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il0seonpurpose
Profile Blog Joined January 2007
Korea (South)5638 Posts
Last Edited: 2008-02-19 01:30:46
February 19 2008 01:29 GMT
#1
In modern day societies, technology has gotten the best of humans. The internet and cell phones probably the most common technology, has changed the way people communicated. From emailing, instant messaging, and text messaging, it has and will continue to improve the use of language and grammar.
It seems like, with technology, everything has to be faster. An example is the use of emoticons; (tongue sticking out) (Smiling and winking) (Sad face). :D (Wide grin.) With the right use of these symbols, you can use them to show any feeling! Instead of taking time to express feelings, why not use some of these emoticons to get the point across to the other person directly? None of your friends want to hear your problems out or be your psychologist.
Another example of the effects of technology is the use of abbreviations. Is something funny? How about using LOL (Laugh out loud), ROFL (Rolling on the floor), or LMAO (Laughing my a$% off) Even if it’s not funny but you know the other person was trying to be funny, use one of these to make it as if he/she is a comedian; make them feel like they’re something. Other examples of abbreviations are WTH (What the he!!); the H can sometimes be replaced with a F. Here’s a hint, the word rhymes with duck. Sometimes, people will even use abbreviations that never exist but who has the time to look that up?
The use of grammar and punctuation marks have also changed and it will affect the way people, mostly teenagers are writing (yes, not with a keyboard, but with an actual pen or a pencil.) Instead of writing “I’m going to do my homework” why not just type out “Im gonna do hw”? It means the same thing and unless the person doesn’t know a lick of English and the new, fast way to communicate in that language, they shouldn’t take the time to correct him/her or ask what hw stands for, and if you don’t know what it is, all I can say is sorry. (It stands for homework). Another use of proper English nowadays is the use of homophones, that is, if the person even bothers out to spell out the word instead of abbreviating it. An example is, “You’re a bad person.” Instead of typing or writing that all out, why not just say “Your bad person?” As long as the reader knows the overall sentence, it’s all good.
I hope this helped you understand the way people communicate in today’s world. It's no wonder that people who spend hours every day communicating like this have trouble with formal English, imo (in my opinion).

Please comment, give critisms! Also, some of the emoticons actually became yellow faces, so please excuse. Thanks


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ShaLLoW[baY]
Profile Blog Joined January 2007
Canada12499 Posts
February 19 2008 01:37 GMT
#2
WTH (What the he!!); the H can sometimes be replaced with a F. Here’s a hint, the word rhymes with duck.

Firetruck ez.
ALEXISONFIRE ARE FUCKING BACK (sAviOr for life)
il0seonpurpose
Profile Blog Joined January 2007
Korea (South)5638 Posts
February 19 2008 01:38 GMT
#3
Haha, I'll replace duck with firetruck.
micronesia
Profile Blog Joined July 2006
United States24701 Posts
February 19 2008 02:22 GMT
#4
The grammar needs work, and I don't agree at all. If you are just writing this for fun, then that's cool, but I do hope this isn't an academic paper... If so, please provide the prompt and context of the course.
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fusionsdf
Profile Blog Joined June 2006
Canada15390 Posts
February 19 2008 02:26 GMT
#5
the structure needs work.

It seems like you are speed talking when I read it.
Slow it down, develop your individual points.

Work on your transitions.
SKT_Best: "I actually chose Protoss because it was so hard for me to defeat Protoss as a Terran. When I first started Brood War, my main race was Terran."
fusionsdf
Profile Blog Joined June 2006
Canada15390 Posts
February 19 2008 02:33 GMT
#6
On February 19 2008 10:29 il0seonpurpose wrote:
In modern day societies, technology has gotten the best of humans. The internet and cell phones probably the most common technology, has changed the way people communicated. From emailing, instant messaging, and text messaging, it has and will continue to improve the use of language and grammar.
It seems like, with technology, everything has to be faster. An example is the use of emoticons; (tongue sticking out) (Smiling and winking) (Sad face). :D (Wide grin.) With the right use of these symbols, you can use them to show any feeling! Instead of taking time to express feelings, why not use some of these emoticons to get the point across to the other person directly? None of your friends want to hear your problems out or be your psychologist.
Another example of the effects of technology is the use of abbreviations. Is something funny? How about using LOL (Laugh out loud), ROFL (Rolling on the floor), or LMAO (Laughing my a$% off) Even if it’s not funny but you know the other person was trying to be funny, use one of these to make it as if he/she is a comedian; make them feel like they’re something. Other examples of abbreviations are WTH (What the he!!); the H can sometimes be replaced with a F. Here’s a hint, the word rhymes with duck. Sometimes, people will even use abbreviations that never exist but who has the time to look that up?
The use of grammar and punctuation marks have also changed and it will affect the way people, mostly teenagers are writing (yes, not with a keyboard, but with an actual pen or a pencil.) Instead of writing “I’m going to do my homework” why not just type out “Im gonna do hw”? It means the same thing and unless the person doesn’t know a lick of English and the new, fast way to communicate in that language, they shouldn’t take the time to correct him/her or ask what hw stands for, and if you don’t know what it is, all I can say is sorry. (It stands for homework). Another use of proper English nowadays is the use of homophones, that is, if the person even bothers out to spell out the word instead of abbreviating it. An example is, “You’re a bad person.” Instead of typing or writing that all out, why not just say “Your bad person?” As long as the reader knows the overall sentence, it’s all good.
I hope this helped you understand the way people communicate in today’s world. It's no wonder that people who spend hours every day communicating like this have trouble with formal English, imo (in my opinion).

Please comment, give critisms! Also, some of the emoticons actually became yellow faces, so please excuse. Thanks


The internet and cell phones probably the most common technology, has changed the way people communicated.

would probably read better with something like:
The internet and cell phones are probably the two most common technologies that have changed the way people communicate.


You should then develop an entire point related to the internet, and an entire point related to cell phones.

In an essay you have to make assertions, but you have to back them up as well.

What makes the internet change people's communication patterns?
Is it the speed?
Does it have to do with being a keyboard instead of pen and paper?
Are there other things other than the internet and cellphones that change the way we communicate? How generational is this new type of communication.

Probably with an essay this short, you are just writing for fun, but you should get into the habit of fully developing your thoughts. Doing so will make essay's you have to write better and easier to write.

Also, in general you wan't to avoid using a lot of rhetorical questions. You can use one or two and get away with it, but rhetorical questions break up the flow of an essay and isolate you from your reader.

In general, try to make your essay more formal.
SKT_Best: "I actually chose Protoss because it was so hard for me to defeat Protoss as a Terran. When I first started Brood War, my main race was Terran."
il0seonpurpose
Profile Blog Joined January 2007
Korea (South)5638 Posts
February 19 2008 02:33 GMT
#7
The word limit was like 300 and it's almost 400 on mine, what points should I cut out?
ilj.psa
Profile Blog Joined December 2007
Peru3081 Posts
February 19 2008 02:35 GMT
#8
is this for school/college or just for fun?
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