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hifriend
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
China7935 Posts
June 02 2011 03:36 GMT
#1
Well I made another house/progressive house track, and was hoping to get some feedback from you guys once again. I tried to use piano for the main lead again because last time went kinda bad. There's a strong possibility I'm just extremely tired and will wake up tomorrow only to despise every single part of it and wonder wtf I was doing, but anyway..

http://soundcloud.com/ehrencrona/ehrencrona-hardly-ever

ps. if you happen to read this, I put additional white noise in it especially for you, Rustymike! :D

TSSSHHHHHHHH.

*****
super_toast
Profile Blog Joined November 2009
United States269 Posts
June 02 2011 03:48 GMT
#2
I like it, it's really good. It could use more of a build though right before the drop at 4:30. What do you use to produce?
Crafting Stars has never been this sexy
hifriend
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
China7935 Posts
June 02 2011 03:51 GMT
#3
On June 02 2011 12:48 super_toast wrote:
I like it, it's really good. It could use more of a build though right before the drop at 4:30. What do you use to produce?

Cool. I thought about that right before actually, the second drop is bad. I just use FL studio and sylenth1 plugs on a random laptop, and monitor/mix with my ath-m50 headphones.
super_toast
Profile Blog Joined November 2009
United States269 Posts
June 02 2011 03:51 GMT
#4
Oh nice, I use FL studio too. My stuff is nowhere near on this level though haha. What sample packs do you use for your drums?
Crafting Stars has never been this sexy
hifriend
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
China7935 Posts
June 02 2011 03:54 GMT
#5
On June 02 2011 12:51 super_toast wrote:
Oh nice, I use FL studio too. My stuff is nowhere near on this level though haha. What sample packs do you use for your drums?

Vengeance essential house vol 2 and Sample Magic progressive house are the ones I use mainly + a bunch of free sample packs from here and there.
super_toast
Profile Blog Joined November 2009
United States269 Posts
June 02 2011 03:59 GMT
#6
Cool, keep at it man you've got good potential
Crafting Stars has never been this sexy
sob3k
Profile Blog Joined August 2009
United States7572 Posts
June 02 2011 04:02 GMT
#7
Wow, you're getting alot better. Here are my comments.

1. The piano chords brought in at 1:10 are too harsh and too loud, over the course of the song they are also too unchanging. They need to be brought in at a slightly lower volume and need some knob twisting of probably the attack and hipass to help maintain interest. I would also love it if you added in a 4 part variation later in the song in addition to the 2 part piano bit you have now. The paino chords in are in the forefront of the track so you need to do a bit more with them than just slam them down for 16 bars. This should be easy to fix just add 1-2automations and a slightly more complex variation.

2. Gosh that's really it, really needs a few slight variations on the piAno part and some cutoff/attack work when you play it in calmer parts of the song...needs more inflection in the quieter parts.

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hifriend
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
China7935 Posts
June 02 2011 04:17 GMT
#8
On June 02 2011 13:02 sob3k wrote:
Wow, you're getting alot better. Here are my comments.

1. The piano chords brought in at 1:10 are too harsh and too loud, over the course of the song they are also too unchanging. They need to be brought in at a slightly lower volume and need some knob twisting of probably the attack and hipass to help maintain interest. I would also love it if you added in a 4 part variation later in the song in addition to the 2 part piano bit you have now. The paino chords in are in the forefront of the track so you need to do a bit more with them than just slam them down for 16 bars. This should be easy to fix just add 1-2automations and a slightly more complex variation.

2. Gosh that's really it, really needs a few slight variations on the piAno part and some cutoff/attack work when you play it in calmer parts of the song...needs more inflection in the quieter parts.


Alright appreciate the feedback! Gonna see if I can come up with some sweet variations and going to make some adjustments to the piano.
hifriend
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
China7935 Posts
June 02 2011 21:57 GMT
#9
any more criticism?

(bump)
Starparty
Profile Blog Joined December 2004
Sweden1963 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-06-02 22:06:44
June 02 2011 22:04 GMT
#10
good stuff man. drops are heavier than in the previous track. However i think you are walking a bit in the same trap as matisse & Sadko i.e just copying tim bergs bromance pretty much down to detail. The possibilities are endless so why copy a sound when you can make your own

as i said to window, you have done your homework and can produce a quality sound. Now you got to actually write the track aswell. From a commercial POV this track is banging, but from an artistical POV youre not breaking new ground. Gotta choose what direction you want to go yourself!
The artist formerly known as Starparty
hifriend
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
China7935 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-06-02 22:10:30
June 02 2011 22:09 GMT
#11
On June 03 2011 07:04 Starparty wrote:
good stuff man. drops are heavier than in the previous track. However i think you are walking a bit in the same trap as matisse & Sadko i.e just copying tim bergs bromance pretty much down to detail. The possibilities are endless so why copy a sound when you can make your own

as i said to window, you have done your homework and can produce a quality sound. Now you got to actually write the track aswell. From a commercial POV this track is banging, but from an artistical POV youre not breaking new ground. Gotta choose what direction you want to go yourself!

Hehe you're completely right, I tend to mimic other tracks for the most part right now. But on the plus side I usually pick up a couple of tricks etc in the process that I might be able to apply when/if I find my own sound at some point.
Starparty
Profile Blog Joined December 2004
Sweden1963 Posts
June 03 2011 12:35 GMT
#12
On June 03 2011 07:09 hifriend wrote:
Show nested quote +
On June 03 2011 07:04 Starparty wrote:
good stuff man. drops are heavier than in the previous track. However i think you are walking a bit in the same trap as matisse & Sadko i.e just copying tim bergs bromance pretty much down to detail. The possibilities are endless so why copy a sound when you can make your own

as i said to window, you have done your homework and can produce a quality sound. Now you got to actually write the track aswell. From a commercial POV this track is banging, but from an artistical POV youre not breaking new ground. Gotta choose what direction you want to go yourself!

Hehe you're completely right, I tend to mimic other tracks for the most part right now. But on the plus side I usually pick up a couple of tricks etc in the process that I might be able to apply when/if I find my own sound at some point.


each for his own, and that sounds like a logical approach
The artist formerly known as Starparty
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