EPTDefiler Tour #58 [75$] - Page 2
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thezanursic
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Sinedd
Poland7052 Posts
;o and why isnt he playing more ? | ||
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thezanursic
5478 Posts
On June 03 2013 03:30 Sinedd wrote: who is that dude Anfod ??? ;o and why isnt he playing more ? He's a korean and he plays in like every DT... | ||
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ilovev
Korea (North)213 Posts
On June 02 2013 21:00 Larvator wrote: ..He's a very lame player, that is true... :boris: u r lame expert in real skills. that is true -- i am top 14 in the most objective Defiler Rating ooke? -- i will destroy everything in 2014! | ||
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Mirnaia
Hungary34 Posts
I would be honoured and grateful if you left constructive criticism regarding what I did well / awfully. Also, if I should not have linked the videos for whatever reason let me know and I'll remove them. Problems I have noticed: - G1 my voice is sometimes barely audible during battles (fixed from G2). - G1 I forgot to anchor my overlay and spend some time repositioning it  - Should learn to speak faster (will come with experience, like macro) - Should improve caster-macro, because of inexperience I need to think what to check/talk about next, also have to think about wording things - Need to improve obs and my own vision (G2 saw 2 turrets instead of the 3 built at the main, missed the science facility's construction), this is a neverending mission - Probably quite some strategic thought I missed and I don't even know about <- this is the point where comments would be most welcome if you think I misread players' intentions - Fucked up reverting to the main overlay at the very end and ended up showing my desktop instead O.O VODS: + Show Spoiler + + Show Spoiler [Game 1] + LRM)Bakuryu v. BOSS.Top Game 1 + Show Spoiler [Game 2] + LRM)Bakuryu v. BOSS.Top Game 2 + Show Spoiler [Game 3] + LRM)Bakuryu v. BOSS.Top Game 3 Playlist | ||
Sayle
United Kingdom3685 Posts
As for the actual content, I listened to the first two games while making dinner and the only real mistake I noticed was when you talked about Top making a CC when he was actually getting a factory. Gas first TvZ is 99% of the time a factory first opening (1% is some kind of 1base 2rax acad). You otherwise had pretty solid narration of what was happening in the games and made some good observations considering you said don't play the game at all. I quite like your overlay as well | ||
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Mirnaia
Hungary34 Posts
Totally missed the gas first opening in G2, but point taken! I normally don't like English casting at all You should cast in Chinese, I'd be the first subscriber O.O | ||
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Sinedd
Poland7052 Posts
On June 05 2013 02:14 Mirnaia wrote: As practice - my first BW commentary ever - I have casted the Bakuryu v BOSS.Top match. Disclaimers and general info at the beginning 3-4 minutes of the first game (feel free to ignore it and jump to 3:52 if you can't be bothered), I explain where I (do not) come from. I would be honoured and grateful if you left constructive criticism regarding what I did well / awfully. Also, if I should not have linked the videos for whatever reason let me know and I'll remove them. Problems I have noticed: - G1 my voice is sometimes barely audible during battles (fixed from G2). - G1 I forgot to anchor my overlay and spend some time repositioning it - Should learn to speak faster (will come with experience, like macro) - Should improve caster-macro, because of inexperience I need to think what to check/talk about next, also have to think about wording things - Need to improve obs and my own vision (G2 saw 2 turrets instead of the 3 built at the main, missed the science facility's construction), this is a neverending mission - Probably quite some strategic thought I missed and I don't even know about <- this is the point where comments would be most welcome if you think I misread players' intentions - Fucked up reverting to the main overlay at the very end and ended up showing my desktop instead O.O VODS: + Show Spoiler + your voice.. SOUNDS FUCKING BADASS !!! wow..  you really have to cast more ! I liked it alot !  with that voice you should work at some radio station or something.. it would be awesome to have you as a serious BW caster ! ^^ | ||
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Sinedd
Poland7052 Posts
On June 03 2013 03:40 thezanursic wrote: He's a korean and he plays in like every DT... yeah I know that already, but still thanks ; ) | ||
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Mirnaia
Hungary34 Posts
On June 05 2013 05:03 Sinedd wrote: + Show Spoiler + On June 05 2013 02:14 Mirnaia wrote: As practice - my first BW commentary ever - I have casted the Bakuryu v BOSS.Top match. Disclaimers and general info at the beginning 3-4 minutes of the first game (feel free to ignore it and jump to 3:52 if you can't be bothered), I explain where I (do not) come from. I would be honoured and grateful if you left constructive criticism regarding what I did well / awfully. Also, if I should not have linked the videos for whatever reason let me know and I'll remove them. Problems I have noticed: - G1 my voice is sometimes barely audible during battles (fixed from G2). - G1 I forgot to anchor my overlay and spend some time repositioning it - Should learn to speak faster (will come with experience, like macro) - Should improve caster-macro, because of inexperience I need to think what to check/talk about next, also have to think about wording things - Need to improve obs and my own vision (G2 saw 2 turrets instead of the 3 built at the main, missed the science facility's construction), this is a neverending mission - Probably quite some strategic thought I missed and I don't even know about <- this is the point where comments would be most welcome if you think I misread players' intentions - Fucked up reverting to the main overlay at the very end and ended up showing my desktop instead O.O VODS: + Show Spoiler + your voice.. SOUNDS FUCKING BADASS !!! wow.. you really have to cast more ! I liked it alot ! with that voice you should work at some radio station or something.. it would be awesome to have you as a serious BW caster ! ^^Thank you, I'm flattered. I'll try and cast some more tomorrow (and see what I can do with Tour #59 on Sunday). I really need to get in shape with the current match standards, TvZ is currently the only matchup I'm even half-confident at analysing. | ||
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Sinedd
Poland7052 Posts
On June 05 2013 05:12 Mirnaia wrote: Thank you, I'm flattered. I'll try and cast some more tomorrow (and see what I can do with Tour #59 on Sunday). I really need to get in shape with the current match standards, TvZ is currently the only matchup I'm even half-confident at analysing. With so much BW content on the internet and especially YT it sholdnt be too hard to do just watch some games when you have time and you'll be ready to cast anything ! | ||
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Mirnaia
Hungary34 Posts
Yet again, comments/suggestions are very welcome. Having rewatched the replay I had a few dubious calls and generally awful minimap vision. I was a bit slow to get into the game, for the first minute I didn't really know what to talk about. Also, the background sound is still too loud compared to my voice, especially during big fights. It was - I believe - better than at the previous cast, but I'm still "looking for words" quite a lot. + Show Spoiler [Cryoc v goodman Winners RO8 Game 1] + | ||
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