Zenio vs Boxer NASL review - Page 3

On May 05 2011 06:22 whatthefat wrote:
Solid job. Here are some corrections that jumped out at me:

"Anywho, as always, I was very excited for this match up." (about)

"An early pool with drones added to the rush only to arrive at Boxer’s base to find it walled in. This left Zenio to immediately GG which left Incontrol wondering whether anything that he hypes can possibly turn out the way he hopes." (This isn't written as well as the rest of the text)

"In game 3 Boxer played a cocky two racks opening, in full view of Zenio’s overlord, which prompted to Zenio reraise by opening Hatch first." (rax, Zenio to)

"The Thumb’s Down dance has yet to become a meme, but I have hope." (no apostrophe)

"Here is a peek of some of the abuse boxer was pulling off on the old version of Tal'darim" (at)

"I always did feel he should have played zerg." (felt)

"First Boxer opened exactly as Zenio had hoped he would have done in the first game, and then he continued on that route despite letting the zerg see it, only for Zenio to unflinchingly continue his economic opening, planning on defending the pressure using only drones." (had hoped he would; also sentence is a bit long)

On May 05 2011 06:31 SlipperySnake wrote:
I liked this article a lot and I just wanted to say thanks. I had forgotten how epic that game was, the baneling bombs freaking TWICE. Wow I was just stunned watching how well it was all executed especially how deliberate the second one was.

Great article, thanks for reminding me of a great series.