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On January 16 2012 04:09 Sated wrote: Needs re-writing. Terrible English, especially at the beginning.
I agree actually. Considering how they acquired top players they seem to have a lot of funds (I hope so for the players' sake atleast) but the management isn't incredibly professional. If that changes then I'll be following eS for sure though.
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Very blunt, very transparent, upfront with the team's mistakes. I like that. Good luck in 2012
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Calling Carn's departure a "ban" is weird, but I guess this could be blamed on english not being the writer's native language. At least they're being honest with time and admitting he had to leave because he was lacking results.
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"I will never thank teamliquid for warning us about this con who tried to steal our funds."
you may tho...
:D
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So is eSahara partnering with some team right now in KR for practice purposes?
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cool, a lot of koreans here!
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The grammar is really distracting to the message here - even reading the first two sentences is enough to make me wince. Please get someone to edit this!
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On January 16 2012 04:09 Uquu wrote:Show nested quote +On January 16 2012 04:00 MooMooMugi wrote: Thats Check, Maka, and Hongun on eSahara, the oldschool Prime member trio :D It misses MKP now to fullfill whole (ex)Prime bromance T.T.
Everyone forgets AnyproPrime T.T
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Nice pick up!
But I have to agree with all the posters about the language, these English press releases definitely need some editing. I'm not a native speaker myself but English is my major at the university, so I might be able to help if needed. I have considered minoring in journalism so I wouldn't mind a chance to try stuff like that out.
In any case, good luck in any future endeavors and hopefully 2012 will be a great year for the team!
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Gratz HongUn! Knew it already though
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On January 16 2012 04:12 demitap wrote: somehow i don;t believe that eSahara will last till the end of 2012, after how they acted with cArn i don't see them as a professional team, their managment suck ass
I don't think anyone care if they are professional in your eyes
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That grammar is killing me. And btw: nice publicity stunt with MaddeLisk, doesnt seem to have lasted long.
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Terrible terrible English. For a team who contracts player with the clear intent of making a big splash on the international scene, that's shameful. Especially since the content itself is more interesting than all the PR empty talk other teams have gotten us used to.
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eSahara should hire me, Bilingual ftw!
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This reminds me of the anime DVD's I used to buy on Ebay from Hong Kong. I would always be excited, then watch as the subtitles were broken English and had no idea what was going on.
Congrats on picking up the Prime guys though.
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Well done esahara. That mistake was yea too much xD Sick lineup.
Naama train will change the whole korean's terrans playstyle.
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Euh, well atleast they are bluntly honest or so it seems. Grats on your korean pickup. And good luck in 2012.
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english fixed, imma kick our translator, brb x)
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eSahara is slowly getting a sick-nasty roster. Naama is one of my favorite players plus they have three sick Koreans (HongUn, Maka, and Check), it seems like they're going to have a really deep roster especially if they're partaking in foreign tournaments. Hope these guys keep getting better! ^^
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