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Italy2499 Posts

June 05 2014 23:43 GMT

Some of the stuff i did this year:

Triangle. Genre Contemporary Classical maybe dunno
synt piano+string
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Lallala
real guitar+voice. Genre Lyrical
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http://www.mediafire.com/listen/wg999g2houkot2g/004.+07+-+Lallala.mp3]lallala

this one is kind of a shower song

Hype for bw tour: Genre Hype
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Hype nr.3

In the tavern late at night. Genre Baroque (as in if its not baroque don' t fix it)
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https://soundcloud.com/pebble-5/in-the-tavern-late-at-night

synt flute+liute+piano

Happy mood area. Genre reggae:
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Happy mood

different synts

finally this is my latest piece:
Synt piano+pads+high bass

its called max
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max

Genre:sad music

I also have some song material stuff but i never got toghether to do a proper recording of them.

The_Templar

your Country52797 Posts

June 06 2014 00:01 GMT

Triangle: seems a bit unfocused, especially at the beginning. Also not sure where you are going with it. Ending is sort of random.

In the tavern late at night: I like this a lot more. Again, seems a bit not-focused with two single-note melodies going at each other without any support.

SynC[gm]

United States3127 Posts

June 06 2014 00:11 GMT

For some reason, the Hype Nr.3 track catches my attention. The beginning is attracting but later on, it's like, hmm... I just wanna say the beginning made the song better for me.

As for max, it sounds a lot like a song you'd hear in a Legend of Zelda series cut scene, but more piano instrumentals in it might make it sound more... I guess in this case, sadder.

Peeano

Netherlands5192 Posts

June 06 2014 02:22 GMT

In the tavern late at night.
I'm feeling the mood. It somehow reminded me of playing Lands of Lore.
I like the recorder, but at certain notes the tone colour gets weird and hard on my ears.
Your ending is not in key, so it sounds off/unfinished.

pebble444

Italy2499 Posts

June 06 2014 12:32 GMT

Interesting advice
In the tavern late at night pretty good ear you got there i didn' t actually notice the ending. That and Triangle at the end i just tried to bring them back down closing it with the scale of the song. The mixing could use better, i just learn as i go along;
I am not sure either where i was going with the triangle song. i think it is just stopped abrutly ye
the hype nr.3 is an extended version of the one i sent you for crimson starleague. I added here some bw in game sounds of marine firebat and siege tanks. I' m listenening to to the legend of Zelda, pretty cool.

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