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Those Rain Drops[Poem] and an NSA Satire[Essay]

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3FFA
Profile Blog Joined February 2010
United States3931 Posts
March 21 2014 15:15 GMT
#1
Those Rain Drops
By 3FFA

Those rain drops
fall upon the children,
filling them with glee.
As beautiful as rainbows
kissing their cheeks.

Those rain drops,
throughout time, fill children with awe.
They pour down,
with brand new tastes,
and musical sounds.

Those rain drops,
carrying cheer to the children,
create emotions of joy and happiness,
day after day,
until suddenly, gone.

Those rain drops
give way to a bright sky.
just as children give way to a bright future,
always full of wonder.


And a short NSA Satire Essay I wrote:

Nothing could be easier to understand than the need for information. In fact, we are all collecting information. However, when we finish collecting data from one area we need more to verify the trustworthiness of the information. It is only logical that to do this effectively the National Security Agency(NSA) should just spy on everyone, everywhere, doing everything. Now, as this is an issue of national security, the freedom of the American people will have to take a backseat. All we do is collect data which is never acted on unless a threat to national security is noticed. As you can see, safeguarding your rights is our first priority.

Clearly, this is a fantastic way to protect citizens. You may consider yourself targeted due to your race or ethnicity but make no mistake; The NSA seeks only to secure your safety. I propose a simple solution. Insert chips into everyone’s neck that track their bodily functions as well as their location. These would be required of all citizens as well as all persons entering or exiting the United States borders. Thus, we could further focus on the limitless information received from citizens rather than concealing our actions from the people. Of course, the only reason to be against your privacy being explicitly violated is if you have something to hide. What other reason could there be?

Secondly, while I believe this guaranteed security is marvelous I am aware of those that are still against it. Arguments of this being illegal are completely false, trust me. Some of you propose a complete dismantlement of the organization. This would cut off the government from monitoring everyone’s everyday lives. This is nothing if not preposterous! In fact, I would go so far as to call anyone that objects to government surveillance of their everyday lives naive and ignorant. How could anyone not feel perfectly safe with the NSA tracking their every move?

Furthermore, the very idea of demolishing everything the NSA has worked for is unbelievable! There is no case to be made for wasting all the intel we have worked so hard for. It is not like we have been having little to no direct effect on preventing terrorist attacks. There also is no basis to be made on us having violated anyone’s constitutional rights. Throughout our time sheltering citizens from terrorists we have only gained more credibility, as has our government. After all, without the NSA how else is the government supposed to know whether or not you are a terrorist?

Personally, I have no reason to fear the NSA. All they do is ensure our families' safety from terrorists. They may see all my emails and text messages but I have nothing to hide. Why should I be against them when all they do is establish exceptional levels of security? We may all sleep safe tonight knowing that they are always watching over us.

***
"As long as it comes from a pure place and from a honest place, you know, you can write whatever you want."
hp.Shell
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
United States2527 Posts
March 22 2014 01:24 GMT
#2
The poem reminds me of some melodic death metal lyrics. Just a little bit of a darker change is all it would take. I like that style, it really says a lot.
Please PM me with any songs you like that you think I haven't heard before!
Thaniri
Profile Blog Joined March 2011
1264 Posts
March 22 2014 07:45 GMT
#3
The only poems I've read were in my high school english classes and I always hated them. I'm discovering more often though that there are a lot of things I find enjoyment in but could not enjoy in the context of high school.

Your poem gives a nice mellow optimism to me, and I like it quite a lot.
3FFA
Profile Blog Joined February 2010
United States3931 Posts
March 22 2014 17:56 GMT
#4
On March 22 2014 10:24 hp.Shell wrote:
The poem reminds me of some melodic death metal lyrics. Just a little bit of a darker change is all it would take. I like that style, it really says a lot.


On March 22 2014 16:45 Thaniri wrote:
The only poems I've read were in my high school english classes and I always hated them. I'm discovering more often though that there are a lot of things I find enjoyment in but could not enjoy in the context of high school.

Your poem gives a nice mellow optimism to me, and I like it quite a lot.


I'm glad that you guys enjoyed it! This had just the effect I hoped for when I wrote it.
"As long as it comes from a pure place and from a honest place, you know, you can write whatever you want."
hp.Shell
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
United States2527 Posts
March 22 2014 22:44 GMT
#5
On March 22 2014 16:45 Thaniri wrote:
The only poems I've read were in my high school english classes and I always hated them. I'm discovering more often though that there are a lot of things I find enjoyment in but could not enjoy in the context of high school.

Your poem gives a nice mellow optimism to me, and I like it quite a lot.

I didn't like poetry until I met my senior year AP English teacher, who was a total badass. Then I really enjoyed the times when we had to read Shakespeare, but I still haven't really gone off on my own to look for good stuff. Poetry slams are fun, though.
Please PM me with any songs you like that you think I haven't heard before!
Fishgle
Profile Blog Joined May 2011
United States2174 Posts
Last Edited: 2014-03-22 23:01:51
March 22 2014 22:57 GMT
#6
On March 23 2014 07:44 hp.Shell wrote:
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On March 22 2014 16:45 Thaniri wrote:
The only poems I've read were in my high school english classes and I always hated them. I'm discovering more often though that there are a lot of things I find enjoyment in but could not enjoy in the context of high school.

Your poem gives a nice mellow optimism to me, and I like it quite a lot.

I didn't like poetry until I met my senior year AP English teacher, who was a total badass. Then I really enjoyed the times when we had to read Shakespeare, but I still haven't really gone off on my own to look for good stuff. Poetry slams are fun, though.

My Senior year AP English teacher was a boss too. Always assigned interesting modern stuff. made the whole class a lot more interested in literature as a whole. When my friends and I wanted him to look over our essays one day, he said "okay, but you guys have to buy me dinner" - and then the 5 of us got to hang out with him at a Mongolian BBQ where he tried to convince me that Diet Coke was better than normal Coke. And then we talked about how much of a shittily-written book How to Kill a Mockingbird is. It was rad.

edit - oh. OP. right. Your satire was a bit too safe, imo. I like my satire over the top and ludicrous. Maybe something like : "NSA watches your babies at night" - or - "Why spend money on condoms? Even sex is always safe with the NSA watching!"
aka ChillyGonzalo / GnozL
3FFA
Profile Blog Joined February 2010
United States3931 Posts
Last Edited: 2014-03-23 02:00:52
March 23 2014 01:58 GMT
#7
Yeah, I kind of felt like I didn't want to go overboard with the Satire since it was my very first one and I wasn't sure how overboard my teacher would want me to go. I considered the sex/condom path but thought since it is high school I could possibly get in trouble for that. =/

I have yet to find a teacher that gets me to enjoy English class. I like writing, just not always for English assignments that feel like they are forcing me to write about stuff I don't want to. When I don't want to, I never try my hardest and then I often end up either not finishing it or finishing it but not feeling like it is good enough and feeling 'ashamed' to hand it in, if that makes sense.
"As long as it comes from a pure place and from a honest place, you know, you can write whatever you want."
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