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Chapter Four
The ventilation was very cold, yet it had a cold and isolated feeling from the outside. As you crawl to the left, you feel some presence watching you, or maybe, over you. Your nose runs, more and more, you feel the coldness in the vents. More and more, the vent slowly fades to pitch-black. You hold onto your screwdriver out in front as a cane. The metal clash against the vent and makes a scraping sound.
Clanks of metal could be heard from the lower decks, as well. As you move into the darkness, you notice something ahead of you: light. It was the most faint light you have ever seen in your life, yet, it is light. You continue to crawl towards it and hit your head on the top of the vent. You brush it off and continue to crawl towards the light.
Slowly; the light becomes less faint and enlarges itself, too. You continue to crawl with the screwdriver in front of you, then suddenly you fall.
You fall onto something soft.
What do you want to do?
Poll: What do you want to do?
(Vote): Feel for a light switch
(Vote): Feel around you
(Vote): Rest on top of the "something"
Voting ends 2/2 9KST
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Uh oh I don't like the sound of this...
There is no option to stab the soft something with the screwdriver?
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On February 01 2009 08:49 Fontong wrote:
Uh oh I don't like the sound of this...
There is no option to stab the soft something with the screwdriver?
its better to feel first.
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GrandInquisitor
New York City13113 Posts
On February 01 2009 08:49 Fontong wrote:
There is no option to stab the soft something with the screwdriver? That's what he said.
On February 01 2009 08:58 Raithed wrote:
its better to feel first. That's what she said.
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On February 01 2009 09:06 GrandInquisitor wrote:Show nested quote +On February 01 2009 08:49 Fontong wrote:
There is no option to stab the soft something with the screwdriver? That's what he said. That's what she said.
hahaha
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Isn't feeling around inclusive of feeling for a light switch?
I hope it's some giant monster or dead body
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there are clues in the picture(s)... and voting date added!
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Feel for a light switch, but only if you know there are lights witches in such rooms.
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United States24772 Posts
hahahahaha pitch black hahaha
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LMAOOOO hahahaha omg more pics pls.
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On February 01 2009 09:40 Raithed wrote:
there are clues in the picture(s)... and voting date added!
I can't even tell what the picture is.
Edit: I figured it out. That is one ugly looking vent.
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Rest on top of the something. Take it for a walk once you're done resting, and give him some food if he's good.
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Its a puertorican RIDDICK ROFLMAO
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Feel around you to figure out what it is.
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ohshit.we're fucked
i knew it
WE"RE FUCKED OMG OWEJODFSKDSFO
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On February 01 2009 12:34 DreaM)XeRO wrote:
ohshit.we're fucked
i knew it
WE"RE FUCKED OMG OWEJODFSKDSFO
lol
I have faith in the OP in keeping us alive awhile longer :D
Right OP?
RIGHTT???!
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lol pls. we're gonna die in <2-4 chaps.
gg
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i want reset button plzD:
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doubleupgradeobbies!
Australia1288 Posts
On February 01 2009 08:58 Raithed wrote:Show nested quote +On February 01 2009 08:49 Fontong wrote:
Uh oh I don't like the sound of this...
There is no option to stab the soft something with the screwdriver? its better to feel first.
stabbing can be a form of feeling, right?
It seems safer to stab first, ask questions later.
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LOL @ comments here, oh god. its gold.
....yes we wont die.
....yet.
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it's a body
edit: well, corpse.
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Carve a whole in "it" with your screwdriver and proceed to put your dinky-doo in it. And by that, I mean feel it.
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No matter what you landed on, you can be sure that whatever left the red liquid in the vent went down the same way.
Since it's pitch black i assume that it's a room with a sealed door.
If something was in there, it would definitely heard you fall.
I'd say you should feel what you landed on first. If it's a human you can probably overtake him in a fight.
If you just landed on some soft bag or something, i say you should be quiet and listen if someone is in there.
If nothing is in there, great! look around for the light switch.
If there is something in there that is nonhuman(i.e something with greater senses, an animal(alien or smth), or something that can see in the dark) i'd say you're pretty much fucked(but it's too early to die now isn't it? :> )
I predict the soft thing is either :
-A bag of sorts
-Dead corpse
If it's a dead corpse, it could possibly be carrying some kind of recording or clues as to what happened aboard the ship(maybe he was a crew member).
I doubt you'll find anything alive in there, and definitely no allies yet. That would just spoil the whole excitement and atmosphere of the story IMO.
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the areas where the vent meets the wall have the material of the wall expanding around it, as a sponge would. My guess is that the room is a chamber with padding.
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On February 02 2009 08:55 Raithed wrote:
voting ending soon.
imo , voting time should be cut in half
unless u have time constraints for doing these, they look time consuming ;o
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voting already ended. i have my reasons for making voting the way it is.
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Rest on it; if you feel around you'll get your hand bitten off.
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feel around
you'll look pretty badass with a missing hand
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