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Zealously
Profile Blog Joined October 2011
East Gorteau22261 Posts
May 08 2016 18:44 GMT
#1
I really want to get published. To anyone that knows me even a little, that shouldn't come as a monumental surprise. The search is arduous and really difficult, and having more eggs in a basket is always beneficial. While my feelers are out for other projects, I've sent out queries for a new project I started mid-2015. It's called WINGS OF STARS (and Olli really hates the name), and it's probably the most fun I've ever had writing anything.

Dear Editor

Consider a time where humanity records no history, remembering little of what has come before, and forgetting more by each year that passes. Imagine countless worlds, where cities of glass and walls that reach the sky are unremarkable, linked together in an empire that has inherited all of its greatness. Where the magic that fuels every factory and home is ancient and far from understood, but commonplace all the same.

In the Manifold Empire, humanity is not alone. Ruled by the Amarinthos Dynasty, hoarders of knowledge and resources. Protected by the Tachyoni, superhuman beings hailing from a bygone age of technology and conquest. Always threatened by the Secandi, a tribal race intent on the death of humanity, slowly reaching out across the Empire, sending millions into exile. The Orbitus and the Planetarum, the rival factions of the Tachyoni, struggle for power in an endless cycle of assassinations and political coups, striving to steal the power held by the Regent they are tasked to protect and serve.

Drakin Joan has served the Planetarum for years, toiling away under Tachyoni rule. So when Drakin Dianon, leader of the Planetarum and Joan's adoptive father, offers to negotiate lasting peace, she sees an opportunity to prove her worth and gain respect in the army that scorns her. Invictus Caine accepts the offer as leader of the Orbitus, but has an agenda at odds with the pretense of negotiation. And his estranged grandchild, spiteful, wants revenge.

WINGS OF STARS is a 165,000-word novel, a fusion of all that I love in Fantasy and all that tickles my imagination in Sci-Fi. I have two more stories planned in the same setting, and have already begun working on a sequel. I am 20, living and working from Trelleborg, Sweden, with a burning passion for speculative fiction in all its forms. I grew up on a diet of fantasy, horror and philosophy, and write in a hopeless attempt to eventually blend all three.

I've attached a synopsis below, and the first five pages of my manuscript below that.
Thank you for taking time to review my query. I look forward to hearing from you.

-contact info out.-

Best,
Victor Lloyd


So there you have it! The 4-8+ weeks of estimated wait time is a killer, so I thought I'd share. I'm still tentatively looking for beta readers (I've received some very valuable help from other TL users), so if this sounds like something up your alley, please PM me.

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Captain Peabody
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
United States3136 Posts
May 08 2016 18:57 GMT
#2
Sounds a bit Gene-Wolfe-esque. Interesting.

Good luck, man!
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HornyHerring
Profile Joined March 2011
Papua New Guinea1059 Posts
May 08 2016 19:23 GMT
#3
Imo way too many names in that short email, feels overwhelming.
oh, hai
Zealously
Profile Blog Joined October 2011
East Gorteau22261 Posts
May 08 2016 19:32 GMT
#4
On May 09 2016 04:23 HornyHerring wrote:
Imo way too many names in that short email, feels overwhelming.


It's an issue I've considered. The hope is that most of them carry themselves and don't need further clarification. The Amarinthos Dynasty, for example, could also have been called just "the ruling dynasty" or some such, and it would have been neither here nor there. But definitely, the query is on the heavier side and I'm banking on the synopsis/excerpt that come attached to convince. I am, flatly, not good at queries (yet).
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JimmyJRaynor
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
Canada17791 Posts
May 08 2016 19:43 GMT
#5
i don't like the name of your novel.

good luck though!
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ZigguratOfUr
Profile Blog Joined April 2012
Iraq16955 Posts
May 08 2016 22:07 GMT
#6
165,000 words is really long for a novel (from an author with no prior reputation that is), even for sci-fi/fantasy. You really need to impress the editor if you want to get something that long published. Best of luck.
munch
Profile Joined July 2014
Mute City2363 Posts
May 08 2016 23:14 GMT
#7
Is this a new one or the one that's coming out Soon™? Let me give you my money ffs
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FO-nTTaX
Profile Blog Joined January 2013
Johto4996 Posts
May 09 2016 01:07 GMT
#8
Hell i want to read this already :D
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imre
Profile Blog Joined November 2011
France9263 Posts
May 09 2016 02:26 GMT
#9
Could beta read this if you're looking for some.
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Qwyn
Profile Blog Joined December 2010
United States2781 Posts
May 09 2016 05:29 GMT
#10
You've been working hella hard haven't you . Gonna be good!
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thePunGun
Profile Blog Joined January 2016
598 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-05-09 18:32:41
May 09 2016 18:04 GMT
#11
As a former editor and published novelist, I wish you all the luck in the world, but be prepared for a lot of rejections and heartbreak. It took me 6 years and several rewrites to get my first novel published. Don't give up (never ever give up!!) and be open to any critique or advice they give you, because in the end it will help you become a better writer.
Don't be afraid to pick your work apart (piece by piece if necessary) and keep reworking or even reinventing parts of the story.

edit: BTW don't get scared by that number. (it includes 2 years of researching /drafting and 1 year and 8 month(ish)s of actual writing/reading/recomposing)
"You cannot teach a man anything, you can only help him find it within himself."
quirinus
Profile Blog Joined May 2007
Croatia2489 Posts
May 09 2016 20:24 GMT
#12
Good luck! The more SF/Fantasy books, the merrier.

@first comment: I agree, a bit of Gene Wolfie is a good break from the usual, if that is the case. It helps you grow as a reader.
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Cricketer12
Profile Blog Joined May 2012
United States14001 Posts
May 09 2016 20:57 GMT
#13
pretty cool, best of luck zeal!
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Rhaldor
Profile Joined May 2016
1 Post
May 10 2016 06:47 GMT
#14
I work in the publishing business (graphic design and acquiring rights), and I hate to say this, but at the moment your synopsis is way too complicated. As mentioned above, there are too many names that an editor doesn't need to know just yet. In the letter you must try to sell your work, tell why your work is new and refreshing, make the reader WANT to read your synopsis and first few pages. Right now I fear that the ones you send this letter to will simply, put it in the pile of other hopefuls. Spend some time on this letter, it is your gateway into publishing and will pay itself back for every minute you spend on it.
lichter
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
1001 YEARS KESPAJAIL22272 Posts
May 10 2016 07:24 GMT
#15
i'd criticize your thing alas i don't like reading
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Cricketer12
Profile Blog Joined May 2012
United States14001 Posts
May 10 2016 08:23 GMT
#16
On May 10 2016 16:24 lichter wrote:
i'd criticize your thing alas i don't like reading

Ironic...oh wait is that the joke?
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hexhaven
Profile Joined July 2014
Finland965 Posts
May 10 2016 12:10 GMT
#17
On May 10 2016 16:24 lichter wrote:
i'd criticize your thing alas i don't like reading


Explains your edits really well tbh
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munch
Profile Joined July 2014
Mute City2363 Posts
May 10 2016 12:23 GMT
#18
On May 10 2016 21:10 hexhaven wrote:
Show nested quote +
On May 10 2016 16:24 lichter wrote:
i'd criticize your thing alas i don't like reading


Explains your edits really well tbh

K.O.
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Topin
Profile Blog Joined December 2010
Peru10126 Posts
May 10 2016 15:54 GMT
#19
best wishes!
i would define my style between a mix of ByuN, Maru and MKP
PhoenixVoid
Profile Blog Joined December 2011
Canada32755 Posts
May 11 2016 01:07 GMT
#20
I lack the creative energy and work ethic to bring out a 165,000 word novel, but I do know what it feels like to be a writer and struggle to get your work out without feeling dread of having it dumped in the rejection pile immediately. Being honest, I don't expect anything more than lots of denials and rewrites for you, but every writer had underwent this trial by fire. Either way, I wish you the best of luck, if I believed in luck and could impart it.
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