Finally done >.<

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=8154863444098766491

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Thanks to you, TL, superiorwolf, exalted, and yakii for the VOD :D.

After watching the commentary, I request two things:

1. FLAME, CRITICISM, NIT-PICKY STUFF, all that jazz

I really want to improve and help start something big

2. Please suggest VODs that you would like me to do commentary on (preferably includes a protoss in the mu, and preferably a recent game as well)

Thanks so much TL.net!

mikeymoo

Canada7170 Posts

May 31 2007 13:53 GMT

"The file you are trying to access is temporarily unavailable."

EDIT: nvm. mine just finished, so i'm watching it!

Return

Ivory Coast859 Posts

May 31 2007 13:56 GMT

i also get the "unavailable " thingy

ATeddyBear

Canada2843 Posts

May 31 2007 14:01 GMT

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mikeymoo

Canada7170 Posts

May 31 2007 14:04 GMT

Interesting VOD choice. Mirror matches are usually kinda difficult to do commentary, at least I would think so.

KizZBG

u gotta skate8152 Posts

May 31 2007 14:06 GMT

I think it would be much easier to follow if you upload your commentaries on Youtube/Google video.

mikeymoo

Canada7170 Posts

May 31 2007 14:12 GMT

Okay, 8 minutes in, I think I see how things are going.

I like the commentary, pvp being a shitty matchup for me, it's nice for me to gain a little insight. Your voice is very calm, collected, and you don't explain what each unit does (GOOD THING). However, I'd like to see more predictions or a little more insight instead of just relaying what's happening on screen.

I like it though. You definitely have your own style.

(More enthusiasm!) I may as well watch a chess match!

Coulthard

Greece3359 Posts

May 31 2007 14:14 GMT

I can't download from Megaupload

Tetsuo_AKIRA

United States38 Posts

May 31 2007 14:17 GMT

YES! An English commentator who is not 12! or explaining scvs! I'll make a list as I watch:

-More confidence in what you're saying, you stutter often. Relax.
-I'm loving the background knowledge
-Good running commentary
-voice is kind of quiet
-No need for "here we see" kind of things, just yell out what is happening! Infact you can drop the We and never use it.
-"and the cannon containment that much has put is not helping very much at all... heh sorry... bad pun... not on purpose" made me laugh
-You go back on your words sometimes
-Good job, I enjoyed it. Good personality.

Last Romantic

United States20667 Posts

May 31 2007 14:23 GMT

#10

It's a bit awkward, start/stop/start/stop a lot. Just try to talk normally. It's not like you're being judged or anything.

It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.

Your voice isn't bad though ^^; and the background at the beginning is nice.

I suppose it's hard to have enthusiasm if you know who wins beforehand. Even so, put in more KOREAN STYLE SHOUTING.

ram

Lithuania602 Posts

May 31 2007 15:14 GMT

#11

On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote:
It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.

I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them.

You just need 2 mics =)

Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now

alpskomleko

Slovenia950 Posts

May 31 2007 18:14 GMT

#12

All slots eternally in use..

Navane

Netherlands2763 Posts

May 31 2007 20:17 GMT

#13

i hate the overenthausiastic shouting which superiorwolf sometimes uses. Everybody here seems te encourage faster and louder talking at exciting moments, but it doenst work if you fake it. Anyone with a little video-gaming history will get the excitement from the game, no need to dance and make large balloons pop and stuff.

Coulthard

Greece3359 Posts

May 31 2007 20:19 GMT

#14

Guys be nice and upload somewhere else

please !!

mcmascote

Brazil1575 Posts

May 31 2007 21:10 GMT

#15

someone upload it to rapidshare please

mikeymoo

Canada7170 Posts

May 31 2007 22:21 GMT

#16

I hit Open instead of Save, as I am running out of room. Sorry.

Seraphim

United States4467 Posts

May 31 2007 23:26 GMT

#17

Would some angel please upload to Youtube or Google?

I dunno why, but both COMPLETELY failed for me!

I tried Youtube 8 times. The progress bar was 100%, but it wouldn't do anything afterwards. >.<.

As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again

.

Me:

Anyway, megaupload was basically my last option >.<

Anyway guys, I'm loving your feedback and am definitely looking foward to making more

Thanks so much, but the only thing i'm lacking is recommendations for VODs

Thanks again, TL!

il0seonpurpose

Korea (South)5638 Posts

May 31 2007 23:31 GMT

#18

Nice overall, yeah your voice was very quiet but you'll get better. People who live close to each other or friends should do a double of trio commentating thing like the real progaming

DeadVessel

United States6269 Posts

June 01 2007 02:25 GMT

#19

what program did you do for doing voice overs?