EPTAn Unforgettable Night - Page 9
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il0seonpurpose
Korea (South)5638 Posts
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Live2Win
United States6657 Posts
On August 01 2008 04:11 OneBlueAugust wrote: No, I'm not done yet. I'm writing this in between appointments, so I occasionally have to end it at weird times. Also, once again, thanks for all the positive feedback guys. I appreciate it. so do we! This could totally be a book. | ||
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Falcynn
United States3597 Posts
It could be One Blue August: A Memoir | ||
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ulszz
Jamaica1787 Posts
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sztuczyn
Poland694 Posts
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HeavOnEarth
United States7087 Posts
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Archaic
United States4024 Posts
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xBTx
Canada542 Posts
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Live2Win
United States6657 Posts
On August 01 2008 06:15 xBTx wrote: Holy fucking novel, last time I saw such a long post was when ConJonner spread lies about TSL. But seriously as far as revenge goes you're killing it from what I see. this isn't a fictional story. | ||
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AdamBanks
Canada996 Posts
I love the sardonic//nostalgic tone you've used; it really keeps me reading and relating to my own experiences. edit: yea, i've refreshed this like 12341 times today waiting for the next installmenmt (tho im at work and have little else to do) | ||
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Funchucks
Canada2113 Posts
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PH
United States6173 Posts
Btw, I didn't understand where "Honestly, all I can really remember thinking about was the idea of Sarah in some dirty locker room, doing something bad enough to get her grounded" came from...it sort of popped out of nowhere...?? I hope you finish it soon...it was hilarious...haha. | ||
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Ra.Xor.2
United States1784 Posts
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CubEdIn
Romania5359 Posts
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SonuvBob
Aiur21549 Posts
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qrs
United States3637 Posts
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AdamBanks
Canada996 Posts
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triangle
United States3803 Posts
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OneBlueAugust
United States153 Posts
On August 01 2008 07:04 CubEdIn wrote: wtf finish it already. Stop playing dota! But I like playing dota...  On August 01 2008 07:26 qrs wrote: I don't want this to come off as criticism--you're a very good writer and I'm enjoying the read--but just FYI, it's "kind of", not "kinda've" (in contradistinction to words like "should've"). Yeah, I know. It's a bad habit that I'm having trouble getting rid of. Thanks for pointing it out, as I always forget to check for it when I'm editing. | ||
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kidd
United States2848 Posts
Here's the link just in case you guys have been living under a rock and haven't seen the other story. link Keep up the good work OneBlueAugust. | ||
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