[Battle Report] CRIPPLE FIGHT~! - Page 2
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Raithed
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evanthebouncy!
United States12796 Posts
The story is good man, no worry. | ||
Showtime!
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Chef
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![]() + Show Spoiler [Meandering Way Off Topic Random Philos…] + Evan, I understand where you're coming from, but in my experience that simply isn't how the internet works. Basically, the first person of some reputation to post their opinion will set the opinion of 90% of my audience who just bases everything they believe based on popular opinion. So by discouraging people to even bother giving me their inane criticism, I feel I'm making it more likely that someone with something positive to say will post first, thus ensuring other people will also enjoy my story (because even if it is good, if you read it wanting to hate it, you will). Yeah, it's stupid and perhaps underhanded, but that's how I think it works. Here's an example of replies I got for a story I would consider to have better quality, but that started with a bad review: + Show Spoiler + who wants to read a huge wall of text posted by you not a lot of people i hate you go kill thyself poor, but keep going. writing is fun. My advice, choose a more interesting topic. Stopped reading after he was rejected from university due to inability to bake muffins out of boredom. Other than that, its well written. Edit: apparently its not well written, i guess my expectations on this forum are just lowering. I also probably didnt read enough of it. i think one major thing you should think about is purpose. why did you write what you wrote? what audience do you want to read it? because i guarantee you 95% of not just TL but the world doesn't give a shit about some boy baking muffins I didn't make it past the second paragraph no it isn't. it's clumsy, the description is forced, and sometimes doesn't even make sense. keep trying though, writing is like any skill - you'll get better with practice. writing is an art, but you're confined by the rules and structure of the language that you're using. i don't have time or the inclination to correct your essay, but you posted it looking for feedback (im assuming, although perhaps you were just looking for praise?), and that's what you've gotten. like i said, keep reading and writing and you'll get better. and no, writing is not subjective in that way people here haven't responded well to this because its badly written. writing is subjective based on the audience you're writing for, not based on the writer. And so on. It was just like this: an obviously silly little thing I wrote up for the amusement of anyone who likes this kind of thing. Other forums I posted the same story on, but beginning with modesty, received positive enthusiasm just like in this thread. I know I'm a good writer. I don't need anyone to tell me that. If I proofread my work, think about it long and hard, and put in the hours, I'll always come up with something good. If I write something silly in one draft and don't bother to proofread it, it's still amusing enough. But the fact of the matter is that you still have to win your audience, and unfortunately for silly little things like this, you have to directly inform people that's what they are, because apparently by virtue of its own existence is not enough. Thanks for comments, glad you enjoyed it guys ![]() | ||
evanthebouncy!
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fgsvsd
Switzerland348 Posts
Thanks. Those were 10 minutes of my life well spent. + Show Spoiler + And thanks to StripedBlueCrow for linking it from the General Forum's cripple thread. Without that I'd most likely never have read this. Is it just me, or has TLnet strangely become more entertaining since the purge announcement? | ||
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alffla
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prOxi.swAMi
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IntoTheWow
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DanceCommander
United States1808 Posts
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RoC)Ninjah
United States238 Posts
exellent anyway :D | ||
Ftrunkz
Australia2474 Posts
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