http://soundcloud.com/ehrencrona/ehrencrona-hardly-ever
ps. if you happen to read this, I put additional white noise in it especially for you, Rustymike! :D
TSSSHHHHHHHH.
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http://soundcloud.com/ehrencrona/ehrencrona-hardly-ever ps. if you happen to read this, I put additional white noise in it especially for you, Rustymike! :D TSSSHHHHHHHH. | ||
super_toast
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On June 02 2011 12:48 super_toast wrote: I like it, it's really good. It could use more of a build though right before the drop at 4:30. What do you use to produce? Cool. I thought about that right before actually, the second drop is bad. I just use FL studio and sylenth1 plugs on a random laptop, and monitor/mix with my ath-m50 headphones. | ||
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On June 02 2011 12:51 super_toast wrote: Oh nice, I use FL studio too. My stuff is nowhere near on this level though haha. What sample packs do you use for your drums? Vengeance essential house vol 2 and Sample Magic progressive house are the ones I use mainly + a bunch of free sample packs from here and there. | ||
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sob3k
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1. The piano chords brought in at 1:10 are too harsh and too loud, over the course of the song they are also too unchanging. They need to be brought in at a slightly lower volume and need some knob twisting of probably the attack and hipass to help maintain interest. I would also love it if you added in a 4 part variation later in the song in addition to the 2 part piano bit you have now. The paino chords in are in the forefront of the track so you need to do a bit more with them than just slam them down for 16 bars. This should be easy to fix just add 1-2automations and a slightly more complex variation. 2. Gosh that's really it, really needs a few slight variations on the piAno part and some cutoff/attack work when you play it in calmer parts of the song...needs more inflection in the quieter parts. | ||
hifriend
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On June 02 2011 13:02 sob3k wrote: Wow, you're getting alot better. Here are my comments. 1. The piano chords brought in at 1:10 are too harsh and too loud, over the course of the song they are also too unchanging. They need to be brought in at a slightly lower volume and need some knob twisting of probably the attack and hipass to help maintain interest. I would also love it if you added in a 4 part variation later in the song in addition to the 2 part piano bit you have now. The paino chords in are in the forefront of the track so you need to do a bit more with them than just slam them down for 16 bars. This should be easy to fix just add 1-2automations and a slightly more complex variation. 2. Gosh that's really it, really needs a few slight variations on the piAno part and some cutoff/attack work when you play it in calmer parts of the song...needs more inflection in the quieter parts. Alright appreciate the feedback! Gonna see if I can come up with some sweet variations and going to make some adjustments to the piano. | ||
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KrisElmqvist
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as i said to window, you have done your homework and can produce a quality sound. Now you got to actually write the track aswell. From a commercial POV this track is banging, but from an artistical POV youre not breaking new ground. Gotta choose what direction you want to go yourself! | ||
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On June 03 2011 07:04 Starparty wrote: good stuff man. drops are heavier than in the previous track. However i think you are walking a bit in the same trap as matisse & Sadko i.e just copying tim bergs bromance pretty much down to detail. The possibilities are endless so why copy a sound when you can make your own as i said to window, you have done your homework and can produce a quality sound. Now you got to actually write the track aswell. From a commercial POV this track is banging, but from an artistical POV youre not breaking new ground. Gotta choose what direction you want to go yourself! Hehe you're completely right, I tend to mimic other tracks for the most part right now. But on the plus side I usually pick up a couple of tricks etc in the process that I might be able to apply when/if I find my own sound at some point. | ||
KrisElmqvist
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On June 03 2011 07:09 hifriend wrote: Show nested quote + On June 03 2011 07:04 Starparty wrote: good stuff man. drops are heavier than in the previous track. However i think you are walking a bit in the same trap as matisse & Sadko i.e just copying tim bergs bromance pretty much down to detail. The possibilities are endless so why copy a sound when you can make your own as i said to window, you have done your homework and can produce a quality sound. Now you got to actually write the track aswell. From a commercial POV this track is banging, but from an artistical POV youre not breaking new ground. Gotta choose what direction you want to go yourself! Hehe you're completely right, I tend to mimic other tracks for the most part right now. But on the plus side I usually pick up a couple of tricks etc in the process that I might be able to apply when/if I find my own sound at some point. each for his own, and that sounds like a logical approach | ||
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