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Treeplant
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States214 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-02-14 11:12:05
February 14 2010 11:11 GMT
#1
Hello, I currently need someone to edit my personal statement for a university application. In MY opinion, of all the forums I use, TL has the smartest users. Or at least, much smarter than me Anyways, I need someone to edit my PS for grammatically errors, spelling mistakes, and awkward sentences. $10 for the job. Post or PM if you can do it!

-Paypal btw

Saracen
Profile Blog Joined December 2007
United States5139 Posts
February 14 2010 11:12 GMT
#2
I'll do it for free.
Treeplant
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States214 Posts
February 14 2010 11:13 GMT
#3
On February 14 2010 20:12 Saracen wrote:
I'll do it for free.


Thanks for the generous offer, but I'll have to compensate you somehow, as it is very boring and probably full of errors!

I'll PM you for your IM info.

Thanks
Treeplant
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States214 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-02-14 11:16:59
February 14 2010 11:16 GMT
#4
Sorry, double posted some how
Skazzo
Profile Joined December 2007
United States102 Posts
February 14 2010 11:19 GMT
#5
Let me know if stuff with Saracen falls through, I'd be glad to help as well.
Treeplant
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States214 Posts
February 14 2010 11:28 GMT
#6
On February 14 2010 20:19 Skazzo wrote:
Let me know if stuff with Saracen falls through, I'd be glad to help as well.


Thanks for the offer! Saracen hasn't responded to my PM, so maybe he is busy at the moment? I kind of want to get this done asap, so I'll pm you for the job Skazzo.

Thanks anyways, Saracen
wfoperational
Profile Blog Joined February 2010
United States143 Posts
February 14 2010 11:39 GMT
#7
lol the hell with craigslist, we have everything on TL don't we.

I'm more than happy to help with people's college app stuff, since I have personally been thru the horror PM me if you still need any help.
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Newpostblog
Profile Joined February 2010
Afghanistan14 Posts
February 14 2010 17:01 GMT
#8
Are you willing to just post it on TL? people have done so in the past and gotten comments.
DamageControL
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
United States4222 Posts
February 14 2010 17:04 GMT
#9
Yeah, I'd do it for free but I'm not a university student. I'm generally considered fairly good at writing, though, and will likely catch any horrible errors.
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Sight
Profile Blog Joined February 2010
United States148 Posts
February 14 2010 17:07 GMT
#10
Sorry, I thought I switched over, DamageControl is sight, so if you do decide to pm me with the essay send it to Sight.

(I switched screennames because I decided to make myself a permareaver and kinda detest it now)
Saracen
Profile Blog Joined December 2007
United States5139 Posts
February 14 2010 17:19 GMT
#11
lol
Nal_rAwr
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
United States2611 Posts
February 14 2010 17:40 GMT
#12
i do for free i great in gramer

sike no really i'll help you
Nony is Bonjwa
LarJarsE
Profile Blog Joined August 2009
United States1378 Posts
February 14 2010 17:47 GMT
#13
how prestigious is this university?
since 98'
KissBlade
Profile Blog Joined October 2004
United States5718 Posts
February 14 2010 17:52 GMT
#14
You should also ask an English teacher or someone in academia to look over it. Also $10 is fairly low, you might as well ask for either free help or go for a heftier pay to a professional.
Judicator
Profile Blog Joined August 2004
United States7270 Posts
February 14 2010 17:58 GMT
#15
Yeah, I think 25 is like the "professional" rate.

Some basic pointers, your essay has to basically answer the question: what is the point? You should also focus on making the reader understand you better as a person. Those are the 2 questions and problems I see with every statement I get as people love throwing out their accomplishments and some story that most people don't care about.
Get it by your hands...
mmp
Profile Blog Joined April 2009
United States2130 Posts
February 14 2010 18:16 GMT
#16
Should just post it and offer prize to whomever gives most thorough corrections.
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Squeegy
Profile Joined October 2009
Finland1166 Posts
February 14 2010 18:47 GMT
#17
No. At least in the UK they have some kind of search methods in case of plagiarism. You don't want to post your statement for everyone to see.
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micronesia
Profile Blog Joined July 2006
United States24740 Posts
February 14 2010 19:13 GMT
#18
Eh I don't like the idea of people paying for this... I can't complain if you get friends/family to help you... but paying someone you don't know defeats the whole purpose of the assignment.

Some people have more helpful friends/families than others, sure, but they are also the ones with more money. Aren't we trying to lessen the disadvantage of having less money when going into college? I can't think of a global solution though.
ModeratorThere are animal crackers for people and there are people crackers for animals.
Mastermind
Profile Blog Joined April 2008
Canada7096 Posts
February 14 2010 20:12 GMT
#19
On February 15 2010 04:13 micronesia wrote:
Eh I don't like the idea of people paying for this... I can't complain if you get friends/family to help you... but paying someone you don't know defeats the whole purpose of the assignment.

Some people have more helpful friends/families than others, sure, but they are also the ones with more money. Aren't we trying to lessen the disadvantage of having less money when going into college? I can't think of a global solution though.

Welcome to the real world.
micronesia
Profile Blog Joined July 2006
United States24740 Posts
February 14 2010 20:58 GMT
#20
On February 15 2010 05:12 Mastermind wrote:
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On February 15 2010 04:13 micronesia wrote:
Eh I don't like the idea of people paying for this... I can't complain if you get friends/family to help you... but paying someone you don't know defeats the whole purpose of the assignment.

Some people have more helpful friends/families than others, sure, but they are also the ones with more money. Aren't we trying to lessen the disadvantage of having less money when going into college? I can't think of a global solution though.

Welcome to the real world.

The place where we use others' lack of morality as an excuse to have 0 ourselves? I'm not saying you should always take the 'boy scout' approach to life or anything.
ModeratorThere are animal crackers for people and there are people crackers for animals.
Treeplant
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States214 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-02-15 07:14:10
February 15 2010 07:12 GMT
#21
Hi, sorry for the late response. Saracen is editing my essay and he is doing an amazing job. Also, the university is University of Washington, so its not an ivy league school or anything.

I didn't ask anyone I know personally because it was 3 A.M at the time, and its due on the 15th.

Also, you guys are right, $10 is too low, so I'll find a way to compensate Saracen for $25, as he doesn't have paypal.

Thanks
toastybunz
Profile Joined May 2009
United States47 Posts
February 16 2010 20:49 GMT
#22
seele,

i just sent in my apps for the UW yesterday as well lool. wanna compare statements? i'm curious as to what another applicant's looks like
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