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nalgene
Canada2153 Posts
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FireSA
Australia555 Posts
On October 20 2011 14:33 nalgene wrote: Criticism can be both positive and negative ( but you imply that it is only negative though ? ) edit: But in this case most of it is negative I suppose if not all... The fact that it is negative shouldn't be an issue, most of it is constructive feedback, which is really the only thing that matters. But he probably should have just made it a blog. He would have received less attention, and therefore less negative feedback  | ||
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DEN1ED
United States1087 Posts
intro: introduce shit, hook or something like that, thesis 3-5 body paragraphs: each one different point supporting thesis conclusion: summarize points and such I haven't written an essay in forever so maybe I'm wrong but I think this is how it's done? This just seems like a bunch of random info on SC thrown together and doesn't have any focus. Always cool to write about SC though. | ||
itsjustatank
Hong Kong9179 Posts
On October 20 2011 14:42 DEN1ED wrote: Isn't standard essay format something like: intro: introduce shit, hook or something like that, thesis 3-5 body paragraphs: each one different point supporting thesis conclusion: summarize points and such I haven't written an essay in forever so maybe I'm wrong but I think this is how it's done? This just seems like a bunch of random info on SC thrown together and doesn't have any focus. Always cool to write about SC though. Standard essay formats are really fucking terrible. They encourage the writing of papers that have a severe lack of analysis and fall back to summary in order to meet length or format requirements. Well-written papers do not rely on cookie-cutter builds. Rather, they make their point to their reader as effectively and efficiently as possible. This idea is the big jump from grade school level writing to university level writing that people do not seem to get. | ||
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Nemireck
Canada1875 Posts
On October 20 2011 13:30 Bacon-X wrote: Naw it wasn't the helpful comments.. it was the ones who said i'm dumb and stuff... yeah my writing isn't good and all but you know what... at least i tried... I didn't have that much time to do it though so.. yeaaah... lol On the bright side, now you won't be surprised when it's handed back to you with a failing grade. | ||
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nalgene
Canada2153 Posts
On October 20 2011 14:47 itsjustatank wrote: Standard essay formats are really fucking terrible. They encourage the writing of papers that have a severe lack of analysis and fall back to summary in order to meet length or format requirements. Well-written papers do not rely on cookie-cutter builds. Rather, they make their point to their reader as effectively and efficiently as possible. This idea is the big jump from grade school level writing to university level writing that people do not seem to get. Pretty much that. Oh and is he doomed? And yeah... I agree... some of that information seems unnecessary and would probably make it even worst than not having them at all... | ||
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QuanticHawk
United States32159 Posts
On October 20 2011 13:30 Bacon-X wrote: Naw it wasn't the helpful comments.. it was the ones who said i'm dumb and stuff... yeah my writing isn't good and all but you know what... at least i tried... I didn't have that much time to do it though so.. yeaaah... lol you admitted that you basically shit this out and didn't even bother giving it any kind of flow or anything. So yeah, you will have a bunch of comments telling you how you're dumb and lazy, that you're going to fail and that you're not deserving of someone taking their time to give you in depth commentary because you couldn't be bothered to put decent effort into work you're getting graded on sure says a lot about your respect level for the community that you shit this thing out and expect everyone to help do your homework for you just because it's about SC. People here would help if you were a bad writer but actually tried, even just a little. You did not, you're a terrible writer, and the comments and grade will reflect that | ||
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naggerNZ
New Zealand708 Posts
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0Byqk8dNZQpFLZWMyOGU2ZmUtZDE3OS00OTYyLTgzYjYtMGI3ODMwYzkxYjgz&hl=en Who knows, maybe it'll give some inspiration for others to write essays from the SC2 world for their university work. Edit: Also, ignore the transcript at the bottom. I forgot to crop that from the document. | ||
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Snuggles
United States1865 Posts
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Bacon-X
United States266 Posts
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Taiwan619 Posts
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blubbdavid
Switzerland2412 Posts
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