My First...

ff7legend

United States213 Posts

June 02 2011 20:41 GMT

For the past couple months my life has been in a funk. I had lost basically all ambition to do anything and any aspirations i once held. It was hard. My friend was going through the same thing so there was not really any positivity around me. So when faced with this adversity i turned to music. Recently(about a week ago) i began thinking about producing music. And this is the best thing to come yet... nothing amazing but I'm proud of it. Please tell me what you think (Nothing to harsh).

Click Here for Song

PS - I apologize in advanced, the file is pretty big.

Mattes

Germany1116 Posts

June 02 2011 20:50 GMT

First of all, i like the sample really much.

Yeah, it lacks a little diversity, but i guess for a framework its quite nice

Qzy

Denmark1121 Posts

June 02 2011 21:12 GMT

Just the two of us... Just the twwoooo of us. Minime, you and I.

gumshoe

Canada3602 Posts

June 02 2011 21:20 GMT

Sound is decent, don't want to get in to that though because my opinion is of course suggestive and not much use to you. What I can say is that I appreciate the effect that the song creates. You start of with a throw back to a song from a previous generation and then change it in a way that makes it feel like a modern piece . The song thingamagig almost feels kinda like a bad ass car that you inherited from your grandfather than pimped out because it looked way to old. (forgive me if I'm way off.) Oh and the guys voice ringing in the back was just a little bit annoying but thats probably just me.

GriFy

United States22 Posts

June 02 2011 21:26 GMT

On June 03 2011 06:20 gumshoe wrote:
Sound is decent, don't want to get in to that though because my opinion is of course suggestive and not much use to you. What I can say is that I appreciate the effect that the song creates. You start of with a throw back to a song from a previous generation and then change it in a way that makes it feel like a modern piece . The song thingamagig almost feels kinda like a bad ass car that you inherited from your grandfather than pimped out because it looked way to old. (forgive me if I'm way off.) Oh and the guys voice ringing in the back was just a little bit annoying but thats probably just me.

You, sir, are an eloquent gentleman who is, evidently, capable of reading minds through the internet.

hifriend

China7935 Posts

June 02 2011 21:30 GMT

I like it. Very relaxed and I don't think I could have made anything even in the vicinity of that sound quality when I had only been producing for a mere week.

ff7legend

United States213 Posts

June 03 2011 00:37 GMT

Thank you guys so much for your input.... i know it may be a little bland and repetitive but hey im learning... gimme some time and ill be back with something WAY better.

edc

United States666 Posts

June 03 2011 02:23 GMT

I honestly think it sounds nice... very relaxing. You should try Dubstep

. Anyway, keep up the work!

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