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USK
Profile Blog Joined January 2011
173 Posts
July 09 2011 07:36 GMT
#1
So one activity that I always wanted to get into is the production and the creation side of music instead of just listening to it. Since it is the summer right before I move away to college, and because I have nothing better to do with my time right now, I decided to try and create a new song each week. I will be posting them here to get critiques and just general assessment of what I had created, and hopefully, eventually applause. But not to get ahead of myself, be aware that none of this is good by any means so far, I have just begun learning how to use the tools at my disposal; before anyone asks, I am using FL Studio currently.

So to get down to business with the first song. I basically sat this morning just fiddling around with the oscillator controls and it just so happened that the two bits I had fit together somewhat. So I spent another two hours or so extending it out and just dicking around with it.



So when I listen to it in retrospect, I think the main bass line is a little too hitchy and could be cleaned up; I think I need to actually use a specific scale next time or something so that it could sound a little less hodgepodge. It also takes too long to get going and is extremely repetitive. Maybe I should move the one bit at 2:40 up more.. and change up the main synth a couple more times. Maybe another kind of fill. I don't know. What do all you guy's think?

Eventually I would like to make it sound more professional but I want to get the basic structure settled first.

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rawe
Profile Joined March 2010
Sweden83 Posts
July 09 2011 07:40 GMT
#2
Please stop.
Imalengrat
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Australia365 Posts
July 09 2011 07:51 GMT
#3
I basically sat this morning just fiddling around with the oscillator controls and it just so happened that the two bits I had fit together somewhat.
This is basically what it sounds like to be honest. Just fiddling around.
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Gak2
Profile Joined September 2010
Canada418 Posts
July 09 2011 07:58 GMT
#4
it beats friday
USK
Profile Blog Joined January 2011
173 Posts
July 09 2011 08:07 GMT
#5
On July 09 2011 16:40 rawe wrote:
Please stop.


Well I am not going to, so good critiques and advice would help alleviate the pain in the future.
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HackBenjamin
Profile Blog Joined January 2011
Canada1094 Posts
July 09 2011 08:51 GMT
#6
Kind of reminds me of Dr Oizo or Benny Benassi. Pretty good for a start, but it does kind feel like it's dragging towards the end. Your drops are kind of well placed, but lack "oomph". A little more variety in sounds and melodies would be nice. Try not to throw down such a static bass line, because it can really dictate the flow of the song. Tighten up your timings a little bit.

Good luck
edc
Profile Blog Joined May 2011
United States666 Posts
July 09 2011 09:44 GMT
#7
On July 09 2011 16:40 rawe wrote:
Please stop.

I read this, played the song, and burst out laughing.

I think the 'dubstep' part of the song (with the deep and thick notes) was too repetitive. It doesn't sound better if you slowly add drum beats to it. Just put a little more work, and I'm sure it will sound fine .
“There are two kinds of people in this world, those with loaded guns, and those who dig. You dig.” - Clint Eastwood
Artifice
Profile Joined May 2010
United States523 Posts
July 09 2011 10:18 GMT
#8
As someone who listens to a lot of this type of music, I found it really not that bad, but not that good either. It was like it had the potential to be good but wasn't. Keep at it imo. Really if you just cleaned up the lawnmower part a little bit it could easily be pretty decent.
dellesh1ruH
Profile Joined August 2009
Denmark509 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-07-09 10:34:39
July 09 2011 10:34 GMT
#9
We all start some place, my advice to you, is to go on youtube watch a bunch of tutorials. I am using FL studio too, and if you have some questions, feel free to ask!
Pain is temporary, Glory is forever!
fatum
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Spain83 Posts
July 09 2011 11:17 GMT
#10
Consider studying harmony.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harmony
Get some nice books on any music shop or find them on internet. Harmony is dense, but absolutely necesary for music.

Any song should have a pattern, well defined, clean and sweet for the ears. You kinda made a pattern, but didn't work on it enough probably because you lack the knowledge to do it (wich is normal if you havent study music before).

Find any book you can about music theory and study them. It wont be boring, it will open your eyes to the huge wonderful world of music.

One personal tip: try to get rid of FL as soon as you can. It isnt powerful enough. From cubase & protools, to ardour... there are plenty of stronger applications out there to create digital music.

Also, dont fear to research any info you can get about professional audio. Its a technical world, but digital professional audio tools are your instrument. Dont hesitate to analyse and study it!

I've been into music since I was 3 years old and started playing violin. I swear you wont regret to study music theory. I thought I would, but actually I didn't when I tried.

Hope this helps somehow.
Best luck in your endeavours.

glhf
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