Get rid of some of the exclamation marks - two is more than enough. I dislike any more than one in anything, but in this case, two is fine (and to be honest, two is probably better than one in this case). More than that just looks kinda unprofessional IMO.

That said though, awesome design. It's just a shame you can't use an actual baneling.

Wolf

Korea (South)3290 Posts

November 14 2010 22:45 GMT

#30

I'd like to see the centrifugal hooks upgrade icon on the shirt somewhere. Maybe change the text to "HERE COME THE SPEED BANES!"

palanq

United States761 Posts

November 14 2010 22:59 GMT

#31

1 O, 1 exclamation point.

TheBB

Switzerland5133 Posts

November 14 2010 23:07 GMT

#32

Want.

On November 15 2010 07:05 HalfAmazing wrote:
I like it. Too bad I don't wear anything that draws attention to my moobs.

Well, you sure know how to draw attention by posting...

itungle

United States90 Posts

November 14 2010 23:08 GMT

#33

nice one suggestion is that u should put like some baneling rolling to the splash to show that there are a lot of banelings

PS: where did you get the shirt template like that? ty!

Xapti

Canada2473 Posts

November 14 2010 23:17 GMT

#34

If I was to get a shirt like that it would be one without any text at all, just show pictures of rolling banelings and/or stationary banelings and or exploding or exploded banelings.

mahnini

United States6862 Posts

November 14 2010 23:38 GMT

#35

i have an idea, instead of keeping the shirt plain and simple you should draw 50 marines vs 100 banelings and have it on those holographic things so as people walk by you they can see the banelings run into the marines and explode. the shirt should also have the speed banes upgrade and also should have a lair somewhere that way people know that the person isnt hacking to get speed upgrades.you should also have all the baneling abilities printed on the shoulders like explode on buildings burrow and the other thing. also underneath the holographic you can have a bunch of banelings rolling by so people are sure that the shirt is about banelings.

LunarC

United States1186 Posts

November 14 2010 23:44 GMT

#36

On November 15 2010 08:38 mahnini wrote:
i have an idea, instead of keeping the shirt plain and simple you should draw 50 marines vs 100 banelings and have it on those holographic things so as people walk by you they can see the banelings run into the marines and explode. the shirt should also have the speed banes upgrade and also should have a lair somewhere that way people know that the person isnt hacking to get speed upgrades.you should also have all the baneling abilities printed on the shoulders like explode on buildings burrow and the other thing. also underneath the holographic you can have a bunch of banelings rolling by so people are sure that the shirt is about banelings.

rofl.
People don't know how to read before posting. Nice shirt btw.

Psylence

Canada118 Posts

November 15 2010 02:25 GMT

#37

lmao, awesome. Err... thanks for the feedback!?

GreatFall

United States1061 Posts

November 15 2010 02:28 GMT

#38

Awesome shirt idea. Gotta love Artosis!

Grummy

Sweden70 Posts

November 15 2010 03:17 GMT

#39

The shirt should be filled with banelings, that way it would make much more sense!

Psylence

Canada118 Posts

November 15 2010 03:34 GMT

#40

On November 15 2010 08:08 itungle wrote:
nice one suggestion is that u should put like some baneling rolling to the splash to show that there are a lot of banelings

PS: where did you get the shirt template like that? ty!

Just google blank black t shirt. or black t shirt template. You'll find a lot of good ones! :D

EDIT: I have submitted the final design to the handsome nerd. All I did was just put two exclamation points.
So now we wait!

I'll be sure to make another blog post if it ends up getting chosen! Thank you!