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petu
Finland81 Posts
Hi all, This is a short documentary we made on our first school year with no money and too little time. Hope you guys enjoy it and maybe even link it to your friends who know nothing about ESPORTS. This was made to help those people understand what and why we love this thing. Hope you enjoy it. | ||
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KiLL_ORdeR
United States1518 Posts
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fezvez
France3021 Posts
Well, I just watched it. Give it a try guys, it's worth it. So, the simple fact that I watched it whole necessarily means that I appreciated it at least a bit. First of all, I liked the insights on a progamer I am not entirely familiar with. Some good shots, and nice commentaries. However, it is much easier for me to point out things I didn't like, so excuse me if I go an a rant =) First of all, I felt that the whole documentary lacked... direction. What are you trying to get to? What's the storyline? That was my main gripe. Then, who is this guy who makes most of the talk? Just a fan? You? Your prof? You could display it somewhere. There are also some tiny details. Who was that top terran (Liquipedia suggests it was TOP)? Perhaps you could have chosen to show the winning moment when TOP taps out. Why is everything subbed except during the fight against Welmu? You could have subbed it too! Transitions are not always smooth. When you go on the "losing" part, it was OK, you used one of Naama's loss. But the thing on how progamers are athletes just fell flat. Then the one where Naama says he's a good LAN player too. But don't forget, I liked it! My fav thing : Naama is not someone who washes the dishes! | ||
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llIH
Norway2144 Posts
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effecto
France142 Posts
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petu
Finland81 Posts
On May 09 2013 17:24 fezvez wrote: Hey there! Well, I just watched it. Give it a try guys, it's worth it. So, the simple fact that I watched it whole necessarily means that I appreciated it at least a bit. First of all, I liked the insights on a progamer I am not entirely familiar with. Some good shots, and nice commentaries. However, it is much easier for me to point out things I didn't like, so excuse me if I go an a rant =) First of all, I felt that the whole documentary lacked... direction. What are you trying to get to? What's the storyline? That was my main gripe. Then, who is this guy who makes most of the talk? Just a fan? You? Your prof? You could display it somewhere. There are also some tiny details. Who was that top terran (Liquipedia suggests it was TOP)? Perhaps you could have chosen to show the winning moment when TOP taps out. Why is everything subbed except during the fight against Welmu? You could have subbed it too! Transitions are not always smooth. When you go on the "losing" part, it was OK, you used one of Naama's loss. But the thing on how progamers are athletes just fell flat. Then the one where Naama says he's a good LAN player too. But don't forget, I liked it! My fav thing : Naama is not someone who washes the dishes! Fair criticism, no hard feelings. The guy who does most of the talking is Teemu "wabbit" Hiilinen, a Finnish eSports veteran whose last job was chair of the Finnish eSports federation. That is written in the end credits. I thought about putting a introductionary graphic there, but decided against it. The top terran he is talking about in the beginning is MVP. Naama won against him in Homestory Cup V. There is a short shot of MVP later in the movie that some fans might be able to connect to the beginning  .Not subbing the commentary in Finnish was also my decision. I thought it would be fun to just listening the commentary, it's not like there is any relevant information in there. Thanks for the comments! | ||
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Jusba
Finland189 Posts
On May 09 2013 17:24 fezvez wrote: Hey there! Well, I just watched it. Give it a try guys, it's worth it. So, the simple fact that I watched it whole necessarily means that I appreciated it at least a bit. First of all, I liked the insights on a progamer I am not entirely familiar with. Some good shots, and nice commentaries. However, it is much easier for me to point out things I didn't like, so excuse me if I go an a rant =) First of all, I felt that the whole documentary lacked... direction. What are you trying to get to? What's the storyline? That was my main gripe. Then, who is this guy who makes most of the talk? Just a fan? You? Your prof? You could display it somewhere. There are also some tiny details. Who was that top terran (Liquipedia suggests it was TOP)? Perhaps you could have chosen to show the winning moment when TOP taps out. Why is everything subbed except during the fight against Welmu? You could have subbed it too! Transitions are not always smooth. When you go on the "losing" part, it was OK, you used one of Naama's loss. But the thing on how progamers are athletes just fell flat. Then the one where Naama says he's a good LAN player too. But don't forget, I liked it! My fav thing : Naama is not someone who washes the dishes! The other guy talking is Wabbit and its said in the end credits. Could have been said when he was first shown tho. Everybody knows him in the Finnish scene tho. I really hoped the vid would of been longer so maybe there could have been a storyline. Like you said it was a bit lacking. I enjoyed watching this tho . | ||
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NervO
Netherlands511 Posts
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petu
Finland81 Posts
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Kaelaris
United Kingdom788 Posts
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WombaT
Northern Ireland26224 Posts
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OOAK
Israel53 Posts
where is he now ? did he tried to qualify to WCS EU ? | ||
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HaRuHi
1220 Posts
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Weavel
Finland9221 Posts
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xzumiex
Belgium100 Posts
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y0su
Finland7871 Posts
On May 09 2013 18:21 mouzKaelaris wrote: I need to come back to Finland sometime :< Should visit around the first weekend of August...  | ||
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Cereb
Denmark3388 Posts
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Technique
Netherlands1542 Posts
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Impudity
Finland25 Posts
I just wish he'd get back the motivation to perform, because talent he has aplenty, motivation he seems to currently lack. | ||
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nkr
Sweden5451 Posts
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