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My Lament
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CaucasianAsian
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geometryb
United States1249 Posts
i dont really know what the poem is about. "zenith" word choice? i dont see how realizing people won't forgive you can be the high point in life. "utter temptation" hmmmm? i feel like "malignity detestation" kind of hurts the rythm of the poem though. | ||
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