EPTOn July 31 2008 05:37 CyuntiyuL wrote:
anyone else hoping this ends with a corny pun?
anyone else hoping this ends with a corny pun?
BETTER NATE THEN LEVER
p.s. this is so going in PX
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decafchicken
United States20143 Posts
BETTER NATE THEN LEVER p.s. this is so going in PX | ||
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OhThatDang
United States4685 Posts
On July 31 2008 04:36 Falcynn wrote: omg, like I said please don't post until the WHOLE thing is finished. Granted this isn't as huge of a cliffhanger as last time with the mortar about to go off, but I hate all cliffhangers in general. Edit: also when you update it can you add a line so we can find where you left off more easily? like a or something? It's pretty minor I know but...eh. Edit2: and you deserve a star, I mean if that Catyoul guy got one for that facebook thread then you definitely deserve one. keeping everyone in wanting more is what he should do this is agreat story telling =p i wouldnt want the whoooole thing already psssh | ||
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HamerD
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ulszz
Jamaica1787 Posts
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kidd
United States2848 Posts
On July 31 2008 06:30 HamerD wrote: Must've taken alot of time but I got too bored to read all of it Please tell me you are kidding, this story is so well written and not boring at all. OP, please do not listen to this peon. TL appreciates this story! | ||
RaGe
Belgium9950 Posts
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Woyn
United Kingdom1628 Posts
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obloquy
United States265 Posts
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randombum
United States2378 Posts
On July 31 2008 05:54 decafchicken wrote: BETTER NATE THEN LEVER p.s. this is so going in PX Ditto! | ||
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BlueRoyaL
United States2493 Posts
However, I found out later that a small chunk of her hair had been burned away by a piece of hot ash, and she was devastated because she was supposed to be competing in a pageant the following weekend. this was a gg moment for sure | ||
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Swarmy
Canada70 Posts
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Archaic
United States4024 Posts
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wurm
Philippines2296 Posts
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merz
Sweden2760 Posts
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7c.nEptuNe
United States153 Posts
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boesthius
United States11637 Posts
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Mynock
4492 Posts
Reminded me so much of all kinds of stories I read as a kid, with a kind of Huckleberry Finn-ish feel to it. Great! | ||
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CTStalker
Canada9720 Posts
make sure to complete the tale | ||
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Ftrunkz
Australia2474 Posts
It'd be sick if next update you just put something that makes it easy to identify where the update starts tho, even if u get rid of it a day after you update it so it doesn't break the story for people who haven't read up to it yet. | ||
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Hydrolisko
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