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The group of battle haggard men sat in relative silence in the helicopter. Geoff sat on the edge of the chopper with his legs dangling into the dark void that used to be busy streets. He closed his eyes, letting the night air cool him off.
"Geoff, get the fuck inside!" Chill yelled over the din of the rotor. Geoff's only reaction was a shrug. Geoff didn't feel like moving, and he enjoyed watching the buildings as Nazgul deftly maneuvered between the buildings.
BANG!
everyone jumped at the sound and Geoff fell something drench his boots, he looked to see the remains of one of the beasts dangling from the top of the chopper, he looked down at his boots and realized what was on them; blood.
"The motherfuckers are jumping out from the rooftops!" he yelled back into the chopper.
Unfortunately he was unable to get anymore information out as two hands grabbed his boots and yanked him out of the chopper.
Geoff could see it all happen in slow motion: the beast leaping from the rooftop, arms outstreched, reaching just far enough to grab Geoff's boots and allowing gravity to bring the big man with it.
"THE FUCKERS GOT GEOFF!" Chill screamed, Nazgul turned the chopper around,
"there's nowhere I can land guys, did any of you see where he fell" he asked
"That hotel!" Kennigit called out "I think he might have fallen into the pool"
"Well, ain't he a lucky fucker if that's right" FakeSteve said
"yeah lucky," HuK agreed "now he's alone in a city full of bloodthirsty monsters" that shut everyone up fairly quickly until Nazgul's quiet and desperation filled
"I can't fucking land"
They all watched Geoff pull himself out of the pool and look up at the chopper.
"Jos, toss him a bag" TLO said, Ret nodded and grabbed a bag full of supplies and scribbled a note on it and threw it down.
Geoff grabbed and saw the note 'radio inside' He opened it and chuckled at the masses of guns, ammo, grenades and knives in it.
"Can you guys hear me?" Geoff asked into the radio
"Reading you loud and clear iNc, how you doing" asked Nazgul
"soaked but ok, whats going on?"
"I can't land the chopper here, and according to the map the closest LZ i can find would put us bingo fuel and we wouldn't be able to complete the mission"
"Listen, just keep going, I'll meet you guys there, I promise I won't do something retarded like die. So you guys just wait for me at the mission destination, I'll be there."
"Roger that Geoff, godspeed" Nazgul answered.
They all watched as he got locked and loaded, saluted at the men in the chopper and ran off.
"what do we do now?" Jinro asked sadly
"we continue with the fucking mission." Manifesto answered grimly, "and close those fucking doors"
The men took one last look at the path Geoff had taken before closing the chopper doors, Nazgul turned the chopper back on its original heading and continued to the DZ.
 
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I have seen this series get a lot of praise, but personally I am kind of missing the originality.
It's basically just a zombie story with the characters having TL names.
It would be so much better if the characters would actually include typical characteristics of their RL counterparts, not just every name gets a line per part.
Also references to real events on TL would be nice (besides the sc2 derps invasion).
I know this would probably be hard to implement, but I just though some constructive criticism was in order 
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Haha awesome. "Don't worry, I won't do something retarded like die" XD
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On December 17 2010 04:34 101TFP wrote:I have seen this series get a lot of praise, but personally I am kind of missing the originality. It's basically just a zombie story with the characters having TL names. It would be so much better if the characters would actually include typical characteristics of their RL counterparts, not just every name gets a line per part. Also references to real events on TL would be nice (besides the sc2 derps invasion). I know this would probably be hard to implement, but I just though some constructive criticism was in order
Constructive criticism? Sorry, you're on a wrong site.
All we seek here is praise.
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best best best best blogseries on TL ever! You're the best PlaGuE_R!
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NOOOOOOO GEOFF NOOOOOO... he'll survive right?
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On December 17 2010 04:37 2Pacalypse- wrote:Show nested quote +On December 17 2010 04:34 101TFP wrote:I have seen this series get a lot of praise, but personally I am kind of missing the originality. It's basically just a zombie story with the characters having TL names. It would be so much better if the characters would actually include typical characteristics of their RL counterparts, not just every name gets a line per part. Also references to real events on TL would be nice (besides the sc2 derps invasion). I know this would probably be hard to implement, but I just though some constructive criticism was in order Constructive criticism? Sorry, you're on a wrong site. All we seek here is praise.
hahahahaha XD indeed!
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Criticism is okay but this is just for the fun as it's been written to just make fun and make ppl enjoy with a bit of TL personality in it.
I love it since TL is in it. And why do I think Inc is so cool but at the same time retarded for not listening to Chill 
WHY DON'T YOU LISTEN TO CHILL INC! (
VERY FUNNY as I could imagine Inc actually not caring LOL.
FakeSteve seems to be like the bad guy to me within those members Not caring about Inc falling off :o
GJ plague tommorow is a new part?
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*BIG ANNOUNCEMENT*
The finale will be a 3 parter. There will NOT be a 2nd season. There will be TWO spin off series.
Number 1:
iNcontroL's adventures in the city
Number 2:
The prequel, how did this all start?
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HAHAHAHHAHA
Incontrol has got to know this (he probably already does since he knows all?). I think I'm going to have a lot of fun reading and probably trying to rig the polls about incontrol's adventure :D I wonder if Inc is going to get derped :o
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nooo, no derping iNc. Do i CAN say that fellow TLers, mostly posters witk 10k posts, will make cameo appearances in iNc's adventures
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On December 17 2010 05:28 PlaGuE_R wrote:
nooo, no derping iNc. Do i CAN say that fellow TLers, mostly posters witk 10k posts, will make cameo appearances in iNc's adventures
Aww man it would've been funny if inc derped :/
But he is just too friggin cool for that :D
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Inc fighting! I'm sure he will make it through the derps
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On December 17 2010 04:37 WakaDoDo wrote:
best best best best blogseries on TL ever! You're the best PlaGuE_R!
gosh, cant believe i missed that comment earlier lol! thanks so much im super glad you like it
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