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Fiddledee doo fiddledee da
Happyness is the strongest aroma
At the start of today or maybe yesterday
I have to say... I didn't feel okay.
It isn't like this everyday
But today my mood was in decay.
Or was it yesterday.
But now that feel is miles away
So I can say hurray!
Fiddledee doo fiddledee da
This is my favourite saga!
I'll tell you the story and I'll tell you it fast
It holds the greatest glory it truly is a blast!
Yes a grand history I must tell you! before time has passed!
Hope you wont get all bory, before it has started at last!
Fiddledee doo fiddledee da
but I won't tell you, Tah tah tah!
I know you're currently probably quite snappy
But I tell you I'm mostly happy
These rhymes aren't to annoy you
It's the smile giving you anew
That is the cause I'm trying to pursue
Behold the truth, I tell you its true
Fiddledee doo fiddle dee da
I hope you've enjoyed this, and please no drama...
Stop crying my children this rhyme is at an end.
I hope with my pen, nobody did I offend
So please no hate.
and do remember to rate.
From zero to ten.
although I expect the words, never again!
 
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The sun was shining brightly and I could hardly wait
To ponder at my windowsill and gaze at my estate.
The breeze was blowing briskly, it made the flowers sway.
My garden was so delightful on this enchanting day.
My eyes fell upon a beautiful bird with a lovely yellow bill
And I beckoned it to come and light upon my window sill.
I smiled at it sweetly and fed it crusts of bread
And quickly slammed the window shut and smashed its stupid head.
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jerubaa's was better, lmfao.
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Misread poem as porn 
Not too disappointed, though. I have a soft spot for rhyming. Fuck poems that don't rhyme.
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Rhyming riddles in a nonsenical amalgam
Leaves meaning, beauty both melancholy and subdued.
+ Show Spoiler +MaestroSC your addition is simply awesome even though you rhymed it with it.
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Browsing Teamliquid as bored as can be
When I spot a blog title, that's pleasing to me
I click on the title, expecting mind to be blown
But I feel like a zerg, after a probe killed my drone.
My expectations were not met, a refund I demand!
You say best poem ever written? Must have low standards in Iceland.
+ Show Spoiler +Not trying to be mean, Just having a bit of fun, Sorry to rhyme and leave, but my post here is done. Hmm I wonder if it is possible to speak only in rhyme, It's not that its hard, just makes my posts take more time. Actually this rhyming is fun, In fact I rather enjoy it. Your poem's the One ring, and I'm Elrond yelling "FUCKING DESTROY IT!"
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On November 17 2012 12:25 Entertaining wrote:
jerubaa's was better, lmfao.
But.... I googled his poem and... It had already been made by another person I don't know ,(I won't go as far as say that). But still sounds quite suspicious..
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On November 17 2012 12:36 SnipedSoul wrote:Misread poem as porn Not too disappointed, though. I have a soft spot for rhyming. Fuck poems that don't rhyme.
Yeah bunch of crap if you ask me....
Those artist that make the "new age artistry" not sure about the word... I'm no artist though... just a nerd
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Mr. Bimbles you can't write something that horrific and then complain about "new age artistry."
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Eye halve a spelling chequer
It came with my pea sea
It plainly marques four my revue
Miss steaks eye kin knot sea.
Eye strike a key and type a word
And weight four it two say
Weather eye am wrong oar write
It shows me strait a weigh.
As soon as a mist ache is maid
It nose bee fore two long
And eye can put the error rite
Its rarely ever wrong.
Eye have run this poem threw it
I am shore your pleased two no
Its letter perfect in it's weigh
My chequer tolled me sew.
-- Sauce unknown
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