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storm44
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dahornnn
United Kingdom395 Posts
On October 27 2010 16:39 storm44 wrote: it kind of looks like you just copy and pasted a bunch of facts and pictures =/ thats what school work is LOL | ||
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Graham
Canada1259 Posts
Throwing facts at the viewer via word form isn't the best either. Have you considered adding voice-over and/or background music to make it more engaging? :S | ||
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EcterA
United States949 Posts
On October 27 2010 16:51 Graham wrote: The whole zoom-out method is kinda.. inefficient. I'm left having to wait until the entire frame is revealed before I can read what it's trying to tell me. Throwing facts at the viewer via word form isn't the best either. Have you considered adding voice-over and/or background music to make it more engaging? :S These are all great notes, I want to second them. You might also consider slowing down the transition times, so that we have time to read them. Also, if you stick with the power point cards, try to get as much information onto one card for each topic. When you have two cards of "Effects of Binge Drinking" We get confused and aren't sure if we've seen this information yet or not. Again, background music will help a lot. And if one of you has a decent speaking voice, and a not terrible microphone, some voice over would help. I think it's a great topic you chose, now it's just about making it as powerful and effective as possible. Instead of "Wait there's help!!!!" maybe something along the lines of "If you are struggling with binge drinking, here are some resources..." or "if you or someone you know..." I know it can sometimes sound cliche, but it's important to remind people that while your life may be fine, your best friend could be struggling, and that you can help them if they are. Again, great idea, good job gathering the information, now just make sure it's as clear as possible for the audience. | ||
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storm44
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I just meant that it looks like you really didn't put any effort in it, and as the others said putting some music / voice-overs would make it a lot more enjoyable and look like you actually tried | ||
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BaltA
Norway849 Posts
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Ronald_McD
Canada807 Posts
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s010002004
Australia11 Posts
Even though this is a group project I was the only one who is doing any work so that's why it looks a bit shitty. Does anyone know any good music that i can use as the background music for this video? | ||
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