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Ohaiidavid
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Cirn9
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On April 15 2012 08:53 Sermokala wrote: I want to form a B team and I want to be in it. Yeah we probably won't win a game but it'll be really fun regardless. And this means we can learn to make comps that are good instead of randoming every game. Join the MLP channel and dota ponies steam group if you'd like to play some friendly not so antagonistic games :3 | ||
Saurabhinator
Australia347 Posts
Please leave crits and comments on my commentary. What would you like me to discuss, what would you like me to talk about. I'm interested in gettting some feedback. | ||
Raelcun
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Daralii
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![]() Rarity's one of my least favorites, but holy shit I want it. | ||
[Agony]x90
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On April 15 2012 10:49 Saurabhinator wrote: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlxsiZIZ_-Y Please leave crits and comments on my commentary. What would you like me to discuss, what would you like me to talk about. I'm interested in gettting some feedback. You know I think you said it yourself at the start of the video. I think being more gestural would be very beneficial to you. On the other hand, I think your painting in comparison to your gestural work to be perfectly fine and very good. As for gestural, I think it'd benefit you if you just practiced gesture drawings more so than full out drawing compositions. I know that when I was on skype with you, you mentioned that on posemaniacs and other figure drawing sites, you leave the image on for as long as you need. Although this has its obvious benefits, I think you're missing the gestural aspect of it. After looking at a lot of artists/illustrators/painters/etc, I find there there is a lot of value in being able to draw a very definitive and clear gestural drawing, in which within 30 seconds and 10 lines, you know exactly what the character is doing. I probably don't need to explain any of this to you though, as I'm sure you already know :-p But in my humble opinion, I feel as if this is where you are not as strong when it comes to images/compositions/drawings, even when not working with ponies. You work very often with very structured images and shots, trying to get the true image of something that is standstill. As a result, I sometimes feel that your images lack rhythm, movement and life. I think it would help you a lot if you just took a bunch of images from MLP (or use human figures) to do a bunch of gestures, emphasizing movement, twisting, rhythm, motion, etc over form and structure. Also, I find your pony expressions lacking. But this makes sense, since you are not an animator. Obviously if you don't care for it, you don't have to improve on it, but I feel that implementing more facial structure (again, putting life into your images!) would help a lot! Lastly, I feel like your pony necks are too long, but this is a preference thing :-p. Sorry if it seems like I"m just dishing a lot of negatives, but I think sometimes the things you worry about are the things you do best. And you probably worry about them because they are what you know best, such as the fundamentals of lighting, value, shapes and structures. I think its time to loosen up and experiment. In order to try to explain what I mean, if you look at your DA account, a lot of your pony images are those of OC characters in the same pose. If you look at Div's, although he does not have nearly the same mastery as you do in terms of line quality/control, structure and perspective sense, shading, painting, etc etc, he is always trying new things and introducing new "life like" qualities into his images. When you say that drawing ponies is detrimental, I can agree with you on that, but not entirely. You have to look at what benefits it can provide, and I would say that given its simple animation style, you could really improve on gestures and you can save painting for more difficult tasks, so that you can improve more there. When I get back to drawing again (after monday! yay), I'm gonna see what I can do with ponies that may help me, even if it is just to force me to draw when I don't know what else to draw. I hope you keep going with it, even if just a bit, cause no matter what you draw/paint, I enjoy them all :D. | ||
[Agony]x90
United States853 Posts
LOL Kevinsano commented on Saurab's DA account. If you don't know who kevinsano is, DON"T LOOK HIM UP. Trust me, y'all just get offended. | ||
Camail
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+ Show Spoiler + ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() He's also the reason Bio's POMF pic exists (WHICH FURTHER PROVES MY POINT, YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT BIO). ![]() | ||
[Agony]x90
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Camail
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[Agony]x90
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Daralii
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+ Show Spoiler + ![]() ONE. MORE. WEEK. | ||
Saurabhinator
Australia347 Posts
+ Show Spoiler + j/k <3. Yeah I'm going to work on gesture more. That's what I'm going to do on the 21st. | ||
[Agony]x90
United States853 Posts
On April 15 2012 19:02 Saurabhinator wrote: Damn noob I asked to crit my commentary and he crits my drawing. + Show Spoiler + j/k <3. Yeah I'm going to work on gesture more. That's what I'm going to do on the 21st. Oops sry. Wanna critique for your commentary? Stop critiquing your commentary! :-p. Just talk art and I think what you need to say will come out. No need to say "awkward commentary" T.T. Real self-deprecate. but uh yea... tee hee. Don't worry, you get to tear a billion holes into mah shit on the 21st. Gonna be one hell of a day :-p. | ||
Caumen
Denmark42 Posts
On April 15 2012 17:07 [Agony]x90 wrote: You know I think you said it yourself .. SNIP ..- know what else to draw. I hope you keep going with it, even if just a bit, cause no matter what you draw/paint, I enjoy them all :D. Great stuff there, I think I will get something out of this too, thanks! On April 15 2012 17:55 Camail wrote: Well since Agony is a little bitch that leaves you guys hanging I'll just post his SFW stuff. He's pretty fucking good at this art thing. + Show Spoiler + ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() He's also the reason Bio's POMF pic exists (WHICH FURTHER PROVES MY POINT, YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT BIO). ![]() The last two sketches are by Darth Franny right? I am getting a little confused, is someone in this thread Darth Franny? Also, my latest work: ![]() It was meant as a sig for a member on MMO-Champions, hence the weird cropping. I hope you like it! I keep telling myself that I get better and better at depth on their faces. | ||
[Agony]x90
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Caumen
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On April 15 2012 22:18 [Agony]x90 wrote: Nah. Those pics are there cause of inside joke with BioSC. Those pictures were originally for Kevinsano, but BioSC shopped them for his purposes :D. Also nice banner! Can't wait til Saturday! *squee* I mean the last sketche, ain't it made by Darth-franny? I mean, http://darth-franny.deviantart.com/art/Pomf-Color-285361798?q=gallery:darth-franny/30544868&qo=19 | ||
[Agony]x90
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Daralii
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Camail
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On April 15 2012 22:30 Caumen wrote: I mean the last sketche, ain't it made by Darth-franny? I mean, http://darth-franny.deviantart.com/art/Pomf-Color-285361798?q=gallery:darth-franny/30544868&qo=19 Take a look at the name, Caumen. Its for 'Kev' AKA Kevinsano. It was for his birthday, I believe. So without Kevinsano Darth-Franny never would've drawn it. Oh, and this is nice: And I'm totally reposting this because T_T + Show Spoiler + ![]() | ||
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