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My 1st commentary.

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DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
November 09 2008 02:53 GMT
#1
Hey guys, I just did my first commentary so please check it out. I know I have loadz of errors so please feel free to comment in order for my to improve . Its on Savior vs Free GOMTV MSLS3 Quarterfinals game 4 on zodiac, Thanks alot!

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5842514158391854515



Pellucidity
Profile Blog Joined May 2008
Netherlands377 Posts
November 09 2008 02:59 GMT
#2
You sound extremely nervous, but it was decent still. Keep practicing!
"NO MUCH. WHY ARE YOUR SCARABS SO STUPID" - Tasteless
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
November 09 2008 03:03 GMT
#3
On November 09 2008 11:59 Pellucidity wrote:
You sound extremely nervous, but it was decent still. Keep practicing!


Totally. Thanks.
spec. opps
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
United States127 Posts
November 09 2008 03:23 GMT
#4
i like it and ull probly get more confidence going on =/
time is the biggest difference that can be made
QuietIdiot
Profile Blog Joined October 2005
7004 Posts
Last Edited: 2008-11-09 03:40:56
November 09 2008 03:34 GMT
#5
Yeah it sounds nervous, just practice and practice, maybe try some live reporting over a friend's game while obsing and have people listen to it on ventrilo or something, kill some of the nerves off.

Shaky voices are never good for commentating.

But its a good start, nothing rambunctious like klazart..
fgsvsd
Profile Joined June 2007
Switzerland348 Posts
November 09 2008 03:49 GMT
#6
Yes I'll have to agree with the other two people here, it's a good start.
Your voice is pleasant, which is a very important element in commentating.
Now you just gotta practice so your words flow naturally like calm spring stream.
knyttym
Profile Blog Joined December 2006
United States5797 Posts
November 09 2008 04:05 GMT
#7
kool one of my favorite savior games of all time.
lets see how it goes
GHOSTCLAW
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States17042 Posts
November 09 2008 04:15 GMT
#8
You'll get more confidence, but it sounds like you know what you're talking about, which is the most important thing.
PhotographerLiquipedia. Drop me a pm if you've got questions/need help.
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
November 09 2008 12:20 GMT
#9
Thanks for the comments guys, really appreciate it.
Artosis *
Profile Blog Joined June 2004
United States2140 Posts
November 09 2008 12:48 GMT
#10
u seem like u need to do about 20 more to get comfortable with it. also i suggest getting more excited during battles. makes it more fun to watch.
Commentatorhttp://twitter.com/Artosis
o3.power91
Profile Blog Joined November 2007
Bahrain5288 Posts
Last Edited: 2008-11-09 13:03:46
November 09 2008 13:03 GMT
#11
Good:
-Clear voice. No accent problems.
-Easy dialogue to understand. Allows people to follow events of the game.
-Not too fast (Klazart).

Could improve:
-Speed could be a bit faster. Not Klazart fast but fast enough to make the commentary more exciting.
-Vocal variety: you were monotonous throughout the game. I suggest you put more energy in your voice at different times depending on whats happening.
-You were obviously nervous. This is understandable as this is your first commentary. You can easily improve that over time

Overall it was pretty nice. I want to ask though, why did you decide to comment on a year old game rather than a recent one? I sometimes comment on foreigner replays when I watch them (no recording; just to myself ) in hopes that it helps my game knowledge. I find it more enjoyable to comment on games that I haven't seen beforehand. Obviously I wont know as much about the game but I feel its more fun for the commentator that way.

Hope to see more of your commentaries in future
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