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SaetZero
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DeckOneBell
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SaetZero
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Karliath
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*Your race: Protoss *League: Silver *Approx. rating: Unknown *Link to replay: http://www.mediafire.com/?fwdttg8b757kyot *Opponents race: Terran *Opponents approx. rating: Unknown, Silver *Short description of replay: Protoss player attempts to play a more macro oriented style, fending off pushes and drops before pushing out himself by the end. *Any preferences from me: Concentrate on the Protoss player, in terms of what he's doing right and wrong. I guided him this game, trying to get him to expand and macro. Usually, he just "one base"s. *Other: This obviously isn't me, it's my cousin. Sorry for not following the rules 100%, but I did what I could. *Name: Darktide *Your race: Protoss *League: Silver *Approx. rating: Unknown *Link to replay: http://www.mediafire.com/?9h27s2u7go5djvv *Opponents race: Terran *Opponents approx. rating: Unknown, Silver *Short description of replay: From what I can remember, the Terran player goes for 3Rax Marauders, and the Protoss player manages to fend it off with zealots, transitioning into a 4Gate before attacking the opponent's base. *Any preferences from me: Concentrate on the Protoss player's flaws and mistakes. *Other: This obviously isn't me, it's my cousin. Sorry for not following the rules 100%, but I did what I could. Some things my cousin need to hear from someone else's mouth. Help me help him, and I'll give some good feedback on your casts  | ||
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SaetZero
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Karliath
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It sounds a little like you are casting to yourself in your head, only that you are actually speaking out loud. Does that make sense? For example, before talking to my professor, I might sound out what I want to say. Sure, everything I'm saying is correct, but it feels off. Try to talk as if there are people right there in front of you. Try to get your sentence to flow better. Closer to the beginning, when you pause the game and analyze, sometimes your comments are like, chop- chop- chop. Speed is fine? I prefer faster talking, if only because you get more stuff in haha. There's less of a need to pause too! Obviously you do it to analyze the game, but I think there are a few times where it was unnecessary. Game sound needs to be quieter. Your voice has a er. rumble. It would be better if you could speak more clearly, but if that's just how you talk, then wtv. Try to sound a bit more excited too. I know, this vod was educational and all that, but it makes the overall feel a bit better. I don't know if everything I said was correct, but that's just my initial reactions. Thanks for the cast! | ||
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SaetZero
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