smoke trialer disappear so abruptly at the far left side

but cool

TheMunkey

Canada470 Posts

March 25 2011 16:53 GMT

On March 26 2011 01:22 alffla wrote:
it reminds me of a video i've seen a long time ago.. i think it was something simlar
looks cool
but i dont like how the smoke trialer disappear so abruptly at the far left side

but cool

yeah the smoke disappearing is too abrupt and unnatural unlike the rest of the visuals.

redoxx

United States333 Posts

March 25 2011 21:19 GMT

I would suggest having the smoke thin as it gets to the edge and disappear off screen, like others said. Also, consider adding something like more colors or animations once the song reaches its climax around 1:30. Maybe at this point, the ball could become even more energetic and change in size or something. It still looks awesome as is.

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