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ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-07-06 17:42:56
July 06 2015 17:40 GMT
#1
So, I'm not sure where this should go, but I wrote a book and wanted to inform everyone. It's a dystopian cyberpunk novel//novella. I would very much appreciate it if everyone gave it a look and if you read it, a review. It's my first one that I've completed and published. I'm also half way finished with the sequel and I'll be releasing that one as well either at the end of the month or at sometime in August after editing and cover art.

Anyway, thank you all for the support and hope to hear from you all!

2055 A novel



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amazingxkcd
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
GRAND OLD AMERICA16375 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-07-06 17:43:32
July 06 2015 17:43 GMT
#2
Im always down to read some sci-fi works. I will read this and let you know how I experience the story you make :D
The world is burning and you rather be on this terrible website discussing video games and your shallow feelings
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 06 2015 17:43 GMT
#3
Just fixed that :p
Thanks!
_fool
Profile Joined February 2011
Netherlands682 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-07-06 20:54:11
July 06 2015 20:50 GMT
#4
"There year is 2055 and society has leaped forward in technology. Virtual Reality, drones, and microchips are commonplace. The internet has been revamped to the 'Net, a place where anything and everything can be found. A new drug has hit the market, Element 1, that enhances the neural connection to the 'Net via Virtual Reality plug-ins. With this new drug, society begins to change.
But not everyone is on board with where society is headed. Some fight to free the people from the bondage of virtual reality. Some fight to right wrongs."

First word is off (or is that what you fixed?)

Anyways, it sounds a bit like the Otherland series + Show Spoiler +
Which, on its wiki, has the following description: "The story is set on Earth near the end of the 21st century, probably between 2082 and 2089 [...], in a world in which technology has advanced somewhat beyond the present. The most notable advancement is the widespread availability of full-immersion virtual reality installations, which allow people from all walks of life to access an online world, called simply the Net."
, which is a good thing! If I can get my hands on a no-kindle version I'll check it out I've proof-read novels before, and I quite like it, so if you're up for feedback, PM me!
"News is to the mind what sugar is to the body"
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 06 2015 23:37 GMT
#5
^_fool yeah I fixed that . It takes a bit before they update so I have to wait . But thank you for the help. I'll pm you the second book when I get a bit further along . I'm also going to release a print version when I finish the second book . So look out for that.

I've never heard of the otherland series. Interesting that no matter how original the thought, someone may have beat you to the punch. I'll give it a look when I find the time.
Qwyn
Profile Blog Joined December 2010
United States2781 Posts
July 07 2015 04:43 GMT
#6
Suggest you drop the cost to a dollar or two. 7.99 is list price for full length paperbacks. It says the length of this book is 125 pages. In terms of content, I cannot justify throwing 8 dollars at it even though I'd like to support you since you're a TL member.

A dollar for first feature is a pretty common strategy on the Amazon market these days. Some people even make their first book free in order to drum up interest for their second release .

Gratz on finishing the first one. Wish you many happy returns.

"Think of the hysteria following the realization that they consciously consume babies and raise the dead people from their graves" - N0
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 07 2015 06:44 GMT
#7
On July 07 2015 13:43 Qwyn wrote:
Suggest you drop the cost to a dollar or two. 7.99 is list price for full length paperbacks. It says the length of this book is 125 pages. In terms of content, I cannot justify throwing 8 dollars at it even though I'd like to support you since you're a TL member.

A dollar for first feature is a pretty common strategy on the Amazon market these days. Some people even make their first book free in order to drum up interest for their second release .

Gratz on finishing the first one. Wish you many happy returns.


I'm looking for a way to offer 25% off for TL members because I like this place. I should be able to get it set up soon.
Thank you your suggestions though. The second book will be a lot longer by hopefully 200 pages.
Qwyn
Profile Blog Joined December 2010
United States2781 Posts
July 07 2015 17:48 GMT
#8
On July 07 2015 15:44 ZerOCoolSC2 wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 07 2015 13:43 Qwyn wrote:
Suggest you drop the cost to a dollar or two. 7.99 is list price for full length paperbacks. It says the length of this book is 125 pages. In terms of content, I cannot justify throwing 8 dollars at it even though I'd like to support you since you're a TL member.

A dollar for first feature is a pretty common strategy on the Amazon market these days. Some people even make their first book free in order to drum up interest for their second release .

Gratz on finishing the first one. Wish you many happy returns.


I'm looking for a way to offer 25% off for TL members because I like this place. I should be able to get it set up soon.
Thank you your suggestions though. The second book will be a lot longer by hopefully 200 pages.


That's good, that's good! I'm not just suggesting to lower the cost because I'm a cheapskate . I'm suggesting it so that you can maximize your traffic .
"Think of the hysteria following the realization that they consciously consume babies and raise the dead people from their graves" - N0
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 07 2015 18:03 GMT
#9
On July 08 2015 02:48 Qwyn wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 07 2015 15:44 ZerOCoolSC2 wrote:
On July 07 2015 13:43 Qwyn wrote:
Suggest you drop the cost to a dollar or two. 7.99 is list price for full length paperbacks. It says the length of this book is 125 pages. In terms of content, I cannot justify throwing 8 dollars at it even though I'd like to support you since you're a TL member.

A dollar for first feature is a pretty common strategy on the Amazon market these days. Some people even make their first book free in order to drum up interest for their second release .

Gratz on finishing the first one. Wish you many happy returns.


