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Ichigo1234551
Profile Blog Joined October 2008
United States649 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-07-20 17:51:33
July 20 2009 07:24 GMT
#1
Hi guys I just discovered haiku and i found that haiku is art. Haiku needs an image and then from the image you get the feeling. I just started writing haiku for the first time todayso Im not good yet. But i will updates with you guys when i make some more haiku. Haiku can be writing in a lot of style 5-7-5, 3-5-3 syllables. Or just random.

All of my haiku are 5-7-5 and 3-5-3 format right now. I will try different style soon.

My haiku
+ Show Spoiler +

A small slice of cake - had not work out in a while - maybe tomorrow

lying next to me ----- little dog licking its feet --- feeling very clean

Feeling kinda sad --- thinking about calling her --- Nah she wont pick up

Broken heart---why are you broken---heart broken

Late at night, heart beating so fast, just cant sleep

Tomorrow---seem like a good day----life is good

When she looks---my heart beat faster----It is love?

A young girl---looking at the time---makes a wish

A bottle----empty and broken----hit by love



Haiku I found
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she watches
satisfied after love
he lies
looking up at nothing






meteor shower...
a gentle wave
wets our sandals




unhappy wife
i paddle my bike
through the puddle



Fleas bites!
They too thank to her youth
are beatiful




A nude woman
standing over the kitchen stove,
tasting applesauce




Perhaps I'll die like this
lying on the cold earth.


In spring snow
Women are beautiful



No money, no things, no teeths - all alone
The mountains, the sea
Are too beaituful




Sorry I dont know the authors. There are many other good haiku. Post some of your own or share your favorite



Edit:
I dont think you guys
understand what is haiku
if its 5-7-5
even a kid can do it.
,


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English
haiku is not about 5-7-5, its about imagery. read my haiku for examples.

****
I WILL DESTROY YOU IN 2009 OK???????????????
Dgtl
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Canada889 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-07-20 07:26:07
July 20 2009 07:25 GMT
#2
Lol double post blog?
^______________^
Realpenguin
Profile Joined December 2006
8253 Posts
July 20 2009 07:28 GMT
#3
there only seems to be 1 actual thread, but 2 in the sidebar

Trozz makes the best haiku
http://www.teamliquid.net/blog/trozz
<Wolfpox> i remember when MVP beat that one guy, and everyone was like 'whoa' except that penguin dude.
Grobyc
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
Canada18410 Posts
July 20 2009 07:30 GMT
#4
On July 20 2009 16:25 Dgtl wrote:
Lol double post blog?

I opened up both and rated one a 5, one a 1. I wonder what it gets...
If you watch Godzilla backwards it's about a benevolent lizard who helps rebuild a city and then moonwalks into the ocean.
demonic_phate
Profile Blog Joined August 2007
United States442 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-07-20 07:39:48
July 20 2009 07:33 GMT
#5
A nude woman
standing over the kitchen stove,
tasting applesauce

wut...
EDIT: this is fun
Protoss is easy
1a2a3a wins
come so frequently
BusyP
RushWifDietCoke
Profile Joined May 2008
United States488 Posts
July 20 2009 07:33 GMT
#6
On July 20 2009 16:30 Grobyc wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 20 2009 16:25 Dgtl wrote:
Lol double post blog?

I opened up both and rated one a 5, one a 1. I wonder what it gets...


3, 5+1=6/2=3
Nothing to it but to do it.
Grobyc
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
Canada18410 Posts
July 20 2009 07:37 GMT
#7
On July 20 2009 16:33 RushWifDietCoke wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 20 2009 16:30 Grobyc wrote:
On July 20 2009 16:25 Dgtl wrote:
Lol double post blog?

I opened up both and rated one a 5, one a 1. I wonder what it gets...


3, 5+1=6/2=3

It says 5 though o.o
If you watch Godzilla backwards it's about a benevolent lizard who helps rebuild a city and then moonwalks into the ocean.
Ichigo1234551
Profile Blog Joined October 2008
United States649 Posts
July 20 2009 07:41 GMT
#8
On July 20 2009 16:33 demonic_phate wrote:
Show nested quote +
A nude woman
standing over the kitchen stove,
tasting applesauce

