Hej danskere på TL. Jeg har lavet en dansk broodwar kommentar, Bisu mod Flash i proleague finalen. Kommentaren er mest henvendt til nybegynder, men alt feedback værdsættes.
English: Hello (danish) people on teamliquid. I have made a danish broodwar cast, Bisu vs Flash in the proleague grand final. The cast is primarily aimed at beginners, but all feedback is appreciated.
Hey danes! I watched your game and it was fun. I'd say for the most part, all from the dude who wrote the only comment on your youtube vid sums it up. If I translate, and add my opinions, I get something like this:
1.Choose your words carefully. All people might not follow the confusing words you use. Choose words for your audience. fagbegraber" as proxy cheese? Kinda hard to get.
2. Don't mix using the danish words ingame things with english ingame names. Stick to one, and that's only english since the game never had any danish version. The danish word for tanks (wagons) and the english loan word, "tanks" are used back and fourth. It's confusing. Especially for me as non-danish.
3. Perhaps most important: change your tone sometimes. The tone of your voice is one of the important ways to communicate your feelings to the audience, that's how you create excitement. Your voice is really monotone and you sound more or less exactly the same no matter what happens in the game.
4. Watch other good casters. No caster invents casting all over again, they steal tricks and style from others and try to do things like they did, too. Then mixing that up with their personality is typically what makes them unique. I wouldn't say I got to see that much personality from you here. Do people love Nukethestars for his awesome analysis? No, they typically love his personality. The analysis is nice ofc, but personality and style is what generally set's the major difference.
5. Awesome to see a Nordic cast. We need more of this. BW could have a strong harbor in the Nordic countries and a first nordic commentator is a huge step towards that. Keep the casting coming and I'll watch it.
6. Now this critique might seem harsh but this is your first cast. You gotta start somewhere, and most casters who are good today weren't perfect in the beginning. I've followed a few so I've seen it.
Fedt fedt har egentlig altid gerne ville høre bw med dansk kommentator (har hørt sc2). Måske du kunne fortælle om hvor lang tid du har fulgt bw pro scenen, lidt om dig selv osv. Bare lidt kort baggrunds historie. Mindre øhh og øøhm Ud over det, keep up the good work. Great points Jaevlaterran i agree with all of what you pointed out. Og så noget højere volume/lyd næste gang.
On May 05 2012 01:35 Jaevlaterran wrote: Hey danes! I watched your game and it was fun. I'd say for the most part, all from the dude who wrote the only comment on your youtube vid sums it up. If I translate, and add my opinions, I get something like this:
1.Choose your words carefully. All people might not follow the confusing words you use. Choose words for your audience. fagbegraber" as proxy cheese? Kinda hard to get.
2. Don't mix using the danish words ingame things with english ingame names. Stick to one, and that's only english since the game never had any danish version. The danish word for tanks (wagons) and the english loan word, "tanks" are used back and fourth. It's confusing. Especially for me as non-danish.
3. Perhaps most important: change your tone sometimes. The tone of your voice is one of the important ways to communicate your feelings to the audience, that's how you create excitement. Your voice is really monotone and you sound more or less exactly the same no matter what happens in the game.
4. Watch other good casters. No caster invents casting all over again, they steal tricks and style from others and try to do things like they did, too. Then mixing that up with their personality is typically what makes them unique. I wouldn't say I got to see that much personality from you here. Do people love Nukethestars for his awesome analysis? No, they typically love his personality. The analysis is nice ofc, but personality and style is what generally set's the major difference.
5. Awesome to see a Nordic cast. We need more of this. BW could have a strong harbor in the Nordic countries and a first nordic commentator is a huge step towards that. Keep the casting coming and I'll watch it.
6. Now this critique might seem harsh but this is your first cast. You gotta start somewhere, and most casters who are good today weren't perfect in the beginning. I've followed a few so I've seen it.
Eh, his language was very noob friendly. He explained everything at the start. Even called the units which comes from gateways and barracks for "warriors" instead of their actual name. He also explained what cheese was, and that a proxy was something which was builded further towards the enemy base.
No offense, but I don't think he cares about how a non-danish person can understand it or not. My friend who has never played Starcraft before, understood the whole thing.
none taken. But why wouldn't a danish commentator want the norwegian/swedish parts of the audience as well? I mean for us that understand danish somewhat well, using standard language helps. But sure, this was probably perfect for new people.