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Couldn't sleep, wrote sappy poem

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Wrongspeedy
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
United States1655 Posts
April 15 2013 07:46 GMT
#1
Girlfriend broke up with me recently. Was particularly restless tonight so I did some writing to maybe help myself calm down, get some stuff out. Wrote this silly poem first, figured I would at least share it .

(Kay-Why-Ellie)
Everyday my heart breaks a thousand times
whenever you cross my mind.
Take five big breaths,
inhale Count,
exhale Count,
rinse and repeat.
Beat my brain senseless
this pain seems endless

Whose mind is this?
Mine? Can't make sense
Patience
Patience
Patience

Silence... BOOM Sounds the broken heart.
Back to the ground
same pain, same heart
back to the start.

Everyday my heart breaks a thousand and one times.

**
It is better to be a human dissatisfied than a pig satisfied; better to be Socrates dissatisfied than a fool satisfied.- John Stuart Mill
sths
Profile Blog Joined October 2012
Australia192 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-04-15 08:21:20
April 15 2013 08:21 GMT
#2
I don't understand poetry because I'm too thick. But a world with more poems is better than a world with less poems.
Thank you for sharing
DarkPlasmaBall
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States44440 Posts
April 15 2013 12:28 GMT
#3
Sorry to hear about your break up

+ Show Spoiler +
Also, I can't get over the fact that "(Kay-Why-Ellie)" rhymes with KY Jelly.
"There is nothing more satisfying than looking at a crowd of people and helping them get what I love." ~Day[9] Daily #100
Wrongspeedy
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
United States1655 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-04-15 13:20:57
April 15 2013 13:17 GMT
#4
On April 15 2013 21:28 DarkPlasmaBall wrote:
Sorry to hear about your break up

+ Show Spoiler +
Also, I can't get over the fact that "(Kay-Why-Ellie)" rhymes with KY Jelly.


Bahaha. Yeah it was a play off her name Kyle. I should just say its a poem about ky jelly though

The poem is really just about how it feels when your laying in bed and you can't sleep and no matter how hard you try and distract your thoughts they always end up back on the same person. Take a moment think of something else, then watch as your brain relates whatever you are thinking back to what you don't want to think about.
It is better to be a human dissatisfied than a pig satisfied; better to be Socrates dissatisfied than a fool satisfied.- John Stuart Mill
DarkPlasmaBall
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States44440 Posts
April 15 2013 13:20 GMT
#5
On April 15 2013 22:17 Wrongspeedy wrote:
Show nested quote +
On April 15 2013 21:28 DarkPlasmaBall wrote:
Sorry to hear about your break up

+ Show Spoiler +
Also, I can't get over the fact that "(Kay-Why-Ellie)" rhymes with KY Jelly.


Bahaha. Yeah it was a play off her name Kyle. I should just say its a poem about ky jelly though


Ah, I get it K-Y-LE ^^
"There is nothing more satisfying than looking at a crowd of people and helping them get what I love." ~Day[9] Daily #100
sc4k
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United Kingdom5454 Posts
April 15 2013 16:27 GMT
#6
Her name was Kyle? Now that has got to be the most unlikely female name since my mate's girlfriend 'Lee' (she's white).
Butterednuts
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States859 Posts
April 15 2013 17:33 GMT
#7
On April 15 2013 16:46 Wrongspeedy wrote:
(Kay-Why-Ellie)


Is this anything like KY Jelly?
Chameleons Cast No Shadows
DarkPlasmaBall
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States44440 Posts
April 15 2013 17:55 GMT
#8
On April 16 2013 01:27 sc4k wrote:
Her name was Kyle? Now that has got to be the most unlikely female name since my mate's girlfriend 'Lee' (she's white).


There was a girl in my high school named Kyle, but yeah it's quite a rare name!

On April 16 2013 02:33 Butterednuts wrote:
Show nested quote +
On April 15 2013 16:46 Wrongspeedy wrote:
(Kay-Why-Ellie)


Is this anything like KY Jelly?


Judging by the thread...
"There is nothing more satisfying than looking at a crowd of people and helping them get what I love." ~Day[9] Daily #100
ieatkids5
Profile Blog Joined September 2004
United States4628 Posts
April 15 2013 17:55 GMT
#9
sucks....
if i may advise, dont try to keep yourself from thinking about it. you should be thinking about it. think about it, let your heart feel everything it wants to, and just exert it all out. cry out, yell, punch your pillow, whatever. what you're feeling right now is what you need to feel in order to feel better, get your mind back together, and move on to the nex great adventure.

and after you do all this (maybe it'll take a few days, even a few weeks), you'll start to feel better. you won't mull over the same stuff over and over again, you won't beat yourself up thinking "oh what if i had done this or done that."

express what your body needs to express. your body knows what it should be doing. don't hold it back.
hoby2000
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
United States918 Posts
April 15 2013 20:00 GMT
#10
On April 16 2013 02:55 ieatkids5 wrote:
sucks....
if i may advise, dont try to keep yourself from thinking about it. you should be thinking about it. think about it, let your heart feel everything it wants to, and just exert it all out. cry out, yell, punch your pillow, whatever. what you're feeling right now is what you need to feel in order to feel better, get your mind back together, and move on to the nex great adventure.

and after you do all this (maybe it'll take a few days, even a few weeks), you'll start to feel better. you won't mull over the same stuff over and over again, you won't beat yourself up thinking "oh what if i had done this or done that."

express what your body needs to express. your body knows what it should be doing. don't hold it back.


This guy nailed it. You need to let it all out or you will keep it all in and it will boil over. Trust me from experience.
A lesson without pain is meaningless for nothing can be gained without giving something in return.
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