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PaqMan
Profile Blog Joined April 2011
United States1475 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-01-05 07:22:21
December 29 2012 06:37 GMT
#1
It started with a gunshot. It always starts with a gunshot. I turned to look at my stepmom, only to see that she was asleep on the recliner with her earbuds in and an empty glass of raspberry vodka at her side.
I set down my iPad, slipped my Sol headphones off and onto my neck, and listened intently. There was silence for what seemed like a long while. The sound of sirens went off in the distance and the shouting of several men began to take place. I decided to leave my stepmom in peace. I grabbed my jacket and headed towards the door while plugging my headphones into my Android. A chilly breeze wrapped around me as I walked out.
The voices and shouting were much clearer now. I could see that the Fred Myers off in the distance was on fire. As the sound of sirens filled the air and neighbors flooded into the street the gunshots resumed, although this time there was more than one. They sounded like small arms to me, the kind of pistols you keep locked up at home in case of an intruder. I could hear several neighbors shouting over the noise and speaking of some sort of riot. That anarchy was taking over Portland. Looking back now, I wish that was the case.
It happened in a sort of blur. A woman began screaming somewhere down the street and I followed a group of men to her. She was trapped on the ground at the very end of her driveway as two guys lay on top beating her. One man approached and yanked a fellow off of her.
Lodged inside the man's mouth was chunks of this woman's flesh and meat, dripping down with blood. Everyone was in as much shock and disbelief as I was that we all sort of stood there with our jaws hanging.
I could not believe what I was fucking seeing.
The woman was still crying as the other fellow started to get up. The guy who was pulled off dropped the contents that were inside his mouth and let out a low screech. The man seemed to be frozen in fear as this sick fuck and his buddy stumbled towards him. There was something off about them. They looked disgusting, sort of moldy or something. As if they were decaying.
I didn't stick around to find out what happened, I immediately took off towards our house. I tried getting in but the door wouldn't budge. I forgot that the damned door locks on its own as soon as you close it. As I was banging on door the screaming and shouting grew louder and louder. It rose in intensity as each second passed. As I quickly looked down the street I could see a horde of people coming, at least 20. They didn't look right. They were angry, but not angry like a person. It was sort of an animalistic type of behavior. They were screaming, howling, moaning. In that brief second that I took to look at them, they appeared dead. As crazy as it sounds, and it still sends chills through me every time I think about that moment, they looked as if they were dead.
I grabbed a rock and smashed the window next to the door. I reached around to unlock it and cut myself on a shard of glass though at the time I hardly felt it. I stormed into the living room screaming for Jacquie, and she was nowhere to be found.

By this time I was in some sort of adrenaline rush. Panic mode switched on as I did a quick run through the house, screaming my stepmom's name. Fuck me, I couldn't find her anywhere.
My dad was at work and I had to get in touch with him. I pulled out my cell phone but there was no damned signal at all. Zero frickin' bars. I began to really freak out and took a seat in my stepmom's recliner. I tried assessing the situation but I couldn't hold concentration. I was essentially lost in this batshit insane city. Jacquie's fucking gone somewhere. I didn't know how to reach my dad.
My dad left his only gun with me back in Texas before he moved up to the Northwest and I knew that he never purchased another firearm since. I got up and went straight to their small bedroom. A sleek metal purple baseball bat was partially concealed under the bed, my dad's only defense against intruders. I took that and headed out the door.
I stepped out cautiously and looked around. We just passed the earliest day in the calendar and the Sun had already set. Oddly enough the sky had an orange hue to it, probably because of fires running unchecked throughout Broadway and downtown. Sirens, screaming, yelling, shooting, howling filled the chilly air. The sounds felt as if they were hitting me from every direction. Feeling was coming back to my arm as I began to notice it painfully throb. I hastily made my way down our front steps while trying to ignore the pain.
I stopped at the last concrete step and crouched behind the bushes. Our house was located at the very corner of the street so there were three options that I had. The street was crowded with those decaying fucks, some devouring other people and some just shambling around. They seemed to be slowly making their way down the opposite end of the street towards what sounded like fucking cannons going off. I even saw what looked like a couple soldiers in the crowd.
The neighbor's dog kept barking and attracted a few people from the main group. Poor George must have been left behind. That or his owners were dead. The door had to have been locked because these fellows were clawing at the door, desperately trying to get in.
I could have gone North down the main road but that would take me over the freeway and straight into Broadway. By the sound of things, shit really hit the fan in Broadway. Not to mention it was on fire.
Going down that street would've also taken me downtown, where my dad worked. But I didn't know what building or exactly where. God, I hope he was safe.
I took my last choice and followed the street South.

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EtherealDeath
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
United States8366 Posts
December 29 2012 06:47 GMT
#2
I'm going to assume this is fiction cause holy fuck if it is not.
GMarshal
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States22154 Posts
December 29 2012 06:49 GMT
#3
On December 29 2012 15:47 EtherealDeath wrote:
I'm going to assume this is fiction cause holy fuck if it is not.

"Oh, look, the zombie apocalypse. I guess I'll just pop into this house right here and post a blog on tl about it."

I like the story though ^_^
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shizaep
Profile Blog Joined January 2011
Canada2920 Posts
December 29 2012 07:05 GMT
#4
On December 29 2012 15:47 EtherealDeath wrote:
I'm going to assume this is fiction cause holy fuck if it is not.

Took me a while to catch on. "holy fuck" falls along the lines of what I was thinking.

