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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
Issue number four of Random is up: "Stim Packs.. a gateway drug?" -> http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/7 (Idea thanks to IntoTheWow!) ![[image loading]](http://vilegaming.com/datas/resources/comics/cmc7-Stim_packs_a_gateway_drug.jpg) Recent issues.. Random / Issue #3: "Real DT Harass" http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/6 Random / Issue #2: "The Cloth!" http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/4 Random / Issue #1: "Micro.. Polo" http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/3 Meet the creators: http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/credits Submit an idea: http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/idea | ||
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shavingcream66
United States1219 Posts
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SK.Testie
Canada11084 Posts
that was cute ;p | ||
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Grobyc
Canada18410 Posts
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IntoTheWow
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SayaSP
Laos5494 Posts
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koreakool
United States334 Posts
what does the 22 come from? | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
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anch
United States5457 Posts
 took me a second to realize the joke after reading the title and seeing the dt. | ||
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TYL
Philippines116 Posts
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azndsh
United States4447 Posts
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Avius
Iraq1796 Posts
On November 24 2008 17:57 anch wrote: sick dt > took me a second to realize the joke after reading the title and seeing the dt. same but it was really good, keep it up! | ||
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Texas
Germany2388 Posts
On November 24 2008 15:40 Spartan wrote: I will keep all releases in this central thread from now on for easier access and less spamming of the forum. didnt u make 13975 "central threads" about ur comics and website already? some nice drawings | ||
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MasterReY
Germany2708 Posts
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_Grazze_
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Nytefish
United Kingdom4282 Posts
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alffla
Hong Kong20321 Posts
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a-game
Canada5214 Posts
On November 24 2008 20:09 Texas wrote: didnt u make 13975 "central threads" about ur comics and website already? some nice drawings yeah his last comic topic said it was going to be a central thread too, in fact it looks like he just copied the text from it and reposted it with the additional comics. but this comic was funny so i'm sure we can overlook it. nice comic chris shuquillo edit: oh and nice idea by ITW edit: haha i didn't notice the DT peeking over the bush the first time | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On November 24 2008 20:09 Texas wrote: didnt u make 13975 "central threads" about ur comics and website already? some nice drawings This is only the second one. The reason why it is a new one is because this is an older account of mine that I got back thanks to the helpful admins. This one: http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/profile.php?user=Spartan Old one: http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/profile.php?user=Spartan[nK] | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
Another really short strip idea would be an empty white frame with the text saying.. "Can you spot the Dark Templar?" Then the next white frame would say.. "Neither can we." | ||
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Deify
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Fontong
United States6454 Posts
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Tensai176
Canada2061 Posts
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Mastermind
Canada7096 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On November 25 2008 06:18 Mastermind wrote: The dt doesnt stand out enough. It took me awhile to notice it, and then once my slow brain kicked in I lol'd. DTs are supposed to be stealthy, yes? | ||
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zOula...
United States898 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On November 25 2008 06:51 zOula... wrote: when i first saw the title of #3 i imagined a dt in a work setting saying some sexually harassing remarks to a female co-worker :-P nice improvements since 1 and 2 I like that idea. | ||
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andiCR
Costa Rica2273 Posts
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bioboyAT
Austria1765 Posts
didn't get it at first but then when i saw the dt it was even more lol | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On November 25 2008 07:34 never_toss wrote: haha funnty... though you should fix this a little by making the silhouette of the dt a tad blurry somewhere Yea that was the original idea, but somehow it got left out on accident.  | ||
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Falcynn
United States3597 Posts
On November 25 2008 06:18 Mastermind wrote: haha, I didn't even notice the DT at all, but I still got it (well...mostly due to the title The dt doesnt stand out enough. It took me awhile to notice it, and then once my slow brain kicked in I lol'd.  )but yeah, definitely a big improvement. The punchline was a lot clearer and you didn't try to add anything you didn't need. | ||
cgrinker
United States3824 Posts
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Xeris
Iran17695 Posts
there are enough links to vilegaming or whatever your site is in your posts to fill a cargo plane. | ||
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Xusneb
Canada612 Posts
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Cambium
United States16368 Posts
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Liquid`Nazgul
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HanN00b
Germany1441 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
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relaxxl
Japan78 Posts
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BroOd
Austin10833 Posts
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InfeSteD
United States4658 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On December 07 2008 21:15 relaxxl wrote: The art is very good, but they stories and dialogue are a bit clumsy. For instance, in the second comic, you left allied vision on which makes no sense, the protoss would see the mines. Also in the 3rd one its kind of hard to tell what's going on until you read the tiny little "grab" by her butt. And the first one goes on too long and the premise just isn't funny. Yea, we made a few mistakes. With practice/time I assure you that the comics will get better. It is too late to change the allied vision part since everyone has already seen it. | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/7 | ||
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Frits
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sixghost
United States2096 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
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Pika Chu
Romania2510 Posts
Haha, i liked this one. | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
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Spartan
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vx70GTOJudgexv
United States3161 Posts
I had missed these - the 2nd and 3rd were cute too. First one I still don't really get... | ||
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Duke
United States1106 Posts
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Cu(oCo)
Italy358 Posts
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ShaperofDreams
Canada2492 Posts
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Amber[LighT]
United States5078 Posts
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IntoTheWow
is awesome32281 Posts
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AcrossFiveJulys
United States3612 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On October 26 2009 09:50 IntoTheWow wrote: I was also the one that PM'd you the idea for this one :p Oh, that's right! Haha, thanks. On October 26 2009 10:20 AcrossFiveJulys wrote: The comics are great visually, but the punchlines seem forced and badly executed. For example, in issue #4, the idea is decent, but unfortunately stim packs do exactly the opposite of what's depicted in the comic: they increase aggression and adrenaline for the marines, rather than make them see enemies as cute playful creatures. You can't just go against what the lore is commonly known to be in order to fit a funny idea. All in all, I feel like the amount of effort being put into the storyline and captions is like 1% of the effort being put into the drawings, and this ruins them for me. Chill, man. | ||
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F[5]aLaMaT
United States71 Posts
http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=104319 | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
There's probably going to be another long delay before the next issue though. We're currently working on a big project that involves his art, which is this: http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=100722 | ||
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iloveHieu
United States1919 Posts
The drawing is nice because it's not Spartan's, and the punch lines suck because it's his. | ||
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
That ship sailed a long time ago, sorry. And I hate to break it to you, but I didn't write those punchlines. | ||
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