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Finally done >.<
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=8154863444098766491
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Thanks to you, TL, superiorwolf, exalted, and yakii for the VOD :D.
After watching the commentary, I request two things:
1. FLAME, CRITICISM, NIT-PICKY STUFF, all that jazz I really want to improve and help start something big
2. Please suggest VODs that you would like me to do commentary on (preferably includes a protoss in the mu, and preferably a recent game as well)
Thanks so much TL.net!
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Canada7170 Posts
"The file you are trying to access is temporarily unavailable."
EDIT: nvm. mine just finished, so i'm watching it!
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i also get the "unavailable " thingy
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Canada7170 Posts
Interesting VOD choice. Mirror matches are usually kinda difficult to do commentary, at least I would think so.
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u gotta skate8152 Posts
I think it would be much easier to follow if you upload your commentaries on Youtube/Google video.
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Canada7170 Posts
Okay, 8 minutes in, I think I see how things are going.
I like the commentary, pvp being a shitty matchup for me, it's nice for me to gain a little insight. Your voice is very calm, collected, and you don't explain what each unit does (GOOD THING). However, I'd like to see more predictions or a little more insight instead of just relaying what's happening on screen.
I like it though. You definitely have your own style.
(More enthusiasm!) I may as well watch a chess match!
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I can't download from Megaupload
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YES! An English commentator who is not 12! or explaining scvs! I'll make a list as I watch:
-More confidence in what you're saying, you stutter often. Relax. -I'm loving the background knowledge -Good running commentary -voice is kind of quiet -No need for "here we see" kind of things, just yell out what is happening! Infact you can drop the We and never use it. -"and the cannon containment that much has put is not helping very much at all... heh sorry... bad pun... not on purpose" made me laugh -You go back on your words sometimes -Good job, I enjoyed it. Good personality.
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United States20661 Posts
It's a bit awkward, start/stop/start/stop a lot. Just try to talk normally. It's not like you're being judged or anything.
It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.
Your voice isn't bad though ^^; and the background at the beginning is nice.
I suppose it's hard to have enthusiasm if you know who wins beforehand. Even so, put in more KOREAN STYLE SHOUTING.
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On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote: It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.
I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them.
You just need 2 mics =)
Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now
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All slots eternally in use..
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i hate the overenthausiastic shouting which superiorwolf sometimes uses. Everybody here seems te encourage faster and louder talking at exciting moments, but it doenst work if you fake it. Anyone with a little video-gaming history will get the excitement from the game, no need to dance and make large balloons pop and stuff.
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Guys be nice and upload somewhere else please !!
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someone upload it to rapidshare please
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Canada7170 Posts
I hit Open instead of Save, as I am running out of room. Sorry.
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Would some angel please upload to Youtube or Google?
I dunno why, but both COMPLETELY failed for me!
I tried Youtube 8 times. The progress bar was 100%, but it wouldn't do anything afterwards. >.<.
As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again .
Me:
Anyway, megaupload was basically my last option >.<
Anyway guys, I'm loving your feedback and am definitely looking foward to making more
Thanks so much, but the only thing i'm lacking is recommendations for VODs
Thanks again, TL!
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Nice overall, yeah your voice was very quiet but you'll get better. People who live close to each other or friends should do a double of trio commentating thing like the real progaming
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what program did you do for doing voice overs?
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United States20661 Posts
On June 01 2007 00:14 ram wrote:Show nested quote +On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote: It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.
I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them. You just need 2 mics =) Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now
The Plott brothers may do that. I hope they do.
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