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Caevrane
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
Uruguay30 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-05-14 05:08:09
May 14 2016 04:59 GMT
#1
Hi guys, i'm that one guy that made Adun's Shrine, in TLMC#5; I'm here because i need some feedback on my submissions for TLMC#7, so if any of my maps get to the final fifteen, i'll have a better idea on exactly what to iterate on

Here are my maps for TLMC#7.*

New Boralis
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Withered
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Botánica Aérea
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Eerie Night
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Any feedback is welcome, or rather necessary, actually. The maps should be up and updated in Battle.net, so just look them up in custom maps. Also, you should be fine in terms of performance if you don't have problems on other maps, FPS drops are possible in Withered and Botánica Aérea though, nothing too serious, but still, i need help to pinpoint what's exactly causing the fps frops, especially in Withered.

Thanks.

*1 - Sorry for not being able to provide both 60 and 90 degree images, the internet we've got is really slow, so i'd rather not bother.


"Must work on Zergling lemon juice allergy." - Abathur
lichter
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
1001 YEARS KESPAJAIL22272 Posts
May 14 2016 05:31 GMT
#2
change one of them to a beach tileset and i'll do my best to force it into the top 15
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ZigguratOfUr
Profile Blog Joined April 2012
Iraq16955 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-05-14 06:07:08
May 14 2016 05:44 GMT
#3
Your maps are very nicely executed and very polished. What will hold them back in the contest is how hyper-standard they are I think, and the fact they don't exactly fit in the categories outlined by Blizzard. None of them lean heavily towards either "macro" or "rush", and certainly not towards "something never seen before" or "gold bases". I guess this advice is too late though.

If you make it into the top 15 I'd work on making your maps look more like LotV maps and less like HotS maps. With how the economy works in LotV, expansions are generally placed closer in. Most of your maps' base placements feel very HotS. New Boralis in particular looks like something that came out of the post-Daybreak era.

Apart from that you could cross-post this feedback request in the TLMC 7 thread (link) or the Custom Maps subforum. It might be more visible there than in blogs, and bring feedback from much better mapmakers than I.
Caevrane
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
Uruguay30 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-05-14 08:15:45
May 14 2016 08:09 GMT
#4
On May 14 2016 14:31 lichter wrote:
change one of them to a beach tileset and i'll do my best to force it into the top 15


I don't know how to feel about this

On May 14 2016 14:44 ZigguratOfUr wrote:
Your maps are very nicely executed and very polished. What will hold them back in the contest is how hyper-standard they are I think, and the fact they don't exactly fit in the categories outlined by Blizzard. None of them lean heavily towards either "macro" or "rush", and certainly not towards "something never seen before" or "gold bases". I guess this advice is too late though.

If you make it into the top 15 I'd work on making your maps look more like LotV maps and less like HotS maps. With how the economy works in LotV, expansions are generally placed closer in. Most of your maps' base placements feel very HotS. New Boralis in particular looks like something that came out of the post-Daybreak era.

Apart from that you could cross-post this feedback request in the TLMC 7 thread (link) or the Custom Maps subforum. It might be more visible there than in blogs, and bring feedback from much better mapmakers than I.


The "these are HotS maps" trend seems to be very common here in TL, and they might be, i've been seriously out of loop lately to regards to meta game. Regardless, this is the first time i've heard such complaint, from what i've heard before, some people, especially in lower leagues seem to like more HotS/WoL-ish maps (stubborness?), i even asked certain mapmaker for his opinion on the maps *cough kantuva cough*, and he seemed... ok with them, for the most part.

Oh, and the blog post has more views than the forum post, so.
"Must work on Zergling lemon juice allergy." - Abathur
ZigguratOfUr
Profile Blog Joined April 2012
Iraq16955 Posts
May 14 2016 16:39 GMT
#5
On May 14 2016 17:09 Caevrane wrote:
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On May 14 2016 14:31 lichter wrote:
change one of them to a beach tileset and i'll do my best to force it into the top 15


I don't know how to feel about this

Show nested quote +
On May 14 2016 14:44 ZigguratOfUr wrote:
Your maps are very nicely executed and very polished. What will hold them back in the contest is how hyper-standard they are I think, and the fact they don't exactly fit in the categories outlined by Blizzard. None of them lean heavily towards either "macro" or "rush", and certainly not towards "something never seen before" or "gold bases". I guess this advice is too late though.

If you make it into the top 15 I'd work on making your maps look more like LotV maps and less like HotS maps. With how the economy works in LotV, expansions are generally placed closer in. Most of your maps' base placements feel very HotS. New Boralis in particular looks like something that came out of the post-Daybreak era.

Apart from that you could cross-post this feedback request in the TLMC 7 thread (link) or the Custom Maps subforum. It might be more visible there than in blogs, and bring feedback from much better mapmakers than I.


The "these are HotS maps" trend seems to be very common here in TL, and they might be, i've been seriously out of loop lately to regards to meta game. Regardless, this is the first time i've heard such complaint, from what i've heard before, some people, especially in lower leagues seem to like more HotS/WoL-ish maps (stubborness?), i even asked certain mapmaker for his opinion on the maps *cough kantuva cough*, and he seemed... ok with them, for the most part.

Oh, and the blog post has more views than the forum post, so.


The people that like HotS maps over the LotV maps like them not because their expansion layout is preferred to that of a LotV map, but because so many of the LotV ladder maps have been awful, and the HotS maps while not ideal for LotV play at least play out reasonably.

As for your brother seeming 'ok' about your maps I can only say that his TLMC7 submissions have LotV style closer-in fourth and fifths .
Caevrane
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
Uruguay30 Posts
May 14 2016 17:04 GMT
#6
Might as well take a closer look at them.
"Must work on Zergling lemon juice allergy." - Abathur
pebble444
Profile Blog Joined March 2011
Italy2498 Posts
May 14 2016 21:21 GMT
#7
hey you should try making maps for broodwar that would be cool;do you play bw?
"Awaken my Child, and embrace the Glory that is your Birthright"
-NegativeZero-
Profile Joined August 2011
United States2142 Posts
May 14 2016 23:22 GMT
#8
On May 15 2016 06:21 pebble444 wrote:
hey you should try making maps for broodwar that would be cool;do you play bw?

plenty of great, never before used maps on broodwarmaps.net
vibeo gane,
Avexyli
Profile Blog Joined April 2014
United States699 Posts
May 15 2016 01:00 GMT
#9
Why is there a Dominion splat in a temple tileset for Eerie?
Else i love all these aesthetics TT
AVEX - Multi Winner, Finalist, Judge of the TeamLiquid Map Contests, Former SC:EVO Enviroment Artist & Multiplayer Game Design
Caevrane
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
Uruguay30 Posts
May 16 2016 18:46 GMT
#10
It's actually a castle, otherwise i would've put more Protoss-y stuff in there. Dominion ftw.
"Must work on Zergling lemon juice allergy." - Abathur
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