Attempt as an FPVOD w/ commentary

Aux1

United States780 Posts

June 07 2008 08:43 GMT

So basically I've attempted to make an FPVOD with commentary, it's not a great game, but I just wanted to get used to the software and make it. If enough people want to see more, I'll continue to make them, the only problem is that they take nearly 4 hours for me to upload so I will probably only be able to upload a couple a week.

A little bit about myself, I'm a b-/bish level protoss player. I commentate on the games while I'm playing them, that way I feel like I can provide better insight to why I am doing things while I'm doing them. Please give me any constructive criticism that you can, the thing that I most noticed was that my sc volume was too loud, so I will be fixing that for later VODS. Hopefull you guys will enjoy it, thanks a lot.

NotSupporting

Sweden1998 Posts

June 07 2008 08:45 GMT

So where are the VODs? (am I blind) :S

Aux1

United States780 Posts

June 07 2008 08:46 GMT

Centric

United States1989 Posts

June 07 2008 08:50 GMT

Hahaha...like this...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AkOqFIxXJyc

HypnoticPoo

Singapore291 Posts

June 07 2008 08:57 GMT

Nice work. But we need more terran fpvod commentaries ):

Aux1

United States780 Posts

June 07 2008 09:14 GMT

On June 07 2008 17:57 HypnoticPoo wrote:
Nice work. But we need more terran fpvod commentaries ):

everybody knows that protoss is the best race to play

NotSupporting

Sweden1998 Posts

June 07 2008 09:31 GMT

It was nice, I would like to see another one before I make some constructive criticism.

littlechava

United States7220 Posts

June 07 2008 09:31 GMT

get some pvz/pvts going!

Aux1

United States780 Posts

June 07 2008 09:43 GMT

On June 07 2008 18:31 littlechava wrote:
get some pvz/pvts going!

hmm pvz is my best so maybe i will do one next, i dont really find many good vs z games on iccup though, they all try 9pool speed

Southlight

United States11768 Posts

June 07 2008 09:59 GMT

#10

I was under the assumption that 9 pool speed was a relatively standard ZvP opening? >_>

Aux1

United States780 Posts

June 07 2008 10:03 GMT

#11

On June 07 2008 18:59 Southlight wrote:
I was under the assumption that 9 pool speed was a relatively standard ZvP opening? >_>

uhh when it does no damage its hard to lose as toss...

morfyy

Romania593 Posts

June 07 2008 10:35 GMT

#12

what is your apm? ^_^ and pls make some pvz or pvt fpvod

edit: nice play

HeavOnEarth

United States7087 Posts

June 07 2008 10:58 GMT

#13

his apm is obviously 400+.
Nice job with the vids, and LOL@ them taking 4+~ hours to upload to youtube

I think you need to commentate on some pro replays, so you can see both sides
Next Artosis in the making! It was said here first!

Spenguin

Australia3316 Posts

June 07 2008 11:52 GMT

#14

Your not South African!

Dromar

United States2145 Posts

June 07 2008 11:57 GMT

#15

I thought it was relatively good FPvod.

Suggestions:
1. Wake up. You sounded like you were tired or stoned IMO. Try to get a bit more emotion in your voice, though it may be hard to do while you're playing I guess.
2. Uh, pretty good otherwise I guess.

Question:
1. At 8:15 into the video, you had just fended off his first reaver harass, and had ~12 goons outside his base. Wouldn't that have been a good time to move in? His reaver obviously wasn't there to defend.

NotSupporting

Sweden1998 Posts

June 07 2008 12:37 GMT

#16

On June 07 2008 20:57 Dromar wrote:
1. Wake up. You sounded like you were tired or stoned IMO. Try to get a bit more emotion in your voice, though it may be hard to do while you're playing I guess.

Yea, I can agree with this one.

SwaY.

Dominican Republic98 Posts

June 07 2008 14:39 GMT

#17

i liked

Emptyness

Bulgaria1016 Posts

June 07 2008 15:06 GMT

#18

I liked that FPVOD, but you need to put a little bit more emotion and suspense with your voice - it will be a really nice to watch the whole game w/ commentary from yourself then

edahl

Norway483 Posts

June 07 2008 15:15 GMT

#19

I liked it a lot. You might try to turn down the game volume wee bit if you record them separately. Not really a big deal though.

(edit: or record the voice just a bit louder)

MiniRoman

Canada3953 Posts

June 07 2008 15:56 GMT

#20

I'd like to see one vs a better opponant. That guy seemed pretty fucking awful. Your argument was that the other english casters don't have a high understanding of the game (I agree with them not knowing really about protoss reasons and builds) but that game didn't realyl get to demonstrate much of your knowledge. Was too easy and your opponant beat himself really.

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