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....Hello there all trance/edm fans!
I've been using TL blog to get some feedback on my my productions from, alot of your positive support has pushed me really far.
A couple of days ago i started to work on a track just for fun, this turned out to be one of my most epic productions ever in my opinion.
I would describe it as a melodic/uplifting progressive trance track with some nice grooves as well as epic melodies ^^
So i turn to you again for feedback, whether it be criticism or praise. I'm always looking out to improve, I love to make music, and my dream is to be a successful producer in the future.
Anyway, enough chitchat, here you go.
http://soundcloud.com/altitude08/altitude08-summerflow-original
I hope you enjoy it, i had a blast producing this.
Also, thanks for taking your time to review this, those of you will comment here ![](/mirror/smilies/smile.gif)
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It's a good track. You kept everything going long enough for it to be a good trance cycle, but didn't let it get too monotonous. I would definitely recommend you have the track mastered, though. I'm sure it would sound great on studio monitors, but it's all hissy high end on my laptop's speakers.
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okay thanks for your comment ^^ ill try to master it later on
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I don't even like techno, trance, or any kind of electronic music in general, but that was a pretty chill track. I liked it. (:
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On May 29 2011 07:43 PH wrote: I don't even like techno, trance, or any kind of electronic music in general, but that was a pretty chill track. I liked it. (:
thanks man :D
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konadora
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i like what i'm hearing
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On May 31 2011 09:11 alffla wrote:hmm not like the trance /prog trance stuff i usually listen to, maybe try be more formulaic (LOLOL) i think the buildup is kind of repetitive, it doesnt feel like theres more and more and more its kind of more.. then a bit less then more.. then boom the breakdown and then the climax isn't epic enough either imo ![](/mirror/smilies/puh2.gif) you repeat the theme but it doesnt evolve into epicness keep working at it though :D:D gonna get good at it eventually if you love what you do ![](/mirror/smilies/smile.gif)
ah yeah thanks for your feedback though ^^ i will try harder next time, im still an amateur
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On May 31 2011 13:17 konadora wrote:i like what i'm hearing ![](/mirror/smilies/smile.gif)
On May 31 2011 16:09 mmp wrote: Very easy going.
Thanks
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It's weaker than Trapped. To be more memorable, It needs a story.
Too many high notes. Need to use them in phases. You cant hum this track.
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On June 01 2011 03:43 Trozz wrote: It's weaker than Trapped. To be more memorable, It needs a story.
Too many high notes. Need to use them in phases. You cant hum this track.
thanks for freeback though! :p it's a bit diffrent styles
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Thanks for sharing this dude, it sounds really good
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