This is my first own topic and with it comes my first StarCraft 2 Song. I am a 23y/o swiss (you know, switzerland) guy, and I had some good amounts of clicks in my swiss german tracks (which you probably wouldn't understand).
This is my first english song ever, so don't judge my pronunciation too much
Here it is, because I love StarCraft
I recommend a Headset or Headphones, because I made it in one day and I kinda overtuned the melody.
holy shit. this is one of the best ive heard. i like how you made your own lyrics. temp0 has competition now :D
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k listened to the whole thing...and it is the best sc2 rap I've heard. artosis would like this :D your gonna get spotlighted buddy. thanks for sharing.
love the theme of the song. genuinely impressed right now. I hit the play button with a fair amount of cynicism, but all shades of doubt were dispelled quickly. good job dude you got talent.
Wow.. I really love it, it's got a great lyrical flow and if you know anything about sc2, it's kinda.. I dunno how to explain it.. Umm.. Yeah it's just awesome lol
I love the production quality of it too. Nice work~
Definitely the best SC2 song since release, this was awesome! I love the lyrics and the whole story, the beat is great and the voice sounds professional.
On July 12 2011 06:12 Golgotha wrote: where can we download this?
I will add a download link tommorow. Actually, it's 23:14 here and I'm "out" with friends (actually playing starcraft with them ), and the track is at home
I loved all of it except the voice, no offence! excellent song! your voice just seem the greatest for this in my personal opinion! going on my playlist for sure tho! Thanks!
This is really good, but I think that the song could have benefited by improved meter and/or rhyming, not that it had to. It felt a bit too out of place, like (non-rhyming) freestyling for my taste, but everything else was really good.
Gonna be honest, I didn't care for it all that much. I can't really explain it, but something about yhe lyrics rubbed me the wrong way. It just seemed like (truthfully) a dumb scenario for me to hear in a rap, if that makes any sense.
I can see that you have a lot of talent and potential, though. If/when you make another rap, I expect to be amazed. That's why you shouldn't take my negative response to mean that I'm dismissive of your production; indeed, I eagerly await your next work to see how you cam improve.
I honestly thought it would be something really cheap. Well, let's be honest, it's no pro production, it still smells of amateurism, but not that much!
Amazing job, I came here with really low expectations, but this is definitely one of the best SC2 songs if not the best good work hope to see more to come.
That is very good really. The only thing I don't like is the flow on the ''I,I,I'' parts. I'd like to hear this voiced by tempo, I think his flow is more suited for stuff like this.
Okay, so people are saying it is really good. And it is. But your lyrics feel like a rough draft. They need a lot of work. The general gist behind them is okay, but your word choice is poor. I suppose it is okay because English isn't your first language, but that is my only criticism. Continue making good songs.
You sung this pretty well, but the lyrics weren't great. However, keep going, I liked listening to this and didn't feel like I was wasting my time, unlike some other songs.
Thank you all for your feedbacks, I'm happy that someone pointed out the negative stuff. I don't like the hook not so much neither (I got lazy after three to four hours of working on the song right there :D) and will refine the lyrics next time a bit more.
It's still really awesome that so much of you like it.
On July 12 2011 17:39 3xiLe wrote: im only pointing this out because im a musician and im as nit picky as hell, but, the I I I bit of the chorus seems a bit shakey, but the rest is EXCELLENT.
Yeah, I got lazy there, the chorus would have needed more work on it, I will do better in the next song
On July 12 2011 17:39 3xiLe wrote: im only pointing this out because im a musician and im as nit picky as hell, but, the I I I bit of the chorus seems a bit shakey, but the rest is EXCELLENT.
Yeah, I got lazy there, the chorus would have needed more work on it, I will do better in the next song
It's still great overall regardless of that, I wouldn't worry too much.
Oh my god! I will play this next time we cast a cup inbetween games. I don't even think the video could have been done any better, because the story is so nice and sad that it would just be ruined by anything else.
On July 12 2011 18:48 NicoLoco wrote: Oh my god! I will play this next time we cast a cup inbetween games. I don't even think the video could have been done any better, because the story is so nice and sad that it would just be ruined by anything else.
On July 12 2011 06:12 Golgotha wrote: where can we download this?
I will add a download link tommorow. Actually, it's 23:14 here and I'm "out" with friends (actually playing starcraft with them ), and the track is at home
@ all thanks for all your great feedback. Because almost everyone told me to keep it up, I'm already writing a new song.
I hope to get it done sometimes this weekend or next week. I'll open up a new thread for the song (if I'm allowed to do that) or you can subscribe to my channel (I only started working on it, because I'm a Web Designer in non-starcraft world I will soon make it prettier).
EPT
At least not in sc2 term lol
