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I wrote a song! =D

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jjun212
Profile Joined December 2004
Canada2208 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-06-26 08:18:39
June 26 2010 08:14 GMT
#1
Hey guys~

It's 4:10am and I just finished sharing a short song I wrote a couple hours back

And I just thought I'd share it with anyone on TL.net who's willing to give it a listen as well! =)

But first!! Some self-deprecation..

I'm not really a great singer and I admit that. On top of that!! I'm not really great at writing lyrics either! So I admit that part as well. But these lyrics have to deal with something that I had just gone through which can be found here

http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?id=130826

Anyway, I know we all have different musical tastes but I really like that 4 chords I strummed together on this one lol. It's simple but I really like it!

Thanks guys
My song on my facebook page~~



the lyricsss

Something about your hair
And the way that it moves
Baby, what can I do

And in your eyes
I see your disguise
But I’m stuck on you

And now what I gotta do
Is drop it all and forget about you
Cuz all I can give
I know you won’t take

I know I barely know you
And this feeling, I know it ain’t true
But damn it’s so hard to forget about you

(Chorus start)
I, I’ve fallen for you
I tripped and messed up
And I can’t get back up

And you, you see me on the ground
But we don’t make a sound
(Silence)
No…
(Chorus end)


*****
Gatsbi
Profile Joined April 2010
United States1134 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-06-26 08:23:41
June 26 2010 08:21 GMT
#2
baby, i'll tell you what you can do. get a better mic
"IF WHAT YOU DO NOT KNOW IS MORE THAN WHAT YOU HAVE KNOWN. THEN YOU HAVE NOT KNOWN ANYTHINIG YET." - Rev Kojo Smith
jjun212
Profile Joined December 2004
Canada2208 Posts
June 26 2010 08:29 GMT
#3
On June 26 2010 17:21 Gatsbi wrote:
baby, i'll tell you what you can do. get a better mic


lolllllll i cant argue with u there

im using a mic/cam from 2006

i wish i could afford what the guys on youtube got
vlaric
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
United States412 Posts
June 26 2010 08:54 GMT
#4
Nice, simple song. Like the poster above me said, you need a better mic, but at least you can keep your voice for the most part in tune. I liked it, a nice break from the (imo) predominantly electronic music generated from TL users.
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Piste
Profile Blog Joined July 2006
6179 Posts
June 26 2010 09:51 GMT
#5
nice simple song, but do you really have that high voice or is that just something you do while singing?
7mk
Profile Blog Joined January 2009
Germany10157 Posts
June 26 2010 09:57 GMT
#6
I liked it
beep boop
Yesul
Profile Blog Joined June 2010
Netherlands50 Posts
June 26 2010 10:31 GMT
#7
Nice song! Got a bit of a jack johnson feel about it, which is good.

And +1 to all the mic comments
Dicember12345
Profile Joined June 2010
United States28 Posts
June 26 2010 11:41 GMT
#8
i like it very much =)

you know, you can probably borrow a microphone from a friend if you don't have one. either that, or you can buy a good $50 one from costco, and return it when you are done. haha. it's so mean, but i've done it with more expensive things.
niteReloaded
Profile Blog Joined February 2007
Croatia5281 Posts
June 26 2010 16:05 GMT
#9
love it
M155_G33k
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States470 Posts
June 26 2010 16:23 GMT
#10
Wow thats really good! the lyrics and voice plus the guitar is definitely good. but yah... the whole mic thing.... lol it was good for your equipment though ^_^ I loved it
"It can't be a NE Lan without any problems!" ~ "Starcraft is like sex. After a rough round, sometimes you just need that cigarette."
blahman3344
Profile Blog Joined March 2009
United States2015 Posts
June 26 2010 16:37 GMT
#11
really nice lyrics man!
better than anything i can write atm =P
I like haikus and / I can not lie. You other / brothers can't deny
YPang
Profile Blog Joined April 2007
United States4024 Posts
June 26 2010 16:46 GMT
#12
thats cute, but i think you're a little bit obssessed with her... Let me share, this might be her response unfortunatly


sMi.Gladstone | BW: B high| SC2: gold T_T
eLiE
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
Canada1039 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-06-26 17:12:48
June 26 2010 17:06 GMT
#13
you can't go wrong with a shure sm58 mic (100-150 bucks). but then you've gotta get a mixer which will cost you some money. now i'll listen to the song.

EDIT: so you have a can hit the right notes, which means that you have the potential to be a good singer (some people lack that hearing). it may just be that it was 4 am, but you sound really quiet. I think you could afford to put a bit more strength into the notes, especially the high ones. all in all a good start.

btw, what high school did you go to (just curious)
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