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Dubzex
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http://forum.anjunabeats.com/forum/3-making-music/ They are generally very helpful there and will give you constructive criticism on all of your work. edit: The first definitely has a more eurodance vibe while the second is a little more trancey. I prefer the second one. | ||
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Rustymike
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esla_sol
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hifriend
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On June 16 2011 21:17 Rustymike wrote: Or This? is better, more refined. Alright thank you. On June 16 2011 21:20 esla_sol wrote: Or this? far superior got it.  On June 16 2011 21:14 Dubzex wrote: May I recommend to you a better forum to ask this question in? http://forum.anjunabeats.com/forum/3-making-music/ They are generally very helpful there and will give you constructive criticism on all of your work. "[#10123] The administrator is currently not accepting new membership registrations." T_T | ||
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Dubzex
United States6994 Posts
On June 16 2011 21:22 hifriend wrote: "[#10123] The administrator is currently not accepting new membership registrations." T_T I think you need to register with your facebook account. Did you try that? | ||
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hifriend
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On June 16 2011 21:27 Dubzex wrote: I think you need to register with your facebook account. Did you try that? Ah that did it. Thanks for the tip, I'll give it a go. | ||
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Kyuki
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alffla
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hifriend
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On June 16 2011 21:59 alffla wrote: lol i like the first one more On June 16 2011 21:37 Kyuki wrote: Or this? is clearly more sophisticated as pointed out, but they're both quite different imho and the first one could "work" with some more fiddeling with. As they look now though, the "Or this?" is better. Yeah I put a little more work into the second one, so it's hard to compare I guess. "This" might go better with the overall song I think, but "or this" kinda sounds better. :S | ||
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sob3k
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hifriend
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On June 16 2011 22:28 sob3k wrote: 2nd one is better but still both are very rough and too empty/minimal when you are doing dancey trance. Think splashy reverse cymbals everywhere and very little empty space. Use 4bar cutoff or attack raising intros instead of suddenness or silence. True but I figured I'd mix up dancey breakdown/buildup with a house beat. Bad idea? But there's definitely room for a lot more stuff in these little parts. | ||
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sob3k
United States7572 Posts
On June 16 2011 22:31 hifriend wrote: True but I figured I'd mix up dancey breakdown/buildup with a house beat. Bad idea? But there's definitely room for a lot more stuff in these little parts. I'm not gonna say that's a bad thing, but the two sequences you had were too abrupt. Stuff in there needs to get smoothed out. I felt a loss of energy when elements were removed and was momentarily confused/surprised when elements were brought in. I would recommend giving it a day of rest so you forget what's happening and going in and smoothing the transitions with a fresh mind. I'm sure you know how impossible it is to make sure transitions aren't jarring when you already know each melody and have them drilled into your head from looping 64856x. | ||
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hifriend
China7935 Posts
On June 16 2011 23:19 sob3k wrote: I'm not gonna say that's a bad thing, but the two sequences you had were too abrupt. Stuff in there needs to get smoothed out. I felt a loss of energy when elements were removed and was momentarily confused/surprised when elements were brought in. I would recommend giving it a day of rest so you forget what's happening and going in and smoothing the transitions with a fresh mind. I'm sure you know how impossible it is to make sure transitions aren't jarring when you already know each melody and have them drilled into your head from looping 64856x. Yeah you're right, guess I'll let let it rest a little bit for now. | ||
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