EPTHere it is, not as sexy as the original ofc. Its not finished yet, I must complete the uniform
![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/tg12.jpg)
TossGirl drawing
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disciple
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Here it is, not as sexy as the original ofc. Its not finished yet, I must complete the uniform | ||
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arb
Noobville17921 Posts
what the hell happened with her head? | ||
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himurakenshin
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Neivler
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Seraphim
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DyEnasTy
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BuGzlToOnl
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disciple
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
![[image loading]](http://koreanprosc.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/tossgirl-1-copy.jpg) Next time use one of these http://www.wfbrood.com/Article/ShowArticle.asp?ArticleID=15089 ![[image loading]](http://www.wfbrood.com/Article/UploadFiles/200703/20070317194254789.jpg) ![[image loading]](http://www.wfbrood.com/Article/UploadFiles/200703/20070317194254652.jpg) ![[image loading]](http://www.wfbrood.com/Article/UploadFiles/200703/20070317194254634.jpg) ![[image loading]](http://www.wfbrood.com/Article/UploadFiles/200703/20070317194255358.jpg) | ||
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disciple
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![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/safsafa.jpg) hmm... | ||
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fanatacist
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Overall I think it's a great picture, but not a great picture of TossGirl. | ||
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fanatacist
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Kennelie
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=104064 + Show Spoiler + ![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/sav22copy.jpg) http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=102070 + Show Spoiler + ![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/bisucopy.jpg) ![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/bisucopy-1.jpg) I think you should stick to photoshop work, you are very talented in that dept. | ||
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GreEny K
Germany7312 Posts
1000TH POST!!! Is DT next or Corsair??!?!?! | ||
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disciple
9070 Posts
and TG is not as pretty as she used to be | ||
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ilj.psa
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
On December 15 2009 04:59 disciple wrote: yea, but its kind of difficult to work alone. I mean try spending 5-6 hours straight on a drawing. No matter how bad it is in the end you wont see the mistakes and it will look just fine to you Actually, I think from the opposite perspective. No matter how much time I spend I feel like I can't get it perfect. And even in the rare chance that I make something perfect, I always think well what if I modified that - It might look cooler. It's basically endless for me. Btw, I don't think this kind of drawing should take that long (i'm not that familiar with photoshop - I could be wrong). Maybe you should take a break after 30 minutes or so and then come back to it. | ||
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disciple
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On December 15 2009 05:01 CharlieMurphy wrote: Actually, I think from the opposite perspective. No matter how much time I spend I feel like I can't get it perfect. And even in the rare chance that I make something perfect, I always think well what if I modified that - It might look cooler. It's basically endless for me. I'm getting super tired at one point, especially if the drawing is made with mouse, which is the case with this one. Anyway I dont have any sort of objectivity from one point. Thats why I post my shitty work, so you can judge it for me. It eventually ends up with a lot of "thats awful man" but I guess I'm just that bad by default btw, it does take some time in photoshop- the face only has more than 50 layers | ||
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
There is a huge course of DVDs that I downloaded (but have yet to watch - skimmed through it) on drawing faces and people that is pretty good. When I get home I can link you it. GIL15 ps- wow 50 layers, This is why I hate photoshop. I'd rather use MSpaint. | ||
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disciple
9070 Posts
Maybe using a tablet will improve my work, at least it will make everything look smoother. But I doubt thats actually the main problem | ||
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n3gative
Canada369 Posts
On December 15 2009 04:59 disciple wrote: yea, but its kind of difficult to work alone. I mean try spending 5-6 hours straight on a drawing. No matter how bad it is in the end you wont see the mistakes and it will look just fine to you and TG is not as pretty as she used to be that's why you always step away from the drawing every hour or so to take in what you've done and what looks wrong. If you're not doing that, start doing it. it's not a noticeable likeness but there's some aspects to it that work. The colouring style with the clean cuts is working out well but the tones could be improved, mainly the mids and the darks. There's no reason why you should have 50 layers for the face, unless you're hyper rendering a figure. Since you're not blending the colours(nothing wrong with that, the colouring is the strongest part on the pic) you'd need maybe 3-4 layers for highlights, mids, darks. 50 is going overboard, always try to keep it simple. Keep practicing and study lots of anatomy. | ||
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disciple
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disciple
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skronch
United States2717 Posts
On December 15 2009 05:35 disciple wrote: hahaha. i think the face needs to be a bit narrower and tallerbtw, I showed it to my roommate and he was like "?" "well ppl dont like the face man!" "just draw bigger boobs and tight ass and no one will notice that" | ||
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GW.Methos
United States249 Posts
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Zurles
United Kingdom1659 Posts
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FirstBorn
Romania3955 Posts
On December 15 2009 05:42 GW.Methos wrote: learn to draw learn to post Well disciple, I don't wanna break your bubble but you've got to work a bit on your drawing. Not bad, but not particularly good either | ||
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Carthac
United States393 Posts
On December 15 2009 05:42 GW.Methos wrote: learn to draw These aren't the World of Warcraft forums. Take your lame attempt at trolling elsewhere | ||
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NeV
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Pyrrhuloxia
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prOxi.swAMi
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tube
United States1475 Posts
i honestly thought this thread was a joke when i saw the pic sorry | ||
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EvilSky
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EvilSky
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Mastermind
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disciple
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On December 15 2009 07:28 Mastermind wrote: The head is the same size as her torso. at least that was rather intentional | ||
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Wotans_Fire
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disciple
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I like your ID | ||
Flicky
England2668 Posts
On December 15 2009 04:41 disciple wrote: Its been awhile since I last posted my own work here, so I hope I've improved a little since the last CJ drawing attempts. Here it is, not as sexy as the original ofc. Its not finished yet, I must complete the uniform ![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/disc.jpg) Hmmmm... | ||
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disciple
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freelander
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love1another
United States1844 Posts
Good job! | ||
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hyst.eric.al
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igotmyown
United States4291 Posts
On December 15 2009 04:41 disciple wrote: Its been awhile since I last posted my own work here, so I hope I've improved a little since the last CJ drawing attempts. Here it is, not as sexy as the original ofc. Its not finished yet, I must complete the uniform My unartistic opinion: her hair is too short, although in that STX picture I guess it was short as well Usually the hair is less poofy She usually wears a lot of white makeup for that classic korean "I've never seen sunlight in my life" look And she seems to prefer a side profile for shots Overall, the head looks more like + Show Spoiler + ![[image loading]](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/7/77/RukiaAnime.jpg) | ||
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dasanivan
United States532 Posts
at this point you face a problem greater than just "her head is too big." the problem is that you don't seem to pay enough attention to whatever it is you're drawing. almost every drawing you have posted looks the same. instead of putting precedence on what it is you're looking at, you put precedence on your own style. if you're not loyal to your subjects you won't ever see them appear in your drawings. when you work for hours on your drawings, how much time do you spend comparing your subject and your drawing? in the case that you're more of a cartoonist, the above doesn't apply, and i applaud your style. it is very cute and you are quite good at coloring. | ||
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