I'm looking for a way to offer 25% off for TL members because I like this place. I should be able to get it set up soon.
Thank you your suggestions though. The second book will be a lot longer by hopefully 200 pages.


That's good, that's good! I'm not just suggesting to lower the cost because I'm a cheapskate . I'm suggesting it so that you can maximize your traffic .


I can't see a way to offer a discount, so I just lowered the price. It is now $4.99 USD instead of $7.99 USD. When I release the second book, I'll make the first book free for a period of time. Thanks Qwyn for the suggestion! ^_^

If there has been any problems PM me and I'll try to sort them out.
Falling
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
Canada11578 Posts
July 08 2015 07:39 GMT
#10
Well page count is neither here nor there as page count has everything to do with formatting. Is it less than 80,000 words? Like 60-70K?
Moderator5000 of our finest Taliban warriors have been released! Rise up my brothers. Mashalla! al-Donald ibn-Frederick al-Masih allows it.
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 08 2015 13:46 GMT
#11
42,704 is the page count. With 202 pages written before formatting.

For comparison the second book is currently at 23k with 106 pages before formatting.
Dagobert
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Netherlands1858 Posts
July 08 2015 15:35 GMT
#12
Is advertising now allowed on TL? Hmhm.

Well, just grabbed a few pocket-sized paperbacks from my shelf, to estimate wordcount:

Wells - Invisible Man ~ 55k (scifi)
[Dick - A scanner darkly ~55k] actually not on/off my shelf.
Gibson - Neuromancer ~ 67k (scifi) A grand total of about 46 pages of white space out of 270, wow.
O'Connor - John Locke ~ 70k (phil)

42k words seems a bit low, even for scifi. A "page count" of 42k however seems a bit heavy on the everything. 42k * 2.5g,... that book would weigh in at 106+ kg (without ink).

But yea, if you're gonna advertise *here*, don't make me go to other websites to read a preview.
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 08 2015 17:49 GMT
#13
I'm not advertising here. Otherwise I would have images and a lot more stuff on here. I just wanted to share that I wrote a book. Haha I've been lurking here forever. And you're right, I meant word count. It was actually a lot higher but I cut out a lot of stuff I didn't find necessary. This is my first run so I'm looking for feedback to make my next one better. I also looked through some physical copies that I have and the page count range from 150-300. 1984 is right around 200 pages. Another is basically three books in one and tops at 400. So I guess depending on the genre or whatever, the page count and word count will differ?
But thank you for the input and info. Any suggestions is greatly appreciated and welcome.
Falling
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
Canada11578 Posts
July 09 2015 04:52 GMT
#14
Again, page count changes almost by magic depending on formatting. That 1984 book is around 80-90K words. While there are novels like Lord of the Flies that are 53K words or on the other side War and Peace +500K, your average novel published today is between 80K and 120K. This is also dependent on genre- fantasy tends to run longer, whereas YA tends shorter. The Hobbit sits in the middle with 100K. Of course story length says nothing about the quality, but if people are concerned about a book feeling too long or short, word count is what to look for.

The books they make you read in school tend towards the shorter side Animal farm 30K give or take. Actually, I think they have started calling books that are between 20K and 50K novellas.
Moderator5000 of our finest Taliban warriors have been released! Rise up my brothers. Mashalla! al-Donald ibn-Frederick al-Masih allows it.
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 09 2015 15:06 GMT
#15
I completely agree Falling. The debate I had with myself for over a year was whether or not to continue the story and make it all into one book, or to break it up. I started with the idea of a trilogy and somehow wrote the 2nd book first. I finished that, feeling satisfied that I had gotten across what I wanted within the 40k words. Then I tried to get the first one written but it felt forced so I stopped and then started the second one.
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
July 27 2015 19:36 GMT
#16
I thought I would share a paragraph of the new book. I'm at 177 pages, with roughly 37k words.

+ Show Spoiler +
The neoon lights of the digital district shown like a beacon to lost souls. In this part of the city, anything and everything was for experience. Like the ‘Net, you could find whatever it was your soul desired most. The cyber bars were the most popular attraction, offering a safe and exciting way to partake in virtual adventures. Some chose sexual desires, while others chose to live as someone else. The disconnect, how they were brought back to the real world after their time was up, was a chemical solution and a memory told to the operators. When the time was up, a solution was pumped into their arms, slowly fragmenting the dream and replacing it with nonsensical items. Then the memory was programmed and inserted, helping to complete the disconnect. There were of course other cyber bars that ran on a more near permanent solution than renting. And those were kept guarded and secret from the prying eyes of the Warden and hardliners.
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
August 08 2015 04:01 GMT
#17
Still writing the second book. I'm currently at 240 pages with 50k words. I think I can have it finished by the end of next week. I'm looking for an editor and publisher to bring it to paperback. The process I go through is weird to say the least. I mostly wake up around 6AM and write until 8AM and then lay down for a quick nap. Somehow, I've convinced myself that this helps with the writing and by closing my eyes, I can visualize where the story is headed. Then I get up at 9AM and write until about 12AM. After that, it's mostly sitting around in my undies and watching anime and DC movies.
ZerOCoolSC2
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
9062 Posts
August 26 2015 01:00 GMT
#18
Well, about two weeks ago I finished the second book. It tops out at around 270 pages or so. I think it's right at 57k words as well. It'll more than likely increase in characters as I edit and proofread. I think some of the settings could be better written and described. I'll likely update you all with more as I go along.
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