On September 01 2010 07:02 Rah wrote:
Not bad but not as good as terrans in the building. I wouldn't suggest talking about pro gamers too much, something more relateable like maybe make a ryhme about how toss doesn't need nothing but 4 warpgate, and if i make a robotics it's to drop some more soldiers in your base. or warp in some zealots with my storm drop etc etc. talking about more strategies and protoss dominated scenarios in general might be good, or pick on how ez it is to play. even if it's exhagerated who cares, that's what made the terran one good. you want that power rap that makes the races feel OP. Just my opinion though. Not too crazy about that beat but it's alright.

edit: you can talk some about the building set ups like scouting pylons or sealing of free expo vs a helpless zerg. or do a shout out some of those maps that protoss win on in their sleep. also they're some hard mother fuckers for "space elves" should play on that. maybe deepen the voice at a part or something. they don't go down ez, you can compare them to spartans. just throwing shit out there

thanks.. yea I might be able to use some of those suggestions

Suspesne

United States101 Posts

September 01 2010 02:02 GMT

#23

bump

Suspesne

United States101 Posts

September 01 2010 07:12 GMT

#24

still looking for ideas

Rah

United States973 Posts

September 01 2010 19:09 GMT

#25

be real, all you need is four warpgates,
robo? it gets my soldiers in your base,
air? that's a distraction for the bust,
ignore void rays, your base gonn be dust,
if it's dust, I got the templar to clean up,
make a joke out ya squad, like a PvP nub,
my pheonix makes your turtle into ran over turtle,
pimpest play, benching tanks, ain't nothing to me,
even probes got more diesel than a SCV,
chargelots like manlots, bitch, I'm Reach,
who's missing dragoons, more like gaygoons,
Immortals, stupid as fuck, but they blow shit up,
counter any that, I got pylons all over the map,
double flank your army, hit your base from the back.

and the ladies call me tripod.
protoss all day bitch.

Shout out to blistering sands.. delta quadrant..
whoever came up with 4 warpgate.... and weed.
You know what I'm talking about.. I love ez wins man.

That's it for my creative juices, I suck at keeping the lyrics with the beat, but you know.

Suspesne

United States101 Posts

September 01 2010 20:11 GMT

#26

Shout out to blistering sands.. delta quadrant..
whoever invented 4 warpgate.... and weed.

lol

SugarBear

United States842 Posts

September 01 2010 20:41 GMT

#27

Hmm, nice concept but the lyrics are a bit off tempo which made me cringe

viraltouch

United States299 Posts

September 01 2010 20:51 GMT

#28

this song may need an update with 1.1 patch

fun song

NinjaWaffle

United States46 Posts

September 01 2010 22:06 GMT

#29

Loving the songs man. Keep em' coming. :D
I suggest a line or two about Stalkers and Archons seeing as they are pretty much the only units that you didn't mention and seeing as you have a whole verse to work with I think you could do it. Good luck with the verse man!

Suspesne

United States101 Posts

September 02 2010 03:36 GMT

#30

On September 02 2010 05:51 viraltouch wrote:
this song may need an update with 1.1 patch

fun song

Yes it may.. but should I say in before patch 1.1?

Suspesne

United States101 Posts

September 04 2010 15:12 GMT

#31

This song will be updated Sunday, Monday at the latest.. I'm not happy with this one in comparison to the other two. Plus it needs finished.

R0YAL

United States1768 Posts

September 04 2010 15:19 GMT

#32

On September 02 2010 05:11 Suspesne wrote:
Shout out to blistering sands.. delta quadrant..
whoever invented 4 warpgate.... and weed.

lol

QFT ^^ Love your stuff! Make sure to give the Mothership a shoutout! :D

purerythem

United States245 Posts

September 04 2010 15:39 GMT

#33

great job! You should give the kid who made ode to idra some lessons.

ReCharge

Philippines505 Posts

September 04 2010 15:51 GMT

#34

I suck at rapping but maybe, using strats in the song would be good.

Hallucinated void rays to lure marines away from ramp.
Mothership rush into invisible cannons
proxy pylon in-base warp in
attacking 2 fronts. (harassing while distracting him with your main army)

sas01

Canada303 Posts

September 06 2010 23:34 GMT

#35

LOLoL nice!!

Archerofaiur

United States4101 Posts

September 06 2010 23:47 GMT

#36

For lyric inspiration you could look at plot events from the original sc and BW caimpaign. Ther ha to be something that rhymes with en taro adun :p

NeCroPoTeNce

United States513 Posts

September 07 2010 00:01 GMT

#37

Haha, just watched it. Pretty badass man.

PokePill

United States1048 Posts

September 07 2010 00:05 GMT

#38

Why haven't you monetized this yet? Do you have a talent manager? I'm thinking GosuMusic.com would work, and we can have you doing vocal lessons over livestream $30-40 / hour. Definitely need to get a full album out there as well with a limited release to start. You got the talent, I got the connections, let's make it happen.

Archerofaiur

United States4101 Posts

September 07 2010 00:07 GMT

#39

On September 07 2010 09:05 PokePill wrote:
Why haven't you monetized this yet?

Because he doesnt want to be sued