wut...
EDIT: this is fun
Protoss is easy
1a2a3a wins
come so frequently


well its a little bit different than that. You need to create an image so that everyone can experience it. You saying protoss is easy but not everyone else think so. You dont have an image. And there is no feeling that coming from the image.
I WILL DESTROY YOU IN 2009 OK???????????????
motbob
Profile Blog Joined July 2008
United States12546 Posts
July 20 2009 07:44 GMT
#9
Leta types GG
Jaedong walks outside his booth
Golden mouse is his
ModeratorGood content always wins.
Ichigo1234551
Profile Blog Joined October 2008
United States649 Posts
July 20 2009 07:45 GMT
#10
On July 20 2009 16:44 motbob wrote:
Leta types GG
Jaedong walks outside his booth
Golden mouse is his

well people that know who is leta and jaedong is can experience the image and feeling. But other people that is no familiar with starcraft progaming scene would have a hard time understand your haiku. And to them there is an image but the feeling is not very strong.
I WILL DESTROY YOU IN 2009 OK???????????????
Ecael
Profile Joined February 2008
United States6703 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-07-20 07:54:21
July 20 2009 07:47 GMT
#11
When has Haiku been written in 3-5-3?

For favorites, 菜の花や月は東に日は西に

I'll leave it to others to translate/find suitable translation. Odd that such a famous one doesn't have random translations littering around.
demonic_phate
Profile Blog Joined August 2007
United States442 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-07-20 07:58:24
July 20 2009 07:53 GMT
#12
hmmm :(
not exactly 1a2a3a easy anymore
EDIT:
he quits in anger
posts on internet forum
3-0‘d by lame cheese
inspired by recent blog by jumperer
BusyP
knyttym
Profile Blog Joined December 2006
United States5797 Posts
July 20 2009 07:56 GMT
#13
This thread reminds me of that dude that posts in haiku.
His signature says "the above is a haiku" or something like that and you check and it's like omg wtf that is awesome.
Grobyc
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
Canada18410 Posts
July 20 2009 08:00 GMT
#14
On July 20 2009 16:56 kNyTTyM wrote:
This thread reminds me of that dude that posts in haiku.
His signature says "the above is a haiku" or something like that and you check and it's like omg wtf that is awesome.

LOL that is awesome
If you watch Godzilla backwards it's about a benevolent lizard who helps rebuild a city and then moonwalks into the ocean.
KrAzYfoOL
Profile Blog Joined September 2005
Australia3037 Posts
July 20 2009 08:09 GMT
#15
what the shit
It's better to burn out than to fade away
randombum
Profile Blog Joined April 2007
United States2378 Posts
July 20 2009 08:11 GMT
#16
Haiku's are easy
Sometimes they do not make sense
Refrigerator.

Above was not mine
But I enjoyed it greatly
May you do the same.
Realpenguin
Profile Joined December 2006
8253 Posts
July 20 2009 08:19 GMT
#17
On July 20 2009 16:56 kNyTTyM wrote:
This thread reminds me of that dude that posts in haiku.
His signature says "the above is a haiku" or something like that and you check and it's like omg wtf that is awesome.

yeah i just posted his blog earlier -_-
<Wolfpox> i remember when MVP beat that one guy, and everyone was like 'whoa' except that penguin dude.
BookTwo
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
1985 Posts
July 20 2009 10:06 GMT
#18
this is amusing
I have an iccup error
will solve it shortly
Starparty
Profile Blog Joined December 2004
Sweden1963 Posts
July 20 2009 11:07 GMT
#19
On July 20 2009 16:45 Ichigo1234551 wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 20 2009 16:44 motbob wrote:
Leta types GG
Jaedong walks outside his booth
Golden mouse is his

well people that know who is leta and jaedong is can experience the image and feeling. But other people that is no familiar with starcraft progaming scene would have a hard time understand your haiku. And to them there is an image but the feeling is not very strong.


I don't know
I think StarCraft Haiku is ok
on a StarCraft site
The artist formerly known as Starparty
Johnny B
Profile Joined April 2009
United States76 Posts
July 20 2009 11:38 GMT
#20
On July 20 2009 20:07 Starparty wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 20 2009 16:45 Ichigo1234551 wrote:
On July 20 2009 16:44 motbob wrote:
Leta types GG
Jaedong walks outside his booth
Golden mouse is his

well people that know who is leta and jaedong is can experience the image and feeling. But other people that is no familiar with starcraft progaming scene would have a hard time understand your haiku. And to them there is an image but the feeling is not very strong.


I don't know I think
StarCraft Haiku is ok
on a StarCraft site


There I fixed your post
You had your linespacing wrong
It was three-nine-five
My dad can beat your dad in StarCraft.
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