(3)Flower Of Snow 1.03 - Page 2

On May 31 2020 11:41 Djabanete wrote:

If the goal is a translation, you translate the meaning, not just the words. Also, a translation into language X that makes it sound like you don’t speak language X is generally to be avoided.

I assumed OP is a nonnative speaker who could use a friendly hint, but maybe their English is great and they just happen to have made a conscious stylistic decision.