Pretty good story, though. Will read the continuation.
You mean I just write stuff here and other people can see it?
Battleaxe
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
United States843 Posts
December 29 2012 07:29 GMT
#5
I'll keep reading if you keep writing
Without a community, we're all just a bunch of geeks.
EtherealDeath
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
United States8366 Posts
December 29 2012 08:42 GMT
#6
On December 29 2012 15:49 GMarshal wrote:
Show nested quote +
On December 29 2012 15:47 EtherealDeath wrote:
I'm going to assume this is fiction cause holy fuck if it is not.

"Oh, look, the zombie apocalypse. I guess I'll just pop into this house right here and post a blog on tl about it."

I like the story though ^_^

Could just be typical shitty part of some big city in America :D

Alternatively.... Issei Sagawa made some American clones. I think that might be the more frightening option, although I suppose you'd be safe as long as you weren't a Caucasian woman.
surfinbird1
Profile Joined September 2009
Germany999 Posts
December 29 2012 13:55 GMT
#7
Very well written. Grabbed my attention for sure.
life of lively to live to life of full life thx to shield battery
sorrowptoss
Profile Blog Joined June 2011
Canada1431 Posts
December 29 2012 14:11 GMT
#8
It's the apocalypse!! Run for the hills!!
Seriously, it's really nice to read. I like you.
Incze
Profile Blog Joined December 2011
Romania2058 Posts
December 29 2012 15:08 GMT
#9
Write more :D
Religion: Buckethead
AnachronisticAnarchy
Profile Blog Joined July 2011
United States2957 Posts
December 29 2012 17:02 GMT
#10
Definitely a promising start, which is something I rarely say. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
"How are you?" "I am fine, because it is not normal to scream in pain."
PassiveAce
Profile Blog Joined February 2011
United States18076 Posts
December 29 2012 17:11 GMT
#11
LOL Sick zombie apocalypse writing dude. Really well done, keep it up man!
5 stars.
Call me Marge Simpson cuz I love you homie
NOOBALOPSE
Profile Joined June 2011
Canada802 Posts
December 29 2012 17:17 GMT
#12
5 stars
PaqMan
Profile Blog Joined April 2011
United States1475 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-01-05 07:22:40
December 30 2012 04:53 GMT
#13
Edit: Added into the first post.
t(ツ)t
PaqMan
Profile Blog Joined April 2011
United States1475 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-01-08 22:49:47
January 05 2013 07:34 GMT
#14
I came up with this short story during my holiday break. Sadly, my break is over and I'm back in school and no longer have free-time
I liked where this story was heading, especially since I was just writing on the fly with no certain planned out direction or plot. I will be continuing this apocalypse, I just won't be able to update it very often.
Thank you guys for the encouraging comments
t(ツ)t
PaqMan
Profile Blog Joined April 2011
United States1475 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-01-16 07:26:26
January 16 2013 07:24 GMT
#15
There were people laying on the sidewalks, some in the street. Hell there was even some walking around on the fucking road like they didn't know better. I didn't even dare taking a step onto the street. Knowing how fast people drive on that road, plus it looked like a god damn apocalypse outside. I didn't want to chance getting ran over so I stayed off. There were fuckers on the sidewalk too distracted with eating a fucking corpse, I hurtled over them and didn't even stop. I just kept on running. I was so afraid I knew if I stopped and tried to intervene, everything would have ended for me. I didn't know what the hell was happening, the only person I could help was myself.
The one location that I knew how to get too in this forsaken city was the nearest park. I had no choice but to make my way there.
I turned into the church parking lot and my god, it was one of the most depressing things I seen. You could hear shots going off inside the building. The sounds of people shouting, women screaming, kids crying. And a horde of those things just pushing, shoving, clawing, trying to be the first one inside. A house of the Lord being besieged and I took advantage of the heinous opportunity to pass through without having to deal with one of those things.
As I turned the corner onto the next street I stepped on him. The feeling of stepping onto his stomach is indescribable. I guess the best I could say is that it felt "slooshy". Not sure if that makes any sense. It was as if, if I stomped down hard enough he would pop. Like a fat roach.
He snagged onto my ankle and I panicked. I let out a little squeal, sounded damn embarrassing, that attracted some walkers from the parking lot.
I swung my bat down hard and broke that fucker's forearms but he still didn't let go. Grip was tight, I think I was a little lucky that his nails were short or they would've cut into my skin. He brought his head up, mouth gurgling teeth gnashing and all. I got a good look at his face, before I made it concave.
He was old, at least in the 50s. Typical bald spot in the middle of his head. Mottled nasty-looking skin. He had a double chin, which I thought was pretty damn funny. The oddest thing though was his eyes. You know how staring into a strangers eyes, it feels a little creepy right? This was the opposite. It was calm. Almost serene. No matter all the shit that was happening around us, there was a sort of calmness or acceptance in his eyes. It felt as if I was staring into another human's eyes while they were telling me everything was going to be okay. Shit, he WAS a human.
I smashed his face in and stumbled off before the others got to me.
I was carrying the weight of a guilty conscience. I was a murderer.
t(ツ)t
ffswowsucks
Profile Blog Joined August 2005
Greece2294 Posts
Last Edited: 2013-01-16 09:33:20
January 16 2013 09:32 GMT
#16
Is that what happens if you play too much dayZ?
I had some dreams ...
Terran in particular is a notoriously strong race for a no brain skillhand bot style.
PaqMan
Profile Blog Joined April 2011
United States1475 Posts
January 18 2013 00:14 GMT
#17
Lol I haven't been playing enough! I'm just excited about the standalone and another game coming out soon.
t(ツ)t
Eriksen
Profile Joined December 2012
Micronesia720 Posts
January 18 2013 03:02 GMT
#18
Great stuff! Just checked this blog hehe. Continue the story pl0x.

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