Girlfriend broke up with me recently. Was particularly restless tonight so I did some writing to maybe help myself calm down, get some stuff out. Wrote this silly poem first, figured I would at least share it

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(Kay-Why-Ellie)
Everyday my heart breaks a thousand times
whenever you cross my mind.
Take five big breaths,
inhale Count,
exhale Count,
rinse and repeat.
Beat my brain senseless
this pain seems endless

Whose mind is this?
Mine? Can't make sense
Patience
Patience
Patience

Silence... BOOM Sounds the broken heart.
Back to the ground
same pain, same heart
back to the start.

Everyday my heart breaks a thousand and one times.

sths

Australia192 Posts

April 15 2013 08:21 GMT

I don't understand poetry because I'm too thick. But a world with more poems is better than a world with less poems.
Thank you for sharing

DarkPlasmaBall

United States45979 Posts

April 15 2013 12:28 GMT

Sorry to hear about your break up

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Also, I can't get over the fact that "(Kay-Why-Ellie)" rhymes with KY Jelly.

Wrongspeedy

United States1655 Posts

April 15 2013 13:17 GMT

On April 15 2013 21:28 DarkPlasmaBall wrote:
Sorry to hear about your break up

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Also, I can't get over the fact that "(Kay-Why-Ellie)" rhymes with KY Jelly.

Bahaha. Yeah it was a play off her name Kyle. I should just say its a poem about ky jelly though

The poem is really just about how it feels when your laying in bed and you can't sleep and no matter how hard you try and distract your thoughts they always end up back on the same person. Take a moment think of something else, then watch as your brain relates whatever you are thinking back to what you don't want to think about.

DarkPlasmaBall

United States45979 Posts

April 15 2013 13:20 GMT

On April 15 2013 22:17 Wrongspeedy wrote:

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Bahaha. Yeah it was a play off her name Kyle. I should just say its a poem about ky jelly though

Ah, I get it

K-Y-LE ^^

sc4k

United Kingdom5454 Posts

April 15 2013 16:27 GMT

Her name was Kyle? Now that has got to be the most unlikely female name since my mate's girlfriend 'Lee' (she's white).

Butterednuts

United States859 Posts

April 15 2013 17:33 GMT

On April 15 2013 16:46 Wrongspeedy wrote:
(Kay-Why-Ellie)

Is this anything like KY Jelly?

DarkPlasmaBall

United States45979 Posts

April 15 2013 17:55 GMT

On April 16 2013 01:27 sc4k wrote:
Her name was Kyle? Now that has got to be the most unlikely female name since my mate's girlfriend 'Lee' (she's white).

There was a girl in my high school named Kyle, but yeah it's quite a rare name!

On April 16 2013 02:33 Butterednuts wrote:

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Is this anything like KY Jelly?

Judging by the thread...

ieatkids5

United States4628 Posts

April 15 2013 17:55 GMT

sucks....
if i may advise, dont try to keep yourself from thinking about it. you should be thinking about it. think about it, let your heart feel everything it wants to, and just exert it all out. cry out, yell, punch your pillow, whatever. what you're feeling right now is what you need to feel in order to feel better, get your mind back together, and move on to the nex great adventure.

and after you do all this (maybe it'll take a few days, even a few weeks), you'll start to feel better. you won't mull over the same stuff over and over again, you won't beat yourself up thinking "oh what if i had done this or done that."

express what your body needs to express. your body knows what it should be doing. don't hold it back.

hoby2000

United States918 Posts

April 15 2013 20:00 GMT

#10

On April 16 2013 02:55 ieatkids5 wrote:
sucks....
if i may advise, dont try to keep yourself from thinking about it. you should be thinking about it. think about it, let your heart feel everything it wants to, and just exert it all out. cry out, yell, punch your pillow, whatever. what you're feeling right now is what you need to feel in order to feel better, get your mind back together, and move on to the nex great adventure.

and after you do all this (maybe it'll take a few days, even a few weeks), you'll start to feel better. you won't mull over the same stuff over and over again, you won't beat yourself up thinking "oh what if i had done this or done that."

express what your body needs to express. your body knows what it should be doing. don't hold it back.

This guy nailed it. You need to let it all out or you will keep it all in and it will boil over. Trust me from experience.