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Looks nice! Kind of hard for me to visualize a science vessel "barreling" anywhere though xD
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On May 08 2013 03:39 pathy wrote:
Looks nice! Kind of hard for me to visualize a science vessel "barreling" anywhere though xD
it looks kind of like a barrel so it makes sense to me
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On May 08 2013 03:50 sob3k wrote:Show nested quote +On May 08 2013 03:39 pathy wrote:
Looks nice! Kind of hard for me to visualize a science vessel "barreling" anywhere though xD it looks kind of like a barrel so it makes sense to me
It's space, so pretty much anything can barrel anyway
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very good 
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"...She's probably the least talented ghost alive. I have no idea why she's with us."
^ loved this, playing with the genre conventions. I haven't read the novels or anything, but it seems like the vast majority of the ghosts that get featured in SC stories are the "quiet, mysterious, menacing, and super powerful" kind of stereotype, so it's refreshing to see a more human one.
Also I really liked the juxtaposition of the two hands coming together to shake while a corruptor approaches in the background, although just a slight nitpick, in the first row it's Astrid on the left and Valerie on the right but in the next two their hands are reversed.
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pro-level man, amazing work!
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On May 08 2013 04:15 jubil wrote:
Also I really liked the juxtaposition of the two hands coming together to shake while a corruptor approaches in the background, although just a slight nitpick, in the first row it's Astrid on the left and Valerie on the right but in the next two their hands are reversed.
If you look again, you will realize that the scene has been turned by 180 degrees from one picture to the next.
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I love this. Keep up the great work!
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United States1655 Posts
On May 08 2013 08:15 Coagulation wrote:
I want more.
And I want to make more. Unfortunately, it seems that there isn't much interest in a Starcraft comic that doesn't revolve around humorous gameplay events, which is disheartening.
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United States10302 Posts
really good. too bad i have ap calc right now and really cant enjoy this as much as i would like. but very good.
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I helped some guys with grammar for another Starcraft comic. It was interesting, I'm not a big manga guy at all, but they were french iirc, and so they needed some help with it. This is a great comic, though I'm ultimately very confused who the focus is supposed to be on.
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United States1655 Posts
It's supposed to be Valerie, though I can see how it can be confusing. I just used Astrid as a newbie type of character to help get everyone else introduced.
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On May 09 2013 04:34 Sigrun wrote:
It's supposed to be Valerie, though I can see how it can be confusing. I just used Astrid as a newbie type of character to help get everyone else introduced.
That explains the last two frames. So this is about Valerie, the worst ghost ever. I should have probably gotten that from reading it when I did, that makes a lot more sense now.
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United States10328 Posts
darn, I don't follow the weird flashback part (p16-18)
nice work though
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United States1655 Posts
On May 09 2013 11:08 ]343[ wrote:
darn, I don't follow the weird flashback part (p16-18)
You're not supposed to. That's why it's just part one.
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This is great! What's the eta on part 2? I can't wait ^.^;;
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Nice work! Hope you carry on.
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Awesome work! Really looking forward to more